A Woman Reborn as a Man: The Deadly Allure of the White Moonlight

It's really good to read, and the descriptions of the two protagonists' hearts are very interesting. It's just a little slow, and it took more than 100 chapters to get close to each other. I hope the author can write it faster. The foreshadowing is a bit long, because there is no heroine in the middle half, which will make readers skip the chapter or abandon the article directly. You can add some of the heroine's life in the United States to increase reading interest. After all, we basically like sweet stories, and I like the section in the basement very much. It would be great if you add a little bit that we like, I think you, the author, should understand! [Shy] Another thing is to improve the life experiences of the two protagonists. For example, Xiao Gu's real life experience, why she is in the orphanage, why she likes to pretend, and what makes her pretend. Is it just to satisfy her own false vanity? I don't think it should be this simple reason. Wouldn't it be said that Xiao Gu is a hypocritical person? According to the development of this plot, she should have a tragic past. Xiaosao Yiqing, I hope you will consider it and refer to the plot behind "Bai Yueguang o Wants to Stand Alone with Me" to start low and go high. I look forward to the author's performance. And quickly build a fan club! ! ! !

It's okay but too little. I prefer to watch the male protagonist and Bai Yueguang's relationship. It's very interesting [laughter]

Have you ever seen a female protagonist flirting with a dumb male protagonist from the perspective of a male protagonist? I have never seen anything like this from the male protagonist's perspective. It's so novel and I love it.

It's really beautiful. I like it very much.

I read the latest chapter in one go. Fortunately, the male and female protagonists think normally. At present, the plot of the novel is developing very well, and the system is also focused on companionship [send heart] And my sister is good at [licking the screen]

It's good-looking, and it's a type I've never seen before.

It's very good-looking, the female protagonist is very smart and charming, and the male protagonist is a bit silly and sweet, it's worth a try! It's sweet and cruel, and both the male and female protagonists have mouths! Although the system is useless, it is still useful at critical moments and is not too annoying! The story is quite novel! Nice! Big thumbs up! Much love❤️

I am short of words and have no words to describe this book, but it deeply touches my heart. I am very pleased that your writing style is novel and your writing is very fast. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

My younger brother likes the plot written by my sister very much. The content is very good and delicate. But if the sister doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother so casually? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The older sister is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother is urging the older sister like this. It is the younger brother's fault. It hurts the older sister's body, which also makes the younger brother feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the older sister is injured or not has nothing to do with the younger brother? Hurry up and update, older sister [please take a closer look]

It's great to watch, and the two main characters are both great and match each other perfectly. The only flaw is that there is too much ink in other lines, and a group of brainless characters are noisy. If the original female protagonist was removed from the whole text, especially the many inexplicable tasks the protagonist had about the original heroine in the early stage, the whole text would be much better. What impressed me deeply was a reader's comment: The whole book became better when the heroine appeared. Really, Hanhan, this fishing beauty, is so heart-warming that people just want to shout: Sister! Catch me! Elder sister! Elder sister! I am your dog! ! ! !