The Whole Family Is in Love and the Junior Sister Becomes a God

It feels good, but it feels a bit boring to me, and I don't know why it's a bit messy. (Personal feeling only) But the plot is very exciting, and the background is a bit messy. Let's sort out the general plot. Author, you can write better. You have a rich imagination. It can be seen from your novels. Come on!

There are many typos and the sentences are not fluent. Several seniors use one sentence to express their thoughts. I don't believe that they all have the same idea about something. Sometimes punctuation marks should be used instead of punctuation marks. The heroine's character setting is outrageous. What the hell, the third brother calls the fourth and fourth senior brothers? Don't be too outrageous😅I can read about ten chapters which is my limit. I really can't stand this book.

I'm sincere. The author's writing style is too poor. The punctuation marks are all in a mess. What he writes is hard to understand. It makes my head hurt to read it. I can't stand it anymore after just reading the first few chapters. I suggest you hone your writing style more. Even after writing so many words, the writing style is still the same.

It looks good. I like Liu Qi. She is so sassy and beautiful.

The writing is fine. In the author's book, is the senior brother of the Piaomiao Sect called Yunyuan or Yuanyuan? The other typos are okay, but it's not good if I can't understand the main character. Furthermore, I love and dislike Liu Qi at the same time. I found out that there was something wrong with Nangong Xue early in the morning, but I left it alone until a catastrophe came to the world of immortality. From the beginning to the end, I had no hatred and couldn't figure it out.

Please, why is no one reading such a beautiful book? I really love the snake heroine and her character. I haven't looked forward to the update of a book in a long time.

It's time for Senior Brother to have in-depth exchanges with 99 [smile][smile][smile]

The dragon in the book is so weak that the heroine even had his eggs stolen.

A novice with many typos and writing skills forcibly reduced his intelligence

I really want to know what the heroine's identity was before she wore the book. Why do I feel that the heroine is so strong?

It's pretty good, but there are a lot of typos

The plot is interesting, but there are a lot of typos and incomprehensible places. I hope the author will read it carefully before publishing it.

There are so many typos and the content is so messed up.

The heroine Liu Qi beats everyone

The ending is too hasty

I have read twenty or thirty chapters of this book... It feels quite confusing... It feels inexplicable, very abrupt, many things are not explained clearly, and I feel like something is missing.

I want to see what happens after all members of the Piaomiao Sect ascend.

Very nice [like][like][like]

It looks good, the story is compact and no nonsense, the sentences are smooth and smooth, like it 👍👍👍👍👍

Beautiful and beautiful. Recommended!