Yunhai Xiuxian Family Biography

Although the writing style is young, it is still spirited. I hope that I will continue to maintain my own style in the future and not follow those routines. Although the pace is very slow, I think it is very reasonable. It is not a destiny child who must have a lot of accidents around him. Come on (and I hope there will be no female protagonist. Watch the author write a female protagonist) Regarding the character's appearance, I feel that the author should not be able to write emotional scenes well, and don't force it. After all, it is common to write poorly. Don't make the icing on the cake a big failure. After all, it is for cultivating immortals, not romance. Let's keep it as it is. The protagonist can concentrate on practicing and improving himself. ε(○´∀｀)з)

Thank you all for taking the time to comment and point out my shortcomings.

The writing is good. The setting of spiritual roots finally satisfied me for once. The length and unevenness of the five spiritual roots are finally determined. The plot is a bit bland and could be more lively, but the most dissatisfying thing for readers is that the update speed is too slow. I have been raising it for almost a year and only have 60 chapters. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not do this. It is easy to burn oil [laughter] [laughter]

It's good and interesting. I like novels about upgrading with my family.

Wow, author, what's wrong with you? Updates are so unstable? And the only one that was updated was only one. I thought you didn't update it for half a month or more than a month, but you only came up with a dozen pictures at a time? In the end, I just added one. I wonder if you are going to take it off the shelves or stop updating it completely. Also, can you stop forcing the protagonist to improve his cultivation and strength? This looks so awkward! The whole family can't always be carried by the protagonist, right? It's okay to give an old man to the protagonist. It's not hard to accept. It makes the protagonist feel like he's trying to undermine his own strength. Although it won't affect the protagonist's foundation because of the plot, I always feel that I read it as if it was a cool story. It should be a slow story about the family! And shouldn't a family be a group portrait? Now that the protagonist is still young, he should let the elders and elders in the family advance to the golden elixir first! Why do you keep forcing the protagonist to form a golden elixir first? This is really like a cool article. Logically speaking, the protagonist is at most a little higher in cultivation and strength than his friends. However, the result is not that big. The protagonist's friends are only in the early stage of foundation building with the protagonist's help. They don't even have foundation building. The protagonist has already entered the late stage of foundation building. It's too big! Can you make the protagonist more stable? This is a family comic. Why is it written like this if it's not a cool novel? This extremely powerful plot force has been pushing the protagonist to develop rapidly. Won't his state of mind be unable to keep up? I hope the author can read my comment, take a good look at it, and then write a follow-up. Alas, things are not so good later on. The mysterious tower grandfather is still there, the spirit beast is the hidden fifth-level cub, and then there is another surname: Li. It feels like he has been pushing the protagonist forward. What do the ancestors and elders in the family do for food? The updates are also intermittent, with three to five chapters a month, which has successfully lowered the rating.

I always see a man with two parents and a little sister. I hope my relatives can accompany him on this journey. The quality of a work depends not only on literary creation, but also on the author's outlook on life, worldview, and grasp of human nature. I hate that kind of "wow wow, inappropriate dialogue". Come on!

It's okay, I can keep watching! Come on!

This book describes the feelings of family unity and friendship, but it also has some shortcomings. The protagonist's spiritual consciousness is so high that he can choose some spiritual attack spells.

Very nice, worth a look

Ya'er, can you mark the punctuation marks correctly? Do you know how much your missing periods or multiple quotation marks will affect my reading? [Laughing] I've finished listening to it, it's pretty good. If you want to read the kind of cool articles that you can't beat, forget it. There are too few updates. Three updates a day is not too much. What you wrote was gone in half an hour after I listened to it at double speed.

This book is quite well written!

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

Beautiful, very beautiful

It feels very good. I hope the author can update it to more than 1,000 chapters. Thank you.

Come on, the writing is beautiful and to your liking.

Keep up the good work, but there are some things that don't make sense. The content is quite exciting, come on!

Looking better lately

It feels like the author is writing seriously! At least it's not pasted! From being a jerk to now, my writing is getting better and better!

A very good book, I sincerely recommend it to everyone! ! !

Very good, 5 stars!

Okay😁, come on, I'm optimistic about you

What a cheat ☞Don't turn it up

Not bad, at least the author listened to others' advice

It's really well written, I hope it won't collapse later.

I hope it can be updated on time and faster. I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Come on, come on, come on

The writing is pretty good, keep it up!

Okay, okay, nothing unusual. You can enter the trap, dear readers.

Come on, burst out two more.

Good job keep up the good work. .