Across the Red Chamber: Daiyu Has an Involuntarily Older Brother

Let's just say that this is my favorite book in the Dream of Red Mansions series. Not only does it save Daiyu, but the Lin family uncle doesn't feel any disobedience at all. Instead, he thinks these siblings are really fun. You know the brain-boosting emperor? I am now in a state where I can think of it but have no choice but to hand it over, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Who can give me a pair of hands? I really want to draw it!

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To be honest, I haven't seen a novel in Tomato for a long time with such a relevant plot and language. The characters are very fleshed out and the plot is reasonable. It is a second-generation novel about Red Mansions that can be understood even without having read Red Mansions. I hope the author can always maintain this style and wish the author

Nice! Recommended. When I first saw it, I was not interested in it because I don't really read Dream of Red Mansions fanfiction, so I guess it's a fanfic. The second time I saw it was a double male protagonist, I clicked in. After looking at a few pictures, I found it really good-looking!

It must be five stars! ! If I give less than one, it would be disrespectful to the author's efforts! So pretty! I have read many Red Mansions fan novels, but this is my favorite one. Big cheers for the author!

The protagonist's IQ is online throughout the whole process, not brainless, not a holy mother, but slow and warm, full of sugar and no knife, feel free to use it [shy][shy][laughing][laughing]

Very nice. It's just that the more I watch emotional dramas, the less I know how to describe them. The character design, environment, Lu's identity, etc. All add up to something a bit awkward. It's a personal feeling Lu was a bit curious about Lin and was possessive. Lin accepted Lu helplessly and indifferently.

I really like this book. Maybe it's for personal reasons. I don't like the other male protagonist (Qingzhou) very much because I think he's too controlling. I don't like him very much. I'm sorry, but the characters written by the author are all very good. I wanted to quit because of Qingzhou's control a few times, but I wanted to see Zhiyuan and then stayed. I felt so entangled. But the author's writing style is really good. I really like what the author wrote. Keep up the good work. [Like] [Like]

It's very interesting, the protagonist is very delicate, kind but not holy, knows how to advance and retreat, understands etiquette, and has his own methods. It blends well with the red building. The author's writing is also very good! ! ! ! !

To be honest, the plot of this book is very interesting, but I felt that there was a sense of separation between Lin Zhiyuan in the early stage and Lin Zhiyuan in the later stage, which made me a little disappointed. The one thing missing is the emotional drama. I have never figured out why Lin Zhiyuan fell in love with Lu Qingzhou [Thoughts] In the later stage, I felt that Lin Zhiyuan's character had collapsed. He gave me the feeling in the early stage that he didn't like Lu Qingzhou. The things Lu Qingzhou did in the early stage were also incomprehensible to me, which led to the relationship between the two of them.

Come on! This is the first novel with two male protagonists about Dream of Red Mansions that I have read. The more I read it, the more addictive I became [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's very interesting [smile] It's just better to consider the historical background. After all, many of the protagonist's poems are from before the Qing Dynasty, which is a bit out of place. Or the author could mark it as an imaginary version of the Red Mansion [smile] [smile]

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! ! ! I don't know why, when I read the article and listen to the book, there are many places where I can empathize, and when Lin Zhiyuan was sick and weak, maybe because I was not in good health at the time, I felt uncomfortable when I heard Lin Zhiyuan was uncomfortable. Then when I saw the parts of the emotional line between Lin Zhiyuan and Lu Qingzhou, I wanted to cry. I think the content and plot of the article are really good, it is my favorite, there are no twists and turns of misunderstandings, and heart-breaking plot... The writing style is very good, the human world is sophisticated, the officialdom is popular, and the court officials are appointed. Although I can't understand it, it is very awesome! Also, I think the description of God is very good and very divine! Okay, it just looks good Also, the structure is huge, love and hate are clear, caring for the people, not afraid of power, sympathetic to the bottom, and you will also see the good things about the upper class. Alas... I forgot, this is a book, but such an environment is really desirable. Many similar novels often write about women's rights. Every time I see these, I can't help but sigh, the road is long, and it is still in such a feudal environment, many things are difficult, 😭 But watching the people in the book change those situations little by little, I feel honored, and I feel relieved because of their little success. I can't summarize the layout of the book, or describe the author's literary talent. In short, it's just beautiful.

This book is really beautiful. When you first read it, you will think it is a systematic book about rebirth. But when you look at the back, you will find that it is the experience of a god descending to earth and going through tribulations. And I think this book is very good. He really explains why a god descends to earth and goes through tribulations. There is a sentence in the book that I like very much, that is, loving your lover will always be better than the common people in the world. This is the quality that a god should really have. It is not like those ancient puppet shows of gods nowadays, where a god can subvert the world for the sake of his lover. When he has this idea, he is no longer worthy of being called a god.

This is so fun, this interaction is so interesting, I can even imagine the scene ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*) It's just that Zhiyuan is so annoying →_→ and also pitiful (இωஇ ) And the author remembers to take good care of his health (don't be like Zhiyuan, it's so distressing (இωஇ)) so that you can have more! ✧(◍˃ᗜ˂◍)✩

I think the author is very good in terms of writing style, but this, um, dual male protagonists, this scene is really hard to see. I can only see Lin Zhiyuan, his, this kind of thing is very, um, hard to describe. I am Lin Zhiyuan, his mind is very delicate, and in terms of political strategy, I think it is very nice.

It's a very good book, and the foreshadowing and plotting are spot on. There are a few typos, but it's harmless. I think many people are saying that the emotional line is too slow. In fact, in terms of the basic mood of Dream of Red Mansions, this emotional line is just right. As long as you calm down and slowly experience it, you can taste some charm, at least that's the case for me.

I have read Chapter 58. I like the plot very much. I give it five stars. I will talk about the shortcomings. Personally, I feel that everyone has a feeling of liking for the male protagonist. Moreover, the characters are a bit complicated and the age is not clear. When I read it, I always imagined him as a young man, but the scene at that time should be that of a teenager. The author did not express it very clearly. And I still don't know who the other male protagonist is. It was about a reunion but I had no impression of him before. In summary, it is like the kind of story about Long Aotian who is charming [shy]

Wow wow wow, I really like Sui Sui Baby, and the author's great descriptions of characters make every character vivid and flesh-and-blood. I really love it. Reading the author's articles made me discover a lot of interesting ancient poems. I even went to look them up and memorized them. It's great, hehehe. Thank you to the author! [Top post][top post]

The author's writing style is very good. This is the first time I read such a satisfying Red Mansion fanfic. I really like the character of the protagonist [Admiration]. He is strong, independent, and understands people's hearts, but his health is a bit bad. It's the type I like [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's beautiful, super beautiful. I like it. The author will update it a lot₍•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎

It looks good, I recommend it, and I feel that this is the original intention of The Red Mansion, just for family and country, not for love. If it is sincere, it will not be let down. We shouldn't just be trapped in the kind of intrigues and intrigues in the back house, and then be miserable and scattered to death.

Recommended, the setting is novel, the characters are full, the emotional line is not brainless, the plot line is logically clear, and there are highlights, but it is a bit messy in the later stage. The time-traveling system of ancient times also involves the reincarnation of immortals. I watched it in a fog, and felt that the subsequent plot was a bit bad. The emotional line did not make sense, and the characters were a bit split. Overall, it was okay. Four stars, recommended [Chigua]

The plot line is very good, and the emotions are flowing in a long and flowing way. It is still very touching. There are some typos. I feel that there are too many sub-CPs in the book, which feels a bit deliberate. Some plots feel that the logic is a little illogical, but it is still very good.

It's beautiful, especially the part above the court, but... (Minor spoilers, it's not a big deal, please don't be nervous) Personally, I am a little uncomfortable with the emotional scene between Lin Zhiyuan and Lu Qingzhou, Lin Daiyu and Lin Zhiqing after they went to the next world, but it is not a serious issue, it is just a slight flaw that will make you frown slightly after thinking about it. It can be ignored if you don't think about it.

This book is amazing, very awesome Another fairy wife found in the Tomato Wave Red Mansion + Shuang Nan + Strategy (Chaotang, not very brain-burning) + Righteousness Really fascinating The plot is smooth and the writing is beautiful The character creation is also good There is only one thing to point out: sometimes the comma after a person's name or title is unnecessary. It may be the author's preference and does not affect reading very much. In short, the flaws do not hide the virtues If you don't like having a deputy CP other than Qin Wen, you don't need to watch the extras. Could the last chapter be a preview of the next book? (I haven't read the next one yet)

The author's writing style is very good, and the character's personality is also well developed. I like Zhiyuan very much and feel sorry for him. But I don't really like the protagonist Gong (maybe because I have only read about a hundred chapters). I feel that the protagonist Gong is too strong and possessive. I don't seem to feel how much respect and love he has for Zhiyuan... I feel sorry for Zhiyuan.

This book feels really good. When I saw the people in Dream of Red Mansions, I felt like I had traveled from Detective Conan to the world of Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf. It was a real breakthrough. Dream of Red Mansions, I also have a copy at home. This book is the best I have ever read, a book about Dream of Red Mansions [Like] [Like] Beautiful! The author must work hard! I will definitely read the new book [makes a face]

Overall, it's pretty good. The first part of this book is mainly about the protagonist's revenge and scheming. The other protagonist who is a little bit poisonous at the beginning is possessive and paranoid like a gangster. But after reading the whole book, I feel that I have witnessed the growth of one person and the emotional change of another person. The later part is also a bit sweeter. If you are interested, you can take a look.

It looks good, it looks good, I especially want to grab Zhiyuan