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"Da Wa's Cultivation of Immortality" This article tells the story of Da Wa's unexpected encounter with the world of cultivating immortals. Let's start the journey of cultivating immortals from now on! The author has a good idea and writes very seriously. Come on!

I have read more than 20 chapters. Except that the author is not very divided into paragraphs, everything else is very good. The storyline is also good and does not drag on. Come on

Come on, encouragement to new authors. Everything is difficult at the beginning.

I was too busy mumbling the name Da Wa in it [cover face][cover face][cover face]The writing is pretty good.

After reading a little, the article is good and the title is very simple. Some of the suggestions made by the author must have been corrected after listening to the opinions. Although I don't read male videos, I decided to read them because the author updated so many chapters. The male protagonist travels to another world and has been training since he was young. As long as there are no surprises, I can continue watching it, haha.

It seems to be okay so far, and the progress of training is okay, but there are no scenes of practicing outside and fighting with people.

It's so beautiful, it's really nice to see inside me, oh no, it's inside my heart [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Not bad [thinking] Keep up the good work

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very nice! Dawa updates quickly! One gift, one more chapter! Very awesome!

Five-star praise arrangement

@Ah I'll give you five stars.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on together

Come on, author! Well written!

Five stars, no need to say more [get it][get it][get it]

These pants are for the scientist girl