Daming: I Am a Firearms Designer

It's well written, just don't let it end badly, and try to update it as soon as possible.

It has a unique writing method and style, the story is very compact, and the text is very smooth and smooth. It shows all the skills that a time traveler should have without leaving any trace. It is worth reading.

I would like to give the author a suggestion: create a long-term civilian character, and see the changes in the Ming Dynasty from the perspective of civilians after each time the time traveler makes reforms, and give more ink to grow, so that the changes in the macro and micro aspects of the name change will be more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.

The old book "The Super Arms Dealer of the Tang Dynasty" has 3 million words and can be killed by huge fat. I hope everyone will like this book. If there are any omissions or mistakes, you are welcome to correct me.

It's good to read. It's more interesting than reading a history book. You can learn more about the heroes of that era. It's great!

The plot is compact and has climaxes one after another. It makes people want to read it in one sitting without putting it down! The author has great literary talent and speaks volumes! Especially the description of the human heart of the characters is even more penetrating! Thanks 🙏to the author for letting me read a rare and good book!

I came from Douyin. There are relatively few written by Zhu Youxiao. They are quite beautiful and the writing is good.

The writing is very thoughtful, and the narrative of things is very rhythmic. I hope the author will continue to update more.

This book can be regarded as the best work among the time-travel literature writing about the end of Ming Dynasty! Not really the pinnacle. The content is compact, the plot is tortuous, the contradictions are prominent, and the ideas are reasonable. In particular, it is written that foreigners stole our Yongle Ceremony and then caused the explosion of Western science and technology. I personally agree with this point. Because I think so too. Technology doesn't just thrive for no reason. It can only be said that our technology encountered the soil suitable for technological development in the West, and then it got out of hand.

It is a book that reads very smoothly. The historical images of some characters in it have been rewritten in a reasonable way, and it really looks like that. Occasionally, I have the illusion that history is really like this.

Don't leave it unfinished, just keep writing along this line of thinking. Very pretty

Persimmon products must be high-quality products The biggest feature of Persimmon's book is that everyone is real and has a strong sense of immersion. I wanted to write a post-reading review, but I didn't have any ink in my stomach. A single sentence can go around the world [crying]

The pacing is good, and it's more logical than the arms dealer's logic. The plot is okay so far, but as a reminder, it's best not to touch some controversial characters (such as Yuan Chonghuan), who was disgusted by the author of several revealing books.

A very funny book, I like it, I like it very much!

It's wonderful, and the comments from the author and book friends make the novel even more funny and humorous. However, I suggest that book lovers who are interested in this book should read it after getting fatter. The current amount is still too small.

Anyway, it's a very uplifting book and well worth reading.

It's okay, the plot is humorous with a little bit of gags and so on. It is basically consistent after 3 years and less than 4 years. Although it is a bit exaggerated, and some plots are very taken for granted and the core of the events is too simple, which seems to be a little lacking in writing. However, after all, the time travel novel, there are also attempts at layout and so on. Overall, I can still accept it after reading it. Many little characters have not forgotten and I can also mention that it can be seen that the author still has an outline step by step, and some of the characters are also remarkable. The final ending is said to be another book written by the co-author. This kind of ending varies from person to person, so I won't comment. To sum up, my personal evaluation is: watchable. I hope the author will continue to work hard and put more effort into the plot, such as laying out some foreshadowing or reversing things to make the plot more exciting [eating melon] Oh, by the way, I would like to add that the literal meaning of the title of the book cannot be said to have nothing to do with the content. It can also be said that it has nothing to do with it [laughs evilly]

It's pretty good. You can take a look at it when you have free time.

At least among the historical time travel novels, this one made me the happiest to read. The others were always frustrating and not enjoyable at all. However, you are a time traveler. You get angry every day and exhaust your body. Moreover, during the Little Ice Age, when the weather was cold, you should use the "Jenny Spinning Machine" to make a large number of cheap clothes, and you did not take any measures such as making "anthracite" for heating! If you're not familiar with history, don't scold me.

Fine! First of all, this time-travel novel is set in the late Ming Dynasty after all. Many events are based on a large number of official historical facts, and it can also be used as a rough timeline, so that people will not feel confused when reading it. Secondly, the demise of the Ming Dynasty is believed to be a "difficulty" for many bloody readers. Reading this novel can also provide some psychological comfort.

The writing is very to my liking. The author Feng Changbang should work hard. Don't be a coward. If you like it, just accept it. After all, we are in ancient times. In ancient times, productivity was low, women's status was not high, and they had to get married and have children early.

Literary talent, remarkable, reasonable

The content is substantial, without any nonsense to make up the word count, and the outline is novel and worthy of recommendation [Like]

After reading Chapter 195, I found two major drawbacks. One was that I went out to have fun before I even sat down, but fortunately, there were some interesting plot points later on, so I could keep reading. The second one is that there is a disheveled man in the harem with his concubine in the same room (even though he is a brother-in-law, but it is still too ridiculous.) I really couldn't bear it and I decided to withdraw it. The four stars are for the author's writing ability, which is smooth and doesn't care about the poisonous points I mentioned. It is still watchable and is considered good on Tomato. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Overall, it's good, but the pace is a bit not tight enough. The layout is bigger and the story can be divided into several branches. With Zhu Youxiao as the core, he developed his advantages as a time traveler from military, political, cultural, economic and scientific aspects.

Yes, it can be seen that the author has a profound historical foundation. The use of historical facts is perfect. The content is ups and downs, fascinating and innovative. The characters can also highlight their personality traits, historical background, and complete explanations of historical knowledge. Yes, a good book

The author's knowledge base and logic in revising and adjusting some historical parts make me bow down! An 18-year-old bookworm, this is the best Ming Dynasty time travel novel I have ever read, bar none! Highly recommended! A lot of content makes me doubt that it is real history, and I really hope that it can be true!

The characterization is delicate, the logic is clear, and the structure is solid. It breaks away from the conventional routine of wearing ancient texts and is interesting. However, some places are still stiff, like the appearance of steam engines. The main soul is the feelings of family and country, rather than personal heroism, which is very attractive. The author has also buried a lot of holes that he has not filled in. I hope he will not forget them later.

The first third is more detailed and feels very good, very good. In the middle of expanding abroad, it seemed a little half-hearted. In the end, we jump directly to the end. Zhu Chongba also comes out and can travel back to modern times. It feels a bit willful. 2025.7.15

A refreshing article with good writing style and three correct views