Taking a Widow Whose Husband's Death Brings Bad Luck on a Rampage

It's okay, why doesn't anyone see it?

Not bad, good luck to the author Reasonability is justice. The emotional line of the revised article is clearer. The emotional drama of Luo, Chen and Lin is not as chaotic as before. Luo is now more like a guide, guiding Chen and Lin to improve their strength, life perception and emotions. The plot after the author's revision is not very abrupt, and there is more foreshadowing and explanation, that is, the names between the two still need to be changed. After all, Chen is Lin's woman, and taboos should still be avoided when writing novels. All in all, I am very grateful to the author for listening to readers' opinions and revising the plot. Thank you very much!

I read the comments. Readers are better than authors!

It looks pretty good so far What is this written after Luo Xiaotian comes out in Good Guys? If you write about the female protagonist flirting with Luo, just write Lin to death. Change the male protagonist to Luo.

I'll write at least 400,000 words, please 🥺

Oh my god, she's so beautiful, but no one is there

Come on Come on Author

Well written, with a compact plot and novel content