A boy from a mountain village was accepted into the Immortal Cultivation Sect and started as an outer disciple. With this status, how did he gain a foothold in the sect and join the ranks of Immortal Cultivators with mediocre qualifications, thus becoming proud of the Three Realms.
Reader comments
I feel like the protagonist seems to be short-sighted. He doesn't know anything about common sense. He seems to only know how to practice and doesn't understand the world of immortality. He has been practicing for many years. Is the author always writing about novices? Or are you, the author, really short-sighted?
The writing style needs to be improved, and the story frame is a bit awkward. I feel that many authors of the common sense of cultivating immortals are very unfamiliar. Some parts give people a completely random and far-fetched plot direction. Many things and places are not delicate enough and seem to be dealt with in one stroke. The only thing worthy of praise is that the overall plot direction is concise and clear, but it is also a bit confusing to watch.
Rubbish, like running water, I read twenty chapters and didn't fight once
I can't stand it anymore and I'm leaving... Kindergarten kids can write better than you
I feel like the protagonist seems to be short-sighted. He doesn't know anything about common sense. He seems to only know how to practice and doesn't understand the world of immortality. He has been practicing for many years. Is the author always writing about novices? Or are you, the author, really short-sighted?
The writing style needs to be improved, and the story frame is a bit awkward. I feel that many authors of the common sense of cultivating immortals are very unfamiliar. Some parts give people a completely random and far-fetched plot direction. Many things and places are not delicate enough and seem to be dealt with in one stroke. The only thing worthy of praise is that the overall plot direction is concise and clear, but it is also a bit confusing to watch.
Rubbish, like running water, I read twenty chapters and didn't fight once
I can't stand it anymore and I'm leaving... Kindergarten kids can write better than you
Worthy of praise
It's okay, keep reading
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