The Pet Beast Transformed, and I Led the Beast-Controlling World Askew

Give yourself a five-star [shy] The protagonist's setting only has the memory and spiritual consciousness of cultivating immortality, and the world does not support his cultivation of immortality. He is just an ordinary person without any superpowers. It's normal to be oppressed in the early stages. The plot is: I start my counterattack by teaching my pet beasts to become immortals, and then they upgrade and become stronger and take a different path. This is a normal routine. I didn't set up a system or anything. It's definitely impossible to crush them right from the start. [Almost crying] Suppression, foreshadowing, awakening, growth, invincibility. This is the rhythm of the novel. Big brothers and big sisters, stop giving low marks when you show your superiority. [Ask for attention][Ask for attention]

Not bad, very exciting, another direction

Hmm... A loose immortal... Has a spiritual stone but doesn't cultivate immortality?

Let's toast to the east wind and be calm together. Weeping poplars and purple moss hang to the east of Luocheng. We always join hands and travel around the world. Gathering and separation are painful and hurried, and this hatred is endless. This year's flowers are more red than last year's. It's a pity that the flowers will be better next year. Who knows?

The whole book has only 158 chapters. The rhythm of the story is still very good, and the context is also very clear. It is a rare good article. It felt like it ended too hastily and felt a bit unfinished. Comment and like, I hope the author can produce better works.

The writing is good, very beautiful, very wonderful [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ] [ smile ]

The front part is still okay. There were very few novels of this type before. When it comes to the back part, the author is too free to express himself. Anyway, there are past lives as traps, and anything can be done. It feels like the Doraemon Beast Control version, without any foreshadowing, there are all kinds of treasures. If you follow the way you wrote it at the beginning, it will look very good.

Author, this is a good idea. I like to read [Admiration][Adoration] but I hope to write a perfect result. Don't be a lousy author. Come on! [Smile][smile][please update][top post]

The story is exciting, with climaxes one after another, but the rhythm is still lacking. The overall writing feels rushed and the writing power is insufficient. If you carve it out more carefully, it might be the next phenomenal masterpiece.

Very good, keep up the good work

Is it parked? Okay?

It's okay. I really like the author. Come on.

The subject matter is good, but then it is bland and has no interesting or special points to attract people. Even if it is demanding, book lovers who can't put their minds aside will find it a bit toxic. In fact, I should have given it 3.5 Stars, but unfortunately I didn't. Please encourage the author.

That's great, don't be influenced by those trolls. The author said that newbies are still picky and picky, so you can do your best. It's very well written, please update [laughs]

It's a very good book, but the rating is a bit low. Please check it out.

Hahaha, very good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, not bad, hahaha

Some holes have not been filled yet, and it suddenly ends [laughing and crying]

I think it's pretty good-looking, but I haven't updated it for more than ten days [crying]

The book is good. Come on, the author. Don't be a eunuch.

It's very beautiful. Why is the score so low? Is it just a random score?

A good book, keep up the good work

Wonderful, beautiful. How many more books are this good?

This book is well written and worth reading

It's very well written, keep up the good work and keep an eye on you. Don't stop updating [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Very exciting. Very appetizing! Come on Ollie

The plot is rich, the plot is interesting, the subject matter is novel, highly recommended

It ended too quickly

Nice book, clear thoughts