Relying on the System to Become a Master in Ancient Times

The overall tone of the novel [Chigua] attracted by the introduction is very warm. Although Ayu's previous life was very distressing, most of the people he met in this world were more kind than malicious. I hope Ayu can always live with a bright smile [Blow Kiss] The ending is a standard HE. Ayu's mother's family is also reunited, and the feudal country is getting better and better. Well, it's not bad [shy]

The setting of the book is very attractive to me. I have been hoarding it until it is finished. [Huge face] But I just read a few chapters today and I can't stand it anymore. In my opinion, the protagonist is a bit feminine. In fact, there is no need to keep emphasizing how good-looking he is. Too many descriptions of appearance will make it a bit watery. And if the general is the protagonist, it would be a bit awkward for the two of them to get along. Although the protagonist is probably a sociopath, there is indeed very little dialogue between them. Moreover, the protagonist is a prince and a general. How could he fall in love with someone so quickly? Because he looks good? There was a little bit of drag at the beginning of the article. I don't know if it will be better later on, but the style of writing this article is really not in my XP. In the end, the author finished the book after his hard work [Congratulations]

So far, the writing is very good. When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the protagonist is too naive and blushes easily, and he is not very protective of himself. I feel that if he goes out to the capital with people like the general and prince who save him, he will be bullied by the people around him, especially the prince. From what I read in the previous chapters, it should be good if there is a system and a mall at the back.

It's a very nice book, but the input method made mistakes. Many words are wrong. I seriously suspect that the author used speech recognition to type it in. It looks very unsmooth. Also, the senior who was Chenchen in my previous life didn't tell me the final ending. I feel a little aggrieved [grievance]

Emperor: Why did my younger brother bring back his sister-in-law when he returned to the capital from an expedition (the sister-in-law is so pretty)

It's not a nail-biter, some of the plot feels like a running account, but it's not a one-shot summary, and the details are very detailed. I like this style! It's just that there are too few updates and it's not enough to watch [punch]

It's super interesting. If this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan.

There is blood on your clothes. Why don't you buy those from the villagers? Can you enter the city if you wear bloody clothes? You don't have a household registration yet.

Well, some places really don't suit my taste. There are some articles that I have been saving for so long that I can no longer read them, so I'd better forget them in the world. Writing is not easy, it takes a lot of hard work for the author.

Why doesn't anyone like it? [Sending Hearts]

It looks good, but there are no punishments for hurting Qiu, especially the ending of the senior who killed him, which is a bit uncomfortable...

It's quite good, but the rating is really too low. It's not even 6.8. The Tomato score is not entirely trustworthy. This book makes me want to read it more than some books with a rating of 9. It's also good. The introduction is the type that I'm interested in. I'll stick with it.

Interesting plot and novel setting

No, is this a female channel? Why would I watch a female channel?

I wish Qiu Chenyu and Feng Ming happiness and happiness

Hmm, not bad, not bad! Even though everything is too advanced, I don't know what it means for the system to allow the original owner to travel to this ancient time? Just let him develop the feudal country? And then give him a chance to start over? ?

The writing is really good, please give the author more support (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

Very beautiful, the plot is very interesting

It's very interesting, come on author₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Super nice and warm

Wow, super beautiful, highly recommended

Very interesting, thank you to the author!

There are a lot of shortcomings, but it's not a seven-point score.

When will the homework be updated? Will there be more updates for this book?

I don't know what to say, this book is okay

This book is getting more and more interesting [stop]

It's very interesting. When this book becomes popular, I will be a regular reader! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The update is so slow. The general has only left a few chapters, and I already think it's time for them to meet again. Alas, it's hard to wait. Please update it quickly.

Very nice. I really like the atmosphere of the Qiu family.