Legend has it that there is an immortal world in the sky, and one can become an immortal by surviving nine heavenly tribulations.
Driving into the Abyss of Death due to an accidental murder, Liu Lang narrowly escaped death and was picked up by Hao Ling'er, a passing girl from the Qingyun Sect. He thought he would be able to embark on the path of cultivating immortality, but his mediocre qualifications prevented him from opening his spiritual roots.
In order to open his spiritual roots, Liu Lang ventured to the Sin Abyss, but was accidentally transported to the Sin Realm...
Reader comments
Fellow Daoist Chen, I read your masterpiece three months ago, but now it seems unsuccessful!
According to my understanding, you may have written this book without an outline, and it felt a bit arbitrary and unconstrained!
First, there are many setting problems. Your writing method is to get married first and then fall in love. It is a kind of checking for omissions and filling in the gaps. You make moves in a panic, focusing on one thing and losing the other!
Second, read more classic works on cultivating immortality to enrich yourself. There is a big difference in writing style and style between writing modern romance and writing about classical mortals cultivating immortality. An ancient saying goes: It takes ten years to sharpen a sword, but the blood will seal your throat!
The above is my personal opinion, please forgive me for any imperfections!
Good
Officially recommended to everyone, I hope you will support me a lot.
There are three maps in total, the sin world (spiritual world), the mortal world, and the fairy world.
Rich content and clear structure
Overall very good
The writing is pretty good.
Worth buying, humorous
Unconventional, novel plot, worth staying up late
Every time after a five-star review, it's almost gone. Just accept it after it's good?
Good books, good books, wonderful books
Very good book
It's just so-so, okay. I feel like it was written by a newbie.
It is really difficult for a mortal to cultivate immortality. It has ups and downs and is exciting!
After watching it for three days, I finished it, sacrificed my life for righteousness, and returned to the mortal world.
[Like][Like][Like]
Why is it gone? It's not enough to watch [laughs][laughs][laughs] Looking forward to a sequel
Super pretty! Read it in its entirety for both viewing and listening purposes. Good book
Fellow Daoist Chen, I read your masterpiece three months ago, but now it seems unsuccessful! According to my understanding, you may have written this book without an outline, and it felt a bit arbitrary and unconstrained! First, there are many setting problems. Your writing method is to get married first and then fall in love. It is a kind of checking for omissions and filling in the gaps. You make moves in a panic, focusing on one thing and losing the other! Second, read more classic works on cultivating immortality to enrich yourself. There is a big difference in writing style and style between writing modern romance and writing about classical mortals cultivating immortality. An ancient saying goes: It takes ten years to sharpen a sword, but the blood will seal your throat! The above is my personal opinion, please forgive me for any imperfections!
Good
Officially recommended to everyone, I hope you will support me a lot. There are three maps in total, the sin world (spiritual world), the mortal world, and the fairy world.
Rich content and clear structure
Overall very good
The writing is pretty good.
Worth buying, humorous
Unconventional, novel plot, worth staying up late
Every time after a five-star review, it's almost gone. Just accept it after it's good?
Good books, good books, wonderful books
Very good book
It's just so-so, okay. I feel like it was written by a newbie.
It is really difficult for a mortal to cultivate immortality. It has ups and downs and is exciting! After watching it for three days, I finished it, sacrificed my life for righteousness, and returned to the mortal world. [Like][Like][Like]
Why is it gone? It's not enough to watch [laughs][laughs][laughs] Looking forward to a sequel
Super pretty! Read it in its entirety for both viewing and listening purposes. Good book