Let me say something not so good. I read a few chapters and couldn't stand it. It was too jumpy. It was like a joke. It felt a bit inexplicable. I couldn't stand it. It was you who clicked to follow me and I read it. If you have any belief in it, I suggest that you write novels in the future. The first few dozen chapters can be more detailed and serious. When you have experience, you can reduce unnecessary descriptions. Although the ink is a little annoying, you can still read it. With your current beginning, most people will definitely give up and not read. Be more serious and detailed in the first few dozen chapters. It will not matter if you jump a little bit later. Because they understand the protagonist or other characters in the main plot, there are still many people who can bear to watch it. Come on, author [smile]
Come on, encourage each other
Let me say something not so good. I read a few chapters and couldn't stand it. It was too jumpy. It was like a joke. It felt a bit inexplicable. I couldn't stand it. It was you who clicked to follow me and I read it. If you have any belief in it, I suggest that you write novels in the future. The first few dozen chapters can be more detailed and serious. When you have experience, you can reduce unnecessary descriptions. Although the ink is a little annoying, you can still read it. With your current beginning, most people will definitely give up and not read. Be more serious and detailed in the first few dozen chapters. It will not matter if you jump a little bit later. Because they understand the protagonist or other characters in the main plot, there are still many people who can bear to watch it. Come on, author [smile]
Too many repeated words!
Very nice! Highly recommended!