Yearning for Immortality

It's very interesting. The author slowly builds a world, which is very different from many common novels about immortality. After getting tired of reading that kind of novel, this book is simply a breath of fresh air! I can see the author's own imagination in the settings of many things and some small details that are daily but different from the real world. The heroine is tenacious, optimistic, and ambitious. I like this book very much and hope the author can keep writing it. I look forward to seeing the world of immortality cultivation in the author's mind!

Currently reading Chapter 265. I really like the setting of the female protagonist, but I also look forward to more stories with outstanding female supporting characters. I don't really like the shaping of the relationship between men and women…. Why do all the main female supporting characters have some love brains? And why is it that in the world of immortality, it is so common for men to have concubines, and they will not keep their virginity when building the golden elixir foundation? How come other women except the eldest sister of the Sun family don't have male favorites (not written). The Sun family also said that they only look at spiritual roots, but it seems to imply that only men have the right to inherit? The names of the Sun sisters are not as fancy as those of the boys, they are all pornographic. Female cultivators say they have male favorites, but this is not common and it is not like men to maintain polyandrous marriages. Moreover, I feel that the story integrity and emphasis on female supporting characters is not as much as that on men. Besides, except for Wen Wen and Zhao, there are currently no highly talented women in the story, and the characters of these two are currently very "traditional": gentle and kind. Women without diversity: women with tall and brave bodies, women with free and easy personalities, women who are not kind but egotistical... She is not a drunken woman without character: Sun Jinhua is one. But I feel that the image created of her is one of surrendering to patriarchy and society, an image of a loser. Although it is also for comparison with the heroine, I prefer the girls to become better together. It would be more brilliant if the heroine leads her to break the shackles of her father.

I read it in one sitting. The good writing is still very stable, and there are clear insights from time to time. I really like the smart, cute and hard-working heroine written by the author.

Very good, very Han Xi Emperor. I hope the heroine Gou can be friends with the ruthless Emperor in the end. After all, the ruthless emperor is the strongest heroine in fantasy novels, the most stunning strange woman, and the most powerful empress. If you have a relationship with the most invincible legend, you won't die so easily. This book should not be as eunuch as "The PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds".

It's very interesting and matches the title of the book very well. Ordinary immortals are in the ordinary. There won't be random opportunities or golden fingers. It's all about the protagonist forcing himself to stand up step by step. I really like the protagonist's character: perseverance. I really like the other descriptions in the story, even if they don't seem to have a lot to do with the protagonist, it's these bits and pieces that gradually make the image of that world fuller.

Very good-looking and intelligent. For the first time, I feel like I am more holy than the heroine of this article. The heroine is really sober, not obsessed with love, not narcissistic, and knows that she lives in a world where people cannibalize people. She is not a virgin, decisive in killing, and understanding. When I read the first part, I felt like I was reading a farming novel. The more I read the later, the more flavorful and exciting it becomes, especially the fights. The heroine shows her strength step by step. (The previous article really exaggerated the fact that the 17-year-old formed a pill and reached Yuanying in one year. It is faster than gaining weight.) This is the difficulty of ordinary people at the bottom of cultivating immortals. The author will update soon...

The world setting is so vast and the writing is so good. It feels like the vest of some great god

I feel that the characters are well drawn and relatively realistic, and the plot is novel. At least it takes some effort to find people who want this book. I personally think it is worth reading, but the number of words is still small and not enough to read. I hope the author can write a book in his own style. I feel that this type of novel is still relatively niche.

Build the world of paper figures as realistically as possible ❤️ Looks great! There are so many adventures and joys. Moving forward little by little on the winding road is the norm for most people. After reading the latest chapter, I will work hard like the protagonist and strive for greater choices in the future! [OK]

It's quite interesting, but sometimes it's too wordy, which is bearable. Then when I saw Qu Yin, I felt that there was absolutely no need to take that person in. When the protagonist decided to help him improve his cultivation, I felt that the previous two hundred chapters about her struggling to improve his cultivation were like a joke 🤦 🤦, and I didn't want to continue reading. Overall it's pretty good, good luck to the author. If you like watching this kind of heroine's hard work in seeking immortality, you can watch it.