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Really pretty! I read the latest chapter in one go. When I read Chapter 11, I realized that I had read it for a long time before reaching Chapter 11. I thought the author had divided it into volumes. After looking at the table of contents, I realized that the author really had a large volume [Like] [Like]

Motivate yourself, if you don't even believe in yourself, you will be hopeless. (My real thought is that the more people watching, the better, haha)

How can I put it this way? At first I thought this book was to my taste, but when I saw Kitagawa appearing more and more from chapter 45, I liked it more and more. By chapter 47, I realized something was wrong, so I searched the full text... I just felt bored. After seeing so many descriptions of Kitagawa, I found that she was not among the heroines... Although I really like the heroine's character described by the author, it suits my taste, but comfort is the most important thing when reading a novel. I've only read Chapter 47 of this book. I hope the author's next book will make me, a bt, unable to extricate myself from reading it! The author has released his next comprehensive comic @I am here to support, I am looking forward to it [I'm about to cry]

Let me give you an opinion. I have seen more than 30 chapters. You can write more about the origin of the heroine's feelings for the protagonist. Put some effort in this aspect. The stories of several heroines are a bit vague. I feel that the good feelings are a bit inexplicable or there is no sense of substitution. For example, the protagonist Kasumigaoka Kavin stayed with her all night long to chat or come up with ideas, etc. There is also Megumi's feelings. He just said that it was a light. If you don't write darkness, how can you highlight the importance of that light? I'm talking about Ying Lili, a childhood sweetheart but there is no incident that highlights her feelings. You can put more writing into the emotional line.

Let the most powerful suffer the loneliness of salvation. [Salvation] Let the most sincere thing be covered with the mask of betrayal. [True Self] Let the most compassionate one be manipulated by fate. [Commandment] Let the most elegant, erase the arrogant capital. [Gold] makes the most complicated unable to dance on the stage. [Spiral] Let the craziest ones abandon the meaning of survival. [Destruction] Let the most enlightened person fall into the trouble of ego. [Tianhui] Let the one you care about most lose your only concern. [Instant] Let what you yearn for most shatter the ideals of the past. [Xuguang] Let the most learned person suffer infinite consequences due to life and death. InfiniteLet the most innocent one walk in the dark sea of ​​stars. [Stars] Let the most humble, closed and cherished feelings. [Floating Life] Let the happiest person feel the true meaning of pain. Empty dream

Overall, it's pretty good. There are no girls in the harem. Author, please come on and update quickly. I'm anxious to read it [laughing evilly]

Needless to say, the comprehensive harem manga must either have system favorability settings, or it must have the ability and determination to break the world. The background of Yuwen Family is very good. The protagonist directly expresses his feelings without procrastinating until the Shura Field explodes at the end.

It's very good. It even gave me the illusion that I was watching an anime movie. It was a pity that the heroine did not have Kitagawa. The author may have a side job, so I don't dare to read it [I almost cried]

Oh, it's good. It has the feel of a comprehensive comic from the past (time travel/rebirth, young master, two-dimensional, strong protagonist, daily life/combat). I feel like I haven't read this kind of book in a long time. It has a lot of emotional points. For now, as long as it advances steadily and doesn't seek death, it will be fine. Although some details are not handled well, this can be regarded as a "historical legacy" of this type of subject matter, which is acceptable to me.

Everything is very good, and the emotional handling is in place, that is, the part where He Hui confesses, why the hell didn't you just kick your sister? I know it's hard to handle if you kick her, but I just feel unhappy if you don't kick her [smile]

It's a very good novel (✪▽✪). The author's writing style is very gentle! ! ! The characters are also described very delicately, and the slow-burning plot looks very warm. I like it very much. The author said that this book only has 2 million words, which makes me very dissatisfied. I have already written 2 million words, so 3 million words shouldn't be a problem, right? [Smile]

The characters are very realistic and the story is pretty good. It's a very good one among the Tomato comics.

Not bad, another comprehensive comic that can be read

Author, who is the heroine? [What] I hope Rikka is the heroine [crying]

It seems that no one has read this book [what]

Although it is a daily variety comic, it is not a good review for Stallion Bulldozer

Is there a sea dream in the author's harem? After reading through the comments, it's a pity that Hai Meng has been accompanying the male protagonist during the period after his mother passed away. It feels like he shouldn't be just a close friend. In my opinion, if a girl is always with you when you are sad, no matter your age, you will feel dependent and possessive. In your heart, you don't want to see her with other boys. (Purely personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

If nothing else, this author is too active [laughs evilly]

Yes, among the comic novels I have read, yours can be ranked in the top five. I hope the author will continue to work hard [cool]

Why didn't you take Hai Meng away? Is it behind you? Does the author have a Q group? I want to see the back

Well worth watching

Really good There is a group of talented people in the group, and they speak well

It has to be this right. Strong

Come on, wow wow wow wow

A good book

Women's clothing of the Silk Road Trade Fair (dog head)

The human ideal, Kato Megumi, slashed at the Aki thief with a knife.

Very good, come on

Not to mention anything else, I am in the group, and the author really makes me cry.

Sparasi, touch Sparasi with your head