Desire for Immortality

It's very interesting. The author slowly builds a world, which is very different from many common novels about immortality. After getting tired of reading that kind of novel, this book is simply a breath of fresh air! I can see the author's own imagination in the settings of many things and some small details that are daily but different from the real world. The heroine is tenacious, optimistic, and ambitious. I like this book very much and hope the author can keep writing it. I look forward to seeing the world of immortality cultivation in the author's mind!

Currently reading Chapter 265. I really like the setting of the female protagonist, but I also look forward to more stories with outstanding female supporting characters. I don't really like the shaping of the relationship between men and women…. Why do all the main female supporting characters have some love brains? And why is it that in the world of immortality, it is so common for men to have concubines, and they will not keep their virginity when building the golden elixir foundation? How come other women except the eldest sister of the Sun family don't have male favorites (not written). The Sun family also said that they only look at spiritual roots, but it seems to imply that only men have the right to inherit? The names of the Sun sisters are not as fancy as those of the boys, they are all pornographic. Female cultivators say they have male favorites, but this is not common and it is not like men to maintain polyandrous marriages. Moreover, I feel that the story integrity and emphasis on female supporting characters is not as much as that on men. Besides, except for Wen Wen and Zhao, there are currently no highly talented women in the story, and the characters of these two are currently very "traditional": gentle and kind. Women without diversity: women with tall and brave bodies, women with free and easy personalities, women who are not kind but egotistical... She is not a drunken woman without character: Sun Jinhua is one. But I feel that the image created of her is one of surrendering to patriarchy and society, an image of a loser. Although it is also for comparison with the heroine, I prefer the girls to become better together. It would be more brilliant if the heroine leads her to break the shackles of her father.

I read it in one sitting. The good writing is still very stable, and there are clear insights from time to time. I really like the smart, cute and hard-working heroine written by the author.

Very good, very Han Xi Emperor. I hope the heroine Gou can be friends with the ruthless Emperor in the end. After all, the ruthless emperor is the strongest heroine in fantasy novels, the most stunning strange woman, and the most powerful empress. If you have a relationship with the most invincible legend, you won't die so easily. This book should not be as eunuch as "The PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds".

It's very interesting and matches the title of the book very well. Ordinary immortals are in the ordinary. There won't be random opportunities or golden fingers. It's all about the protagonist forcing himself to stand up step by step. I really like the protagonist's character: perseverance. I really like the other descriptions in the story, even if they don't seem to have a lot to do with the protagonist, it's these bits and pieces that gradually make the image of that world fuller.

Very good-looking and intelligent. For the first time, I feel like I am more holy than the heroine of this article. The heroine is really sober, not obsessed with love, not narcissistic, and knows that she lives in a world where people cannibalize people. She is not a virgin, decisive in killing, and understanding. When I read the first part, I felt like I was reading a farming novel. The more I read the later, the more flavorful and exciting it becomes, especially the fights. The heroine shows her strength step by step. (The previous article really exaggerated the fact that the 17-year-old formed a pill and reached Yuanying in one year. It is faster than gaining weight.) This is the difficulty of ordinary people at the bottom of cultivating immortals. The author will update soon...

The world setting is so vast and the writing is so good. It feels like the vest of some great god

I feel that the characters are well drawn and relatively realistic, and the plot is novel. At least it takes some effort to find people who want this book. I personally think it is worth reading, but the number of words is still small and not enough to read. I hope the author can write a book in his own style. I feel that this type of novel is still relatively niche.

Build the world of paper figures as realistically as possible [Love] Looks great! There are so many adventures and joys. Moving forward little by little on the winding road is the norm for most people. After reading the latest chapter, I will work hard like the protagonist and strive for greater choices in the future! [OK]

It's not invincible, it's not a noob, the plot is very interesting, but don't read the introduction, don't read the introduction, don't read the introduction, otherwise you will lose such a good-looking article.

This feeling of narrating the world of cultivating immortals seems to really open up a world of cultivating immortals for us. It unfolds bit by bit through the daily perspective of the heroine. It feels very daily, compact and real. Come on, author!

It's quite interesting, but sometimes it's too wordy, which is bearable. Then when I saw Qu Yin, I felt that there was absolutely no need to take that person in. When the protagonist decided to help him improve his cultivation, I felt that the previous two hundred chapters about her struggling to improve his cultivation were like a joke [face covering] [face covering], and I didn't want to continue reading. Overall it's pretty good, good luck to the author. If you like watching this kind of heroine's hard work in seeking immortality, you can watch it.

The article is really as described in the name, very everyday! Completely block cool text lovers! But! It is because of the author's delicate description of daily life that he has built a world of immortality that belongs to the author. This is really amazing! ! Compared with the male channel where you can defeat monsters and gain opportunities to upgrade, this fairy tale really allows me to see the growth of a character, and the heroine is an ordinary person who works hard to live like us, which is really touching. Compared with those female protagonists who can achieve great success through systematic cheats, you can clearly feel that the heroine of this book also works hard, but her progress is very slow. It is not that she does not work hard enough, it is just because of her "qualification", just because ordinary immortal cultivators like her are also working hard to live. I can even relate to the author's delicate descriptions. Seeing the heroine dare to face the bleakness of life, dare to face the dripping blood, adapt to the environment, integrate into this cruel world of immortality, watch her grow step by step, and witness her go to a wider world. This feeling is more powerful than letting me read a refreshing novel! This is why people always love long flowing water. After all, cool writing can only bring temporary pleasure, and this pleasure will become dull as the number of times increases, but the trickle can merge into a river. When one day, the heroine looks back at the past with emotion, and we who accompany her are full of thoughts. The story continues, and I sincerely hope that the author lives up to expectations, is not afraid of slander, and is not afraid of the road ahead. Just write what you write and love what you love. Really convinced! Although I know that the audience of this novel is definitely not as large as that of Shuangwen, but those who like Shuangwen can leave some way for those of us who like long flowing water. You may return directly if you don't like it, but before you leave, you read less than thirty minutes of one-star negative reviews and then drop the sentence "nonsense literature". You really don't care about our life and death! The theme of this book is closely related to the word "everyday life". If you turn a blind eye and then find out that there is no golden finger and no Long Aotian to start, can you blame the author for talking too much because he really has no sense? Looking at those low-scoring comments, it all sounds like they are just not to your liking. You don't have to love them, but don't hurt them. In your eyes, the running accounts and daily life in countless chapters have built a very detailed and complete world of cultivating immortals in my opinion. The heroine's careful calculation makes every step of her steps very solid, and it is real because of the details. I never think this is a shortcoming. (So some negative reviews are attributed to the author. You have really read too many free novels. It's rude and incompetent to blame Joe.) In your eyes, the heroine is stupid and weak. In my opinion, she tries her best just to live. She lives very hard and seriously every day. She walks very slowly, but she never stops for a step. She looks fragile, but she can burst out with tenacious vitality. (It's about growth + poor qualifications. Some people don't look at the process but only look at the results. If they deny all the efforts of others in one sentence, you will end up becoming the person you hated most)

It looks good, and I don't feel it's scratchy at all. It's just daily life. Third comment, it's so funny. I feel that the heroine has a feeling of surrendering her wisdom but has not yet finished. This little Yinzi still thinks about betraying the heroine after so long. She picks up the bowl to eat and puts down the bowl. Haha, heroine, what do you think? ? Teach him knowledge and give him resources, and then you have no means of control at all, and you also say that you need manpower. Haha, you just met this not-so-simple villain, and he is only at the second level of Qi training. With the resources given to him, wouldn't it be possible to find someone who is honest and honest in the future to be promoted? ? If you don't kill him, it's just leaving trouble for the future. This kid is thinking about backstabbing all the time, and he has no sense of gratitude. He's so vicious. In one review, I wanted to drop one star, but then I gave an example of Dou Po? ? Putting aside the abruptness, I don't agree with the author's point of view. It's clear that the Holy Girl is more talented than Yan Emperor because of her love brain. Although the author gives a bowl of chicken soup with more important examples of resources, he can totally make up his own. Why does the Holy Girl of the Ancient Clan have to use Yan Emperor's Medicine to be so directional? It's okay if you're right, but the problem is that the saint's talent is really stronger. It is said everywhere in the article that the saint's talent is not as good as that of Yan Emperor. To be honest, few protagonists have the best talent in the entire world view, and Yan Emperor is no exception. The talent of the protagonist in this article is even worse. I admit that resources are very important, but the author's point of view here conflicts with mine. Second review, emm, although it's still pretty good, I'll drop another star. The more I read, the more chicken soup the author outputs. The problem is that some chicken soup is a bit inconsistent with my concept.

Yyds is the best mortal heroine, the character is flesh-and-blood, emotional, full of character and admirable Looking back, there are many shortcomings. The biggest drawback is that the man in the valley provides spiritual stones, resources, teaching skills, and protection... There are many smart people. This kind of investment, which can be called dedication, can only be seen in other books where the male protagonist meets a noble person by chance. If they become a couple later, it will be more like that, hiss. They helped in every possible way in the early stage and threw themselves into their arms in the later stage. After reading a little further, I felt that the protagonist was a bit silly and sweet.

This book is very realistic. Unlike the disciples of the sect who spend a lot of money in those books, the heroine lives a very hard life and sees the ordinary people in the world of immortality. "Probably in this world, there are really people who, even though they know the world is hard, are still focused and move forward courageously."

I like it. This is my favorite novel about cultivating immortals. The writing is really good. After reading this, I can no longer read other novels about cultivating immortals.

This is the slowest novel I've ever read. It's more than 500 chapters and I haven't built the foundation yet. It seems that building the foundation will take at least 800 chapters [Thoughts] He is becoming more and more verbose, and he also likes to talk about big principles. When reading a novel, he has to listen and teach [thinking]

This film about cultivating immortals is very realistic. It really is about the life of a cultivator at the bottom. The heroine has some golden fingers but very few. Every step the heroine takes needs to be planned. Every opportunity is more due to her own day-to-day accumulation, planning, courage and fierceness. The most valuable thing is that this article not only depicts the heroine, but also depicts the lives of some small characters. You will feel that it is very real. From the comparison of these characters, although the heroine is at the bottom, she is still a lucky person. I really like the way the author portrays the characters. I hope this article is longer, it is really good-looking, the first five stars from Tomato!

It's quite good-looking, at the level of "you won't want to put it down once you pick it up", but I guess not many people like it. After all, those who say they want to watch uncensored movies all day long actually can't stand it even if they really don't have these things. The author majors in biology, and a lot of professional knowledge cannot be understood by reading popular science. Moreover, the author is obsessed with "ecosystems". Sometimes she has to be verbose for a long time to explain what she understands as "all things interact with each other." It seems that she has too many words, but after understanding what she wants to express, it is okay. After all, it is not normal for someone who majored in agriculture and forestry... Moreover, the "unwillingness" that runs through it from beginning to end is well reflected. The heroine starts from the humble little Karami, and there is no powerful golden finger to help, and even anyone can bully her. However, even if her face was burned, her hands were broken, her fingers were bitten off, and she might die in the next second, the heroine never bowed her head. Her almost crazy obsession and unwillingness to live are vividly displayed on the page.

I really like it. The heroine's qualifications are very poor. Fortunately, she still has a golden finger and she can barely hold on. Now she is holding on and finally feels like wanting to get up. But compared to ordinary people, she is lucky enough. This is not a cool series. It's really beautiful. I've been following it for more than half a year, but it's just too difficult. It's a pity.

I heard that Chapter 101 is a slow growth story. The writing is quite interesting and not monotonous. It can create various emotions of the heroine. The protagonist and supporting characters are all normal people. There are no inexplicable people. The plot is reasonable. I like the description of the supporting characters' vision.

It's a very interesting novel. If you like a slow pace, you can read it. The writing is wonderful, but it's really too slow. [Petrochemical] The 1,000,000-word protagonist is still practicing, but if you only look at the content and framework, it's really exciting. I probably won't be able to see the protagonist reach the golden elixir in my lifetime [face covering] [face covering] Because it's 700 chapters and the foundation hasn't been established yet.

Excellent: High-quality immortality writing, immersive plot, rigorous logic, and the female protagonist is very diligent in cultivation. Disadvantage: Subjectively, there are too few emotional lines, such as friendship, family affection, kindness, hatred, love and hate, and little psychological activity. I can't feel the heroine's evaluation and feelings of something. It feels like a cold robot is following the program. The heroine has no human emotions. The reader's reading experience is like living in a steel city, without trees, sunshine and soil, which is a bit monotonous. This won't last long. But the quality of this article is worthy of five stars. It is almost directly far superior to Tomato So's article, and it is the best in the field of cultivating immortals.

Sisters, this book is suitable for those who are short of books and like fairy tales. Those who like deep and self-reliant books should also come and read it. I have been reading books for 12 years. Old bookworms, this book gets better and better as it goes on. You will find that at the end, some people give low scores in the comment area. I suspect it is malicious competition among peers. I never write reviews because I am lazy. I have read the book for 12 years. The last one was about the female princes in troubled times. When I read it, it was not popular. What is the popularity now? This is a completely underestimated female strong series. You must read it. The more you read, the better it gets. If you are a fan of the book world and like strong women, you will come here when you see this comment.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good book. The writing is excellent, the logic is perfect, and there are little Easter eggs from the author everywhere. . A few golden fingers are just the thing [laughs]. . Just too thin. . Come on come on

First of all, the heroine of this novel is an ordinary person. Her cultivation is very slow. The author's writing is very detailed. If you like cool stories with big heroines, you can avoid this. The second point is that the author describes how female monks have children and damage their foundation. There are a lot of descriptions of low-level male monks marrying wives and concubines. Although there are a few descriptions of female monks recruiting husbands and husbands to raise their reputations, there are very few. The third point is that there are relatively good descriptions of female characters in it, but I feel that it is not as brilliant as the descriptions of male characters. The description of human nature in it is more realistic, and there is no love and love. Women and men want to be stronger for the sake of resources. But in about 200 chapters, the author describes a woman who is not very good in terms of senses, maybe for comparison. The following are some immature suggestions from me. If you want to write more outstanding female characters, you can actually use male characters to contrast the female protagonists. Regarding pregnancy and childbirth, I feel that since we have all become immortals, the stronger the cultivation level, the easier it will be to have children. There is no need for the author to be trapped in the framework of the old novels written by feudal women who cultivated immortality. Powerful female cultivators should have more powerful partners and their relationships should be more indifferent once they become immortal cultivators. Everyone is working for their own future, and only those with no hope of breakthrough want their descendants to inherit the mantle. Becoming a Taoist couple is more about sharing resources. This is more in line with human nature. After all, people who have lived long enough have no impulse towards love. The author's writing style is really good. Occasionally, some things are repeatedly mentioned, such as the fish problem. In fact, there is no need to repeatedly emphasize that the heroine does not like to eat fish. If I can slowly revise the article, this novel will be better. I hope the author will update every day hehe😀😀😀 I saw the latest chapter, and the most unpleasant man appeared. Whose name is Yin? Yes, I can't even remember the character's name because he hates it! How come he can do better than the heroine even though he has two spiritual roots to pick up the leak, and then he doesn't know how to be grateful? What is the significance of this role? There's no point in looking good! The heroine is portrayed by the author as not caring about appearance, but the author seems to prefer good-looking characters. It has been more than 700 chapters and the foundation has not been established yet! It's really dragging. It looks good, but it's too dragging.

The worst thing I have seen so far is cultivating immortality. Cultivating immortality casually has no opportunities, no resources, no secret realms, and no golden fingers. You are either making money or cultivating. Instead of caring about others, it is better to improve yourself. But as one's cultivation level increases, the sense of urgency towards higher cultivation level also becomes higher, and each mountain becomes higher than the other. Fang Ming understood that Si Linggen had built his foundation at the age of 20 and could already be considered a genius in the market. However, the process was almost fatal and boring. It was scary to think about forging the body for 10 hours a day for several years, drawing talismans for half a day, and eating the same food every day. I knew I was on the verge of building a base, but I almost cried when I went into the jungle for a Tongmai Pill and was almost eaten by a mysterious mysterious fish. However, the dual spirit root monks in the sect can make jokes and talk about love at will, and they still have to wait for their cultivation to grow older. They basically sit and wait for foundation building. Foundation building is just a matter of feeding them into their mouths, and they can go to secret realms whenever they want. This difference in treatment is actually just because of the number of spiritual roots. If we understand that the starting point is the sect and avoid taking many detours, perhaps high-level foundation building will be available by now. It's sad. Fang Ming understood that in this world where the weak are beaten and the weak are robbed, there is no resentment or dissatisfaction. All unfairness is just a lack of strength. Looking forward to the next story even more

I have read Chapter 32. Although the author does not describe the magnificent world of cultivating immortals, and his writing style is not very brilliant, he writes about the daily life of cultivating immortals in a bland way. This is the first novel I have seen on Tomato. Com, and I like this type of novel. Although I feel that this book is not favored on the Long Ao Tianwen Tomato website, I still want to say to the author: Come on! After reading the latest one, you don't have to write so much if you include personal information. The narrative contains too much life insights. What's going on? Watching a little girl grow up step by step in cultivating immortality is like developing an idol.

The writing is quite good, and the review is mainly to remind newcomers to have psychological expectations before reading it. The heroine of this book is either a genius at the beginning, and has all the conditions and resources, but she is a low-level immortal cultivator with poor spiritual roots and no resources. The heroine has always been I work very hard to make money and live, so I mainly write about making a living and living. Don't talk about verbosity and burdens. Just like the lives of poor people nowadays (without cars, houses, and savings), they are careful about their income, rent, expenses, etc. The people at the bottom of the world of immortality are not much better. After reading it carefully, I think the writing is pretty good, compared with most other books.