The Invincible Path That Begins in Perfect World

Updates are coming very quickly. I don't know if the author is trying to achieve the word count target, but I hope it can provide a quality that meets the reader's time and effort. Whatever attitude the author used to write the book, I will use that attitude to review it. First of all, judging from the writing style, the amount of information in the text is too low. A lot of useless words are piled up, and this pile up is still unclear. If others are laying bricks by piling words, then the author's bricks have not been baked yet. Authors with poor writing skills seem to be aware that they should read more to improve their literary quality. Many sentences in the article don't make sense, and it feels like they haven't been polished at all. Secondly, judging from the dialogue of the characters, it is not clear how foreigners communicate on a daily basis. It can be written in the same way as ordinary people in China speak. If you insist on extracting the dialogue flavor of a Western masterpiece, it will really make you feel like you are in a three-bedroom apartment. From the plot point of view, I don't know if it is due to the limitation of college education. The author's works are full of scenes of the emperor plowing the land with golden hoes. Read more books to improve your horizons. Vision has a great influence on the words flowing out of a person's pen. This novel is completely self-absorbed, does not reflect any phenomenon at all, has no thinking at all, and does not take care of the readers' thoughts at all. It just purely and strongly expresses the author's personal desires, and the entire article is the author's YY. There are merits, but only a little. I hope the author will read more books and improve his horizons. If you don't understand foreigners, write about Chinese people. If you don't understand the vocabulary, practice more. It's better to avoid things you don't understand than to make them up. If you really can't do it, don't write it, otherwise you won't be criticized and you won't be happy.