After Becoming Invincible, I Lost My Goal

This is my favorite kind of invincible novel. I have only seen fighting and killing before. This is the only one that has daily life. I hope there will be more.

It's good to read, very good to read (I read the whole book using two accounts [Chigua]). It's just that after screening out most of the readers in the early stage, there was no traffic, no data, and it couldn't become popular. It fell into a vicious cycle. It's not a problem with the writing and story of the novel [face covering]. After all, readers who click on this book title want to read invincible and refreshing stories, the kind of creation and behind-the-scenes kind (I found this book in this column, Shu Huang Square). This kind of readers don't like daily life, don't like the Holy Mother (every little bit will cause trouble), don't like the protagonist entering the world, and have a very hungry appetite. Moreover, updates are not stable enough, causing readers to keep books, which will also reduce traffic (adding books to the bookshelf and not reading them is regarded as abandoned books) The number of chapters in the book. It must have been a long time since the debut. There is a high probability that it will not be popular again [face covering]. Most authors (not for love) have already cut the book here. [Blowing a kiss] However, I still support the author to continue writing and just practice writing. I personally like this style of invincible writing! More speed! Come on new authors! [Love][Working on draft]

This book is very good, so refreshing First of all, regarding the setting of the protagonist, I think the world view is too big, and the author's world view limited to the protagonist is too small. This kind of visual contrast is particularly in line with Shuangwen's line. (After all, if the characters you meet later are of particularly high status, the closer they are to the protagonist than these ordinary planets, the more uncomfortable you will be.) Secondly, the biggest flaw of this article is that the world line progresses too fast. After only experiencing so many things, it has reached the end of the book. There is always a sense of contradiction that it is not finished yet and it ends abruptly (the 12 characters raised by the protagonist have not yet risen, so it is so hasty... In the end, I can't write it anymore, and it is a world showdown. This is an external shortcoming of this article. To put it bluntly, it is too short, and the secret cards are revealed too quickly) Finally, the clue of this book is actually to develop the plot around the change of the protagonist's character. In fact, this change of character is not easy to change. It not only goes to another world and destroys the other world, but also overturns all the ideological realizations about the character that the protagonist has made before (this is an inherent shortcoming of this article) Summary: I personally think this book is very good. If the author can persist, it may be a good masterpiece. It's just a pity that it doesn't provide traffic... (It's easy to lose the motivation to create) The current refreshing article is to satisfy people's mental pressure in real life. It is very suitable for the Mediterranean people. Finally, I wish the author to practice his knowledge well and make his golden mark prosperous. [Blowing kiss] Personal opinion, I don't like to refute (don't spray) [Thinking]

Short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short.

Personally, I think it's okay. Come on, author.

Let's just say brother, I almost thought you were taken off the shelves? It made me flip through the history books I was reading for a long time, but it almost made me cry. I said that the book I had finally found was suddenly gone, but it scared me to death [crying] Isn't the male protagonist's talent the King of Fantasy? I have been searching for this kind of book about this ability in the introduction, and then I can't find it. It scares me to death. At that time, I accidentally deleted a book that was removed from the shelf. I thought it was this one, but in the end I found that it was not added to the bookshelf. I laughed to death. It was really embarrassing.

Very interesting, come on, brother who writes books! [Blowing kiss]

How can I put it, the Fantasy King's ability is indeed awesome, but no matter how awesome it is, it is just a materialization ability that can materialize what people fantasize about. Therefore, this ability will have a prerequisite, whether your body or your spirit can withstand what you want to manifest. Just like words and Dharma, if it exceeds the tolerance range, it will not be realized and at the same time, it will suffer severe backlash and even death. Also, generally speaking, early-stage superpowers cannot retract and release freely. In other words, early-stage fantasy kings should have a very fatal side effect, which is the inability to stop thinking. I feel that this kind of ability cannot be invincible no matter how hard it is. The article also commented that copying this kind of ability should not exceed the upper limit of the ability. Copying is quite logical, but this Fantasy King obviously only considers the advantages. Also, the most incisive thing about the Fantasy King is the word fantasy. In other words, once the owner of the Fantasy King subconsciously takes some abilities for granted, it is no longer a fantasy, that is, the Fantasy King's abilities will temporarily fail, which is absolutely fatal in battle. Therefore, abilities like heal have obviously become abilities that the protagonist subconsciously believes he possesses, and are no longer a fantasy. I have (different from I want to have) is another fatal weakness of Fantasy King. It stands to reason that the owner of the Fantasy King releases different powers every time, so as to avoid the power exerted changing from what I want to have to what I have. It still feels a bit ambiguous. Anyway, it means that the holder of the Fantasy King can only make the ability effective if he understands that the ability he uses is imagined by himself, not owned by himself; and when the holder subconsciously thinks that he has this ability and uses the ability, the ability will be invalid. It's the difference between the subconscious and the conscious. The ability becomes effective when it is engraved in the consciousness, and it becomes ineffective when it is engraved in the subconscious.

It's okay, but it's just a bit of a screening of readers at the front.

At first I thought it was a One Punch Man fanfic. As a result, the protagonist's invincibility is too much, similar to a computer that can write automatically. The protagonist is a person sitting in front of the computer. If I am not satisfied with what you write, I will change it. I can also turn off the computer. Of course, I am looking forward to the next plot and hope you can satisfy me (the protagonist has the strength to do these things, but is afraid of losing his humanity so he doesn't want to do it. He becomes a teacher and teaches a few students in the hope that they can change something). I hope it won't be too harsh later on, and it will be easy and enjoyable. The student author from junior high school should have been able to write more satisfactorily, but it's a pity. If it is just to introduce a villain organization that the protagonist wants to kill, there is no need to have the founder of this organization, which is actually a good thing. But now the outline is almost like this, it's all a drama, the protagonist teaches the students so that they can grow up and then eliminate the villain, and the villain leads the cooperation. Some characters in the hero organization haven't come forward yet, so let's talk about it later. Author update soon

Although it is unfinished, I still have to give it five stars. If the author had not had huge financial problems and had to finish the book in a hurry, this would really be considered a great book, although it is still great now.

After searching for a book for several days, I finally found a better one. Unfortunately, it's not finished. It's very annoying and not enough to read.

This book is very comfortable to read. It is an authentic and invincible text [laughs] I have never lost a fight, and I am very satisfied with it. Being invincible does not lack comfort, and it feels like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. This is exactly what I want to see. What resonates is that the article implements invincibility and mediocrity, does not abuse abilities and does not lack emotion, and writes the protagonist's inner journey. I was amazed [love] Come on, author [learned]

Very good, looks like it suddenly lit up

It's great. The protagonist is also good. I just wish there wasn't a female protagonist.

Okay, I've never seen anything similar. It's pretty good, but it's so little.

The style is very novel, it's actually quite worth watching, but it's a bit short [star]

It's okay. I see that there is a bad point now, but I don't know why the rating is a bit low.

I'll give you a five-star rating for such a low score. Overall, it's pretty good. I read it in one go (I don't really like the level setting).

It's only fifty-three chapters, so that's not promising at all.

After reading it, I can't get enough of it. Now it's five stars. I'm an old fan [eating melon] [laughing]

This is the character of the protagonist that I don't like very much, but I quite like the ability.

[Attention][Attention][Attention][Attention][Attention][Attention][You taste] Not bad, not bad, okay

It's good, but the author is too short. Can there be more?

The book is nice, but it's too short

The content outline is good, but the ending is a bit hasty. The characters are well developed. In the end, I can only say that it has an open ending.

Not bad, at least it's pretty good among the few I've read recently (face covering)

The writing is very good, and a ten-year-old bookworm said it was very interesting~(￣▽￣~)~

After watching it for a long time, it suddenly ended, haha

It was quite sudden. It disappeared as soon as I saw the rise.