Legend says there is a realm of immortals above the heavens, and those who survive the nine levels of heavenly tribulation can ascend to immortality.
After accidentally killing someone, Liu Lang was cast into the Abyss of Sin. He narrowly escaped death and was rescued by Hao Ling'er, a young woman from the Qingyun Sect who happened to be passing by. He thought he could finally embark on the path of cultivation, but his mediocre aptitude meant he could not awaken his spiritual root.
Desperate to awaken it, Liu Lang ventured into the Abyss of Sin, only to be unexpectedly transported to the Realm of Sin...
Fellow Daoist Chen, I read your masterpiece three months ago, but now it seems unsuccessful! According to my understanding, you may have written this book without an outline, and it felt a bit arbitrary and unconstrained! First, there are many setting problems. Your writing method is to get married first and then fall in love. It is a kind of checking for omissions and filling in the gaps. You make moves in a panic, focusing on one thing and losing the other! Second, read more classic works on cultivating immortality to enrich yourself. There is a big difference in writing style and style between writing modern romance and writing about classical mortals cultivating immortality. An ancient saying goes: It takes ten years to sharpen a sword, but the blood will seal your throat! The above is my personal opinion, please forgive me for any imperfections!
Good
Officially recommended to everyone, I hope you will support me a lot. There are three maps in total, the sin world (spiritual world), the mortal world, and the fairy world.
Rich content and clear structure
The writing is pretty good.
Unconventional, novel plot, worth staying up late
Overall very good
Worth buying, humorous
Every time after a five-star review, it's almost gone. Just accept it after it's good?
Why is it gone? It's not enough to watch 😄😄😄 Looking forward to a sequel