It's Too Weird to Use Breathing Techniques in SAO.

Come on, author, stop updating. I think your version of Sword Art Online is pretty good.

If Kirito loses Asuna, how will the plot of the fourth season develop [Thinking]

Very good, but I still like multiple female protagonists. After all, there are quite a few favorite characters in Swords and Swords [smirk] [snicker] [snicker]

You don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, do you? I don't understand why some Sword Art Online harem fanfics have heroines like Sachi or Lizsilica, but Suguha and Yuna are much prettier than them.

The writing is okay, at least half as good as Tomato's Sword Art Online fanfics. Although there are awkward places, they are not many. Overall, there are only a few places, which do not affect the subsequent plot. I rated it as watchable. There are a few points to note about the plot (spoiler warning): The first is to suppress the protagonist's combat power. The sword skill of Breath of Water is obviously much better than the system sword skill in the game. In reality, the protagonist who can defeat Suguha with sword skills cannot suppress other players in sword skills (this is a very obvious advantage). Xiang, however, is not reflected at all in the author's writing. It is clear that the battles at the same level are sword fighting skills, but in several battles at the same level, the protagonist was completely unable to suppress it. Then the classic part where the protagonist must not be a chieftain... Please, my luck is bad enough in real life. When I read the novel, please let the protagonist have better luck and make it more comfortable for me, OK? Other problems are not big, such as the logic of the early plot and the author group portrait making the protagonist look like a supporting role. It is not a problem as long as you think about it and it is easy to solve. These are the problems. I can't stand the lightning protection. In my opinion, the score of this book is between 7 and 8.5 (Timeliness). I also hope that the author will write better as he writes. @ A ​​certain original chef

It must be five stars, otherwise I would be sorry if the author posts so many pictures.

It's a good novel. If the author has the conditions, you can read the Sword Art Online Attack chapter, which talks about the details of the strategies for each level during the SAO period.

It's still very good, but there are too few updates. I'm also confused as to why there are so few people.

Why didn't the male protagonist practice water calling by himself? !

Although it's not great, I'm a native dog and I like to watch

It's very interesting. By the way, author Sugou, how do you plan to solve it?

Not bad. The author insists. It is difficult for this kind of subject matter to get attention on Tomato. Let's wait for the arrival of the majority of sword fans!

It can be said that I have followed it from the beginning to now. Although the author cheats from time to time, I am very satisfied with this sword fanfic. After all, there are not many tomato swords in the first place. If the author does not supervise me, I will still continue to follow it.

For novices, and the author is still a high school student, it is very interesting to write a fanfic about mysterious swords. I hope the author can work hard! [Read carefully] [Read carefully] [Note] Cut it? . .

Come on, it looks good to me and is my type. Can it be longer? Are you too short? I feel really sorry for my sister-in-law [laughing evilly] And that 14th-floor cabin, it should be on the 14th floor. Our daughter hasn't come out yet.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again

It felt like Kirito was the protagonist at first, but later on the number of appearances of the protagonist increased, which was okay. But it is considered good in Tomato Sword, and the author who can persist for such a long time is also strong.

It's a bit short and it's gone after 20 chapters. Five stars for the pictures [I understand]

Update quickly! It's not enough. I finally found a sword novel o(╥╥)o

Sword and Sword is one of the few games with a large number of words. I would like to give the five-star review to the author first, but I suggest that the progress can be accelerated. In the first Sword and Sword game, because it is a death game, most of the game has strategy levels, and there is a little less emotional drama. In addition, the battle description lacks a sense of graphics, and there is no feeling. Speed ​​up the progress and finish the scenes in the first volume, and move on to the next volume. The remaining scenes can have more emotional scenes [Learned]

Hey, I like the book very much, but I still stopped updating it. Is the popularity of swords so low now? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Come, the author reads to me Be proud of diligent updates and be ashamed of procrastinating updates Be proud of ten thousand updates a day, and be ashamed of four thousand in three days It's more honor to explode more, and it's shameful to play fish games. We are proud to communicate with readers, but even more shameful to judge by diving. The author has four honors and four shames Finally: Where is the fan base? [Sinister smile]

Come on, the author is great ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

I would call this the best sword novel on the whole tomato.

So pretty

I like this book very much

It's really good

It's really rare to see a sword novel

Can you write the plot of GGO?

So far so good, come on, don't go to the palace, keep writing. It has great potential, at least it has the largest number of words among similar sword fics. Come on, try to enrich the content so that you don't worry about running out of words. Also, try to write more simulation plots, it will get better and better. Come on, stick to it, there will always be a day when you can succeed. If you don't know how to write about certain scenes, you can refer to books on that subject. You can combine your imagination with the original drama and add your personal touch to write it well. (The above opinions are purely personal. Anyway, I hope you will not "enter the palace" and want to see the perfect ending of this book)

Very nice, keep up the good work