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This is the second funniest pirate fanbook I have ever read. The first book is "I have the final say on the Spade Pirates".

I like this book. It's really beautiful. Every interaction between everyone and the heroine is really interesting. I like this kind of heartthrob. I'm a bitch. I really love watching this kind of plot. Come on!

It's good to watch (´-ω-`) It doesn't matter who the male protagonist is. Rayleigh is currently the most proactive, but the female protagonist doesn't feel that interesting. I was so worried when I watched it. Can I write more extras with different male protagonists [Sending my heart] As it goes on, I feel that the heroine is a bit useless. Her abilities will bring too much attention to her, and she has no corresponding force value. She is always threatened by others. Just like Sakaski's mandatory restriction of freedom, it is very annoying (T ^ T). This one is very excessive, but also very awkward. The style of other people's paintings is all about fighting and killing. The heroine is indecisive, a bit like a virgin, a bit like green tea, which feels very strange. Although it is said to be a group favorite script, you can't take everyone's favor [awkward laugh] Pirates are not like Pirates, and the Navy is not like the Navy.

I have followed the show One Piece before and read a PO One Piece book (it was too meaty and slow to read, and it seems to be a trap now). This is the second book I've read, and I really like it. To be honest, I've compared it a lot, but I couldn't stand the others (for me personally). I really like this one! ! ! Come on big

Super pretty, totally in my taste

I didn't finish it when I was following up on another account, but after re-reading it recently, I still feel that some of the descriptions are a bit inconsistent. For example: "The voice is also crisp and soft with a milky flavor that has not grown up" or "The mermaid lady is a blessing to all of us". Although I quite like watching Mary Sue, I don't really like the character of the heroine. It's a bit like the "spoiled wife" of ancient times. The perfect appearance and figure (I often wrote about the heroine's appearance and figure before), combined with abilities such as "The Darling of the Sea", made me feel like a precious collection that needs to be cared for in the early stage, or a cute little pet that relies on others to take care of it, but often gets into trouble. The comments section said that the heroine's abilities have grown in the later stages, but the character design in the early stages really didn't bother me, and I'm not used to skipping reading, so I didn't see the later stages. In addition, the main CP Rayleigh's age-appropriate setting does not suit my taste in otome games. Of course, if you like this kind of heroine who is held in the palm of everyone's hand, and don't mind if the CP is older, then it is still recommended if you like to watch group favorite AL [Like]

It's a very good article, but after reading the last few chapters, my blood pressure is really high and I feel so angry. I still hope that the heroine will not be easily controlled by others. You can do what you want. Alas, I hope the heroine learns to say no. Don't let others take advantage of you. Sometimes I get very angry when I see some men doing things to the heroine. It's better to become stronger yourself and have the ability to reject others. Come on!

Hahaha! So funny! I really like the heroine! So cute! I don't think there's anything wrong with it! But we still need to get stronger quickly! Be strong and make trouble! Will not be threatened (life)! [Laughing][laughing]

I don't have much culture, I can only say it's true, it's really, really good-looking. Both funny and beautiful First of all, it's very beautiful, I love it, and secondly, it's a top scorer~ [Blowing kiss]

It's great. It's my favorite pirate book I've read so far. The writing is smooth, the descriptions are delicate, and the plot is interesting and reasonable. I just love it. I hope the author can keep writing until the finale. The longer it is, the better. I originally wanted to search for other books by the author, but unfortunately this is the only one. Does the author have any other books? I want to read the book you wrote~[Send heart] It looks good, please give me a thumbs up, author, keep up the good work, keep up the good work, keep up the good work~

I think the heroine is so cute, she is a lively and cheerful ghost girl type. It's really easy to get along with Kizaru. ❤️❤️❤️ But I hope the heroine can become stronger and be able to fight with everyone. 🌹

This is the first One Piece fanfic I read on this platform. Sometimes I don't like the heroine very much, but overall it's pretty good. The heroine is still a bit weak in the early stages. I hope she can be stronger later on and don't put myself in trouble when saving others. Come on!

Nice! Sometimes I feel that the protagonist is miserable, but sometimes I feel gloating about her misfortune. She took off someone's pants and was chased for several streets. I always felt that the protagonist was a funny girl.

My favorite pirate otome! ! ! ! ! In the early stage, I followed Roger's group. The heroine is super cute and has golden fingers, but I don't think it's an exaggeration. We are just sweet mermaid princesses! Although cp is all, Rayleigh's early scenes are so sweet and satisfying! I really like Rayleigh! ! (White-haired Rayleigh is also very handsome, he is a really handsome guy among the weird men in One Piece) if extra is also very fragrant Men who are prostitutes care about the age difference in their tonics. Rayleigh wins! It's all, but Raleigh is 100% honest.

Very, very, very good-looking, author, please come on

He is really the pirate heartthrob that I expected, both the character and the setting pierce my heart [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Lots of cp, if you like heartthrobs, just go for it. ①But the main CP is Rayleigh. If you can't accept Rayleigh, I don't recommend joining. To be honest, half of the comment section is full of comments about Rayleigh. It's very uncomfortable for those who like Rayleigh or not [face covering] ② The heartthrob heroine of Mary Sue is basically a story about the Roger Pirates. After all, it is a romance novel, so if you can't accept OOC's advice, don't read it. Because the heroine appeared in Roger Reilly's forties and changed a lot of the plot, so the characters in it are really different from the original novel.

It's suitable for women to watch. The early content feels funny, and it has a feeling like when I started watching One Piece. Later it feels more serious and the ending is also very good. It's rare that it's not sloppy! The heroine's personality is very interesting. If such a person existed in real life, it would make people want to make friends with her.

The answer is super well written. I look forward to your writing about Pokémon heroine 1 vs. N. In the concave and convex world, the 1 vs. N protagonist can be accepted by both men and women, and bisexuals are also acceptable. Hunter, I hope you can write a protagonist who comes from the dark continent to the protagonist group, so that the protagonist will be stronger.

Super healing! The darling of the sea, the darling of the group! It's just that time is running a little slow, and there's only one picture per day. I really like Shanks and Yasang (˵¯͒¯͒˵) The progress is too slow. According to the development of this plot, it is estimated to be upwards of one thousand [eating melon]

I wanted to say something, but I saw that sentence in the copy that was both suspenseful and shocking. I really wanted to give myself a big showdown when I didn't take this sentence seriously when I read the copy... One code equals the other. Although I personally don't like the heroine's character, the author writes it with great care. Those who like this book should not miss it.

Hahaha, it looks great. The heroine is funny, cute, quirky and smart. The content is mainly about the heroine and her men. The plot line is also exploring the heroine's life experience. Mainly because I feel that your article must be on the wrong platform. Maybe Haitang is more suitable for you [laughter]

Bull! The last time I saw such an awesome comic novel was a Slam Dunk fanfic. The author's control over the characters is superb. Both the lines and the portrayal of the characters are very meticulous, and the control is flawless. The plot advancement is very reasonable, and the design of the heroine is very clever. Who wouldn't love such a heroine. Some people don't agree with it. The nature of the protagonist is set like this. If she is decisive in killing emotionally, she is not Zenia. This is closely related to her experience as an orphan in her previous life. In her previous life, under the guidance of her master, the protagonist has rich experience in the world, but her emotional experience is extremely lacking. How can she be decisive in killing? Moreover, the article mentions that the monster side of the protagonist caused endless trouble for his master, so the protagonist buried this side deeply and gave birth to an initial personality. It can be said that Zheniya values ​​​​the word emotion. With the experience of valuing feelings but lacking feelings, it is self-evident what such a person would choose to do. Therefore, it is normal for the protagonist's emotional awakening to be gradual and forced. One more thing, the author is very cunning. Those Japanese Chinese expressions and emoticons are very brilliant. If you are not an anime fan, you will not understand them. ദ്ദി (⩌ᴗ⩌ ) Disadvantages: The portion is large, but it doesn't fill you up•᎔•

It's very beautiful, but also very funny, hahaha [laughing] [laughing]

Overall, it's pretty good. She is undoubtedly the favorite of the group. Although the heroine in the beginning is trouble-loving and too useless, and she almost kills herself, but if you stick to it, the heroine's strength will rise later. However, Nami's suspected daughter of the heroine and Rayleigh is really my highlight, so I'll leave it at that. There is one thing to say, but other than that it is very well written.

The author is great. It's a good read. It's a novel that makes you unhappy. After reading it, your depressed mood will disappear. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] [There is still a lot to do, so I have to remind you (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)]

Full of faintness! ! (Don't dare to beat Mandu for fear of being taken down) Super fragrant! ! Leili is the main palace, and the others are really fighting for it! Before Zenia lost her memory, Rayleigh was very defensive. After Zenia lost her memory, he felt that he could not protect Zenia well by himself. Rayleigh, who was really afraid of losing her again, thought about it and stopped being so protective. The heroine Zheniya can be said to be invincible in the later stage, but her ability output is limited. If she uses it too much, she will become weak. However, she uses it frequently in the later stage, so she always has a weak buff. Sweet and fragrant article!

It's really beautiful. At first, I just read this book as a daily comedy, but as I read it, I began to be attracted by Yaya's adventures. Especially the bond with family, friends, and lovers, I was particularly moved and heart-warming when I saw it. Lei Li is really suitable to be the main palace. Lei Li's strength, tolerance and love are the most able to give Yaya freedom and security. I also want to see more cookies from Mr. And Mrs. Silbaz, hhh This book has also fulfilled many of my dreams. I have always wanted to see everyone survive, put aside their previous positions, laugh and play together. The daily life in Genie Island is really interesting, and I want to see more and more... Ace is at the top, Luffy has liberated the world, Ponyboy can still live with his father and his family, Uta does not have the despair of childhood, and even has a movie theater... Countless, really countless, so many dreams have been fulfilled. Thanks to the author, thanks to Yaya. This is the best pirate fanfic I have ever read. Everyone at Genie Island must still be going about their daily lives.

How can I put it, I have read more than seventy chapters now, and I like it very much among all the pirate heartthrobs I have watched. I still don't know what will happen next, but after reading the comments that the heroine and Rayleigh are together, I am a little disappointed, because I want to watch them all [laughing], but there are also comments that they are all like the male protagonist, but the author did not clearly indicate the cp. I am still looking forward to some twists in the future. The heroine's character is very good, I hope her character won't change too much later on. Kizaru is very fond of the little preference of the heroine, and Aokiji is very fond of the little move of the heroine. Marco hopes to be a little sweet, Akainu... I have no feelings for him, but I don't hate him either, Rayleigh is also pretty good! He is quite handsome, I hope there will be more sweets with different colors in the future [laughing] After all, he is a heartthrob, hee hee (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) Shura Field. Great work, Wai Ruigude, I like it 😍, please keep writing it [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I will comment on it later after reading it, but I just read it a little bit earlier.

It's a book I really like. It's the only one that makes people feel happy after reading it. The heroine is a little live treasure. She is quirky and not brainless. I like it. (I feel that Sakski is too tough on the heroine, which makes me not very good with him:)) Currently my favorite is the chapter where Bolu gets along with the heroine. I like it. I like it very much. I like it very much. I beg the author if he can publish another pirate book. I'm really looking forward to it. Any single cp or group pet will be fine. I like the story written by the author. I like it.