Pirate: Take a Nurse with You When You Go Out to Fight

It's good-looking. It's rare to see something that doesn't follow the boat and doesn't follow the plot. Where have you been? Come back soon for updates

I really like it. It's not just following the crowd. It has its own story development without too much interference from the original plot. It's not that the original plot is bad, but I've seen too many plot-related ones, and it feels very novel to see this. [Ask for more updates][Top post]

This is the first Pirates fanfic I've read from beginning to end (downloaded to). To be honest, it's really great. 1. The main CP character is well designed and super sweet In the early stage, Bai Su's character design was like an innocent, timid and unexpected wet nurse. In the later stage, she was an elegant legal assistant who built a peaceful society in the pirate world, but she was still a bit dull (especially in terms of emotions). Xiaobai and Ace, two contestants who have been flirting with each other for a long time, really made me feel like I felt when I read romance novels in my early years (there are so many exciting moments). Every kiss made me do sit-ups with excitement. Oh, you two, hurry up and confirm the relationship for me! ! 2. Bold world view and interesting plot The world view of European gods added by the author is well integrated with the original world view of the OP. It does not follow the same rules and the plot is smooth. It's more of a growth story. The protagonist slowly discovers his life experience after time travel, slowly adds to the worldview, and gradually becomes stronger. It doesn't deviate too much from Ace's personal line, but the ending of Blackbeard's episode will definitely change, which is a pity after all. 3. Emotions are smooth and sincere, joyful and non-ooc There are no uncomfortable emotional twists, and neither the CP nor everyone is particularly OOC and they all surround Xiaobai from the beginning. Xiaobai is also recognized by everyone through his own special points. He has a natural and silly attribute but hides a little dark side (...) 4. There is no transitional golden finger or super powerful system. You can explore your own super abilities by yourself, which looks more enjoyable. Although there is a system, it serves as a decoration. Wu is super strong from the beginning, stronger than the protagonist's golden finger. Uncertain later. Xiaobai is (supposedly) a descendant of the mountain god and has the ability to heal and make plants grow. 5. Good writing style The article is not muddled, the emotional description is delicate and does not drag him down, and the characters' reactions are real. Stand out from the crowd of novices, you are Simba! ! (Mist) Burns when it is burning, sweet when it is sweet. The characters have their own characteristics, and the relationship between Xiaobai and Ace really has a sense of cliché. The conflict between the peace that the protagonist lives in the real world and the chaos and corruption in the pirate world is well written, so that it looks very real. Finally: Welcome everyone to read the article together! ! Such a good article, so few people read it, it's really (｀へ´)=3 Also: I hope the author can write more about Xiaobai's infrastructure attributes, which is very charming as a character! !

It looks great, but the author is great. Why are you missing again? Wei Chen has been searching hard for you for nearly several months, but there is still no trace of you. Wei Chen's life is miserable.

I like this kind of independence and not being in a group with the protagonist. Xiaobai and Ace are so sweet. I hope Ace has a different ending. Come on soon! ! !

I like it. It's pretty good among the Pirates fics I've read, but Novice is a bit miserable every time he fights [face covering] In addition, Novice and Ace are very sweet [shy]

Very well written. The plot develops naturally and warmly. Their relationship came naturally and did not develop as suddenly as in some novels. The development of the story is not dull, and it is not boring to watch. I hope that when the protagonists get together, they will not just write about their feelings, but also add some ups and downs to the plot, which is both exciting and plain and heartwarming.

Must be five stars! It's so beautifully written! Why only 7 points! The characters are great, and the plot setting is great. It really captures what I think of Ace and his wife. Please add more! Not enough to watch woo woo woo woo! More updates! !

Really like this article! ! ! ! ! Watching the heroine grow up little by little, watching the heroine's evaluation from being the best female crew member to becoming a "witch" that others are afraid of, watching the heroine becoming stronger and stronger little by little. Really, the main protagonists in the One Piece novels I have seen are all brainless and strong, and they are basically the same as Luffy and the others. I rarely see it with Ace. I read a lot of novels where the protagonist crushes everyone and no one is better than the protagonist. It is really rare for the protagonist to grow up little by little. I didn't dare to read it after reading more than 120 chapters because I was afraid that I would end up crying [almost crying]. I really liked it! ! ! The author will update it soon! I can't stand the others, I really like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This book fits all my fantasies as a person who has never seen One Piece but knows a little about One Piece. I really like the author's wife's writing style. Each character's personality is very distinct.

It's quite interesting. I haven't read the original work, so I won't comment on the original work, but the relationship between the heroine and Ace in this book is really frustrating. Because the heroine traveled from a peaceful country, she was weak at first, but she also grew up with adventure after adventure. From the very beginning when others mentioned her as the female crew member A to Ace's lover, then to Bai Su, who was supported by the strong man's attention and attack, from the very beginning when she was free from the world (because she came from a peaceful country after all, so she didn't understand the adventurous spirit of Ace and the others at the beginning) and then later as the lord of a city, giving shelter to civilians. Her growth is visible to the naked eye, and I look forward to the heroine's subsequent growth. Moreover, the emotional line is also very natural and easy to connect with. The two of them work hard to grow and shine in their respective fields.

Love this type! Let's grow together, come on! More～٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

It's so beautiful that I can't stop watching it. Ace in it is exactly what I imagined. I can't let go when I see the interaction between Ace and Xiaobai. At first, when I saw the introduction of system time travel and the name Bai Su, I always felt it was a bit inconsistent and I wasn't particularly interested. But when I saw Ace appear in the first chapter, I suddenly felt that the person in this is Ace, the real Ace. The author's writing is really good. When I saw two people finally kissing, I just wanted to turn into a screaming chicken. I haven't seen such a sweet article in a long time. And Marco's extra chapter is also very interesting. I look forward to the day when the extra chapter will be completed.

It's good-looking. Xiaobai is a growth-oriented heroine and quite sweet. The only drawback is that the show is too slow [crying][crying][crying] I advise the author that you'd better update five times a day. I'll check if you've updated it first when I open Yang Persimmon every day. Can you give me something to look forward to every day (pointing) [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It is really a very good novel. It does not follow the protagonist of the original novel or deliberately get close to it. It does not recreate the plot of the original comic. The growth of Ace and Su Su is also described in detail. The plot is not muddy and confusing. It is super good-looking! Catch the author and let me kiss him!

It's great, I finally have a fanfic that I don't think is so OOC [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

I watched it from the moment I met the red hair, and I was fascinated by it. The plot development of the red hair boarding the white group ship was really unexpected. In the end, they all carried the ship and ran away, haha, and Uta [Admiration] loves the heroine so much! Bai Tuan finally has a home to live in! ! Dad gave one, and then their Yaomei gave another one! I love this plot so much, I don't know if I'll watch the movie! Looking forward to it (☆∀☆) The emotional lines are also well written! I can watch it, the heroine is also very strong, it will be very enjoyable for those who don't like to watch women being tortured! This is also the first time I've seen Ace written like this. His style of dealing with things has changed very well. In some places, it is not so much that the writing is faster, but that it is written without any nonsense. It is very comfortable to read and does not strain at all. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ Still looking forward to watching the movie! (☉ω☉)⊃🍿 Looking forward to the follow-up! (☆▽☆) Come on, the author is great ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

This is the most beautiful pirate novel I have ever read [crying] [crying] The relationship between the heroine and Ace progresses very normally. It feels like a steady flow of water. You won't fall in love out of nowhere. It's very natural. The new setting is very complete. The mountain gods and clans are all harmoniously written and not too abrupt. The heroine is quite weak at the beginning, but she is really strong in the later stage, and her strength changes gradually, but it is a little different from what she imagined. At first I thought it was about medicine, but later I found out that it was about life, but it is still very beautiful. Although it is said to be discontinued, I think this story can be considered finished. Those who want to read it must not give up because of the discontinued update! !

Dear author, please introduce the characters next time. I have never read the official novel. I am in a complete mess. There are too few sweet plots. I want to eat sweets. I have been stabbed to death recently.

The author will update it soon! I really want to know the plot next! ! It feels like an Ace spin-off, it's super good. Come on, author, it doesn't matter if it's over, just don't give up [crying]

Ah! ! ! I really like a kind of growth-oriented protagonist! [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] The interaction between the protagonist and Ace is so cute! I stayed up late to finish reading it, but it was a little short. I hope the author will update it soon [crazy][crazy]

It's beautiful, I really like this style, please give it a thumbs up to the author (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

The beginning was a bit boring, and I thought it was just a plot, but the rest is obviously the author's own plot, which is very interesting! The relationship between the male and female protagonists is not the kind of thing where they just open their mouths and they interrupt their confessions many times, but they like this state of liking each other, it's very cute! The plot is getting better and better! !

I like it very much. The plot is slow and not teasing. I am looking forward to the following content. The heroine is also slowly growing up. She is not a Mary Sue or exaggerated and makes people get involved easily. I like it very much! Update quickly! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

So pretty! Not ooc either! And it doesn't freeze! It's a rare novel that's not too childish! The true god of Ace fan fiction has arrived! The only novel on the Internet that doesn't step on my bad points [cry][cry][cry][cry]

It is really one of the few high-quality pirate fanfics. The psychology of the characters is well portrayed. However, the battle scenes and the growth of the protagonist are a bit summarized. Especially when I saw the angel, I was a little confused. I just met the angel and he could sacrifice himself for the protagonist? It's just that the death was a bit too hasty [thinking] [thinking], but the writing of the Whitebeard Pirates is perfect. It is really the image of the Whitebeard Pirates in my impression, but can there be less knives? I really can't stand knives. Sachi was really scared to death and thought he was going to die again. Fortunately, there was no danger. Finally, I hope the author will update soon [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Huge, huge, beautiful! ! ! The heroine didn't have a big golden finger when she first came out, but she also grew up slowly! ! Help I get so excited every time I see her grow a little bit! And she and Ace are so sweet! ! ! The characters and personalities are described very well, and the plot of the story is also described in detail. The plot does not drag on and each chapter is full of weight! One! Point! All! No! Water! ! I really love my family [admiration]

In terms of the plot, the author has his own ideas and is not too out of the ordinary. In terms of characters... Uh... Adolescent Ace is lively and mature. In terms of the protagonist, Long Aotian is not as happy as the start. He is not rigid and knows how to be flexible. He is a slow-burning protagonist. In terms of the system, uh... The inheritance of a local god is not a traditional system. In most cases, it does not give any help to the protagonist. Summary: Most of the characters do not have OOC (a few of the original works also rarely have scenes, so it is not clear). The writing style is quite satisfactory (softer in certain situations). The growth of the protagonist (in all aspects) is extremely outstanding, and the author is not stingy with some sweet parts (it is just that the progress is too slow). With more and more violent deaths, this article is also worth reading.

Although the author has discontinued the book, he feels very complete about himself. Whether it is the character creation, character quality, or emotional lines, it is very clear, and the language is very straightforward. Must have perfect score! I love you (●✿∀✿●) the author greatly!

Wow! The update actually stopped... Woo woo woo, but luckily the story ends at a point (but I still hope the author can write more pictures to give the story a real ending, and I also want to see the life after marriage) [crying] [crying] [crying]