Tomb Robbery: Cultivation to Immortality to the Bronze Door

In terms of character design, except for the heroine who saves everyone, almost everything else is perfect, especially Fatty. When I saw the heroine saving people, I wanted to give up the book. Especially when I saved Shen Qianyu and when I put myself in danger because of saving Miao Fengxi, I was really annoyed and almost gave up. But I think the emotional line is okay. It may be because the heroine has never been in love (before), so she was embarrassed when facing Xiaohua and sometimes was particularly desperate. But I think this is the behavior of a person who treats feelings sincerely. So it's normal. It's not a licking of a dog or anything. She treats the one she loves very sincerely and passionately and doesn't care about other people's opinions. As for the aspect of the heroine "Madonna", I think it is also a manifestation of the heroine's avoidance of the world. Just like love, because she has never been in contact, it is impossible to treat it in the most correct way in the eyes of the world. Because she loves the world, she not only loves Xiaohua passionately, but also loves all innocent people. Just like a little brother who is like a god, he will save everyone who wants to live.

Look, look, must see! The plots are intertwined, the characterizations are very delicate, and the characters all follow the original work. The emotional line between Hua Ye and You Zhi really touched me! I hope to continue to update and give this book a complete ending.

I will really love this book to death. There is no awkward OOC, no weird emotional line (now it seems that I am going to have a smooth relationship with Xiao Hua), and there is no clinging to the protagonist group. Basically, it is my own new story. The suspense story written is so touching. My scalp is numb when I read it. I love every little copy. The heroine is a cultivator with great love, but please note that the great love here ≠ the Holy Mother. Everyone, go and see! ! !

It's so exciting, so beautiful. The CP is Xiaohua, the female protagonist is an immortal cultivator, and she and Xiaohua are a perfect one-on-one match.

I quite like it. I thought it would be boring when I read the name at first, but I was still amazed, especially the part where they were trapped and in a loop. The female protagonist really couldn't stand it. She felt a bit like she wanted to use herself to save the common people. In short, it was the "Mother's Heart", but she really couldn't stand it. I really liked it. Update soon.

Great piece! I see divinity in Youzhi. She is not a big heroine. She doesn't have that kind of drive, but her past was isolated from the world. She was born in an equal environment. She was educated in fraternity and freedom. Although she is very powerful, her power is used to save people, and this is without asking for anything in return. This is almost impossible to see in people, because people are inherently selfish. Who doesn't have selfish desires? Youzhi is different, because God has destined her to be a god. She cannot be climbed high, but can only be viewed from a distance. She meets Xiaohua, who is sensitive and resistant to outsiders, while Youzhi loves freedom and is willing to help everyone within his ability. It cannot be said that when she met him, she redeemed him, or he made her her. It seemed that the two of them coexisted and could not be separated. Maybe this is fate. Those who cultivate the great road should have boundless love, but there are so many great roads. How can we love universally if we don't enter the secular world? How can we love big if we don't have small love? Youzhi came to this world and met the secular world. She could have become a god, but she began to have karma. She met too many people and helped too many people. Where there is big love, there will be small love. Only the ferryman knows the warmth and warmth. The tree has branches, this world is your calamity.

It's really beautiful, why do I feel like the rating is not very high [crying][crying]

The writing is very good, and the characters in it are well created, without any breakdown, just as I imagined. It's not about falling in love passionately from the beginning. Thinking about the little flower girl reaching middle age and going through thousands of sailings, she should be rational and restrained (I am so anxious that I want to let the male and female protagonists go straight to the topic quickly, woo woo woo, I am so anxious!!!) In short, can it be faster? ! ! The ball is gone

Very nice! ! ! The heroine is the kind of gentle and tough monk in the old fairy tale drama who takes protecting the world as her own duty. She has great love! ! ! Don't talk about her as the Holy Mother. What if the person who calls her the Holy Mother is saved by you?

It's really good-looking, very logical, and the characters are very close to the original work. I just don't know why the rating is so low. I highly recommend this book. The analysis of the heroine's character or other protagonists and supporting characters is very good, as well as the emotional aspects. I highly recommend everyone to read this book carefully. The story is also very novel, but it does not conflict with the original work. It is equivalent to a story connected on the basis of the original work. Although the heroine is a cultivator, she must also abide by the laws of heaven. If she does not abide by the laws of heaven, a series of accidents will occur. It is highly recommended.

Good looking! ! To start over in this world, you have to give up everything in the other world. The setting of aura is so novel! I really like it 😍. Each character has its own characteristics and is very vivid. It's great. Come on and update it! !

At the beginning of this book, you can repeatedly dislike the character of the heroine. You always feel that the way it is handled is sorry for her age, which is hundreds of years old in the world of immortality. Many unreasonable behaviors appear on her, and then it is wrong to say that the Holy Mother is not right, because she is not the one who can accept other people's bad treatment of her, but continues to be good to others or treat other people's She regards things as her spreading mother's heart. Only when you look at it later can you understand that she treats all living beings equally and loves all living beings. She has her own judgment standards. She is really bad-hearted but has a bottom line because she respects her own heart. She helps any living being she thinks she should help and save. She is actually very happy and absolutely in charge of herself. , So when you see her core and her spiritual state later on, everything makes sense again, so I kept jumping around and wanted to give up, and then I was attracted again as I watched. The further I got to the back, the more I couldn't help myself, and I experienced a very happy moment. I think this article can also be regarded as Hua'er Ye's redemption article. There is a woman like this She loved him unreservedly and helped him. She was an evenly matched love and a soul mate who came to heal his scars. It was hard to imagine that Mr. Hua'er could have such a matching female character by his side without feeling out of place. But in the end, he forgot his true love and his sunshine finally left him... What a pity...

Although the ending came a bit suddenly, I still liked this book very much. What attracts me the most is probably the author's writing style. The gentle breeze and drizzle are continuous, which makes me feel that the author is a very gentle person. Although this book is written in the first person, it is really not obtrusive or dramatic at all. The plot is exciting, and the writing is particularly delicate, making you deeply immersed in it. I like this sentence very much: Being able to meet is already a lucky draw. Only a very deep fate can keep walking on the same road, going to the same place, and meeting the same person. It is better to give yourself back first, give others back to others, and let the trees become trees and the flowers become flowers. Maybe there aren't many emotional scenes in the whole book, but I just feel like they love each other very much. You can live alone, but you can't seem to live without each other. This book is really nice, it feels like it can expand your vision and cultivate your mind...

It's very interesting. I didn't expect to find a good book with such a complete logical thinking and storyline. But the ending is too hasty. I hope there will be a second book to continue it.

It's a story I like very much. The author's writing is very good. I read it in one sitting. The warm scene of everyone making jokes together made me feel very happy. But I couldn't stand the knife and stopped when I saw the end of the second volume. I skipped directly to the last chapter and still got hit by the knife. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.

Tonic be, this is probably the least OOC thing I have ever seen, can you please he, forgetting is more terrifying than death

Ahhhhhhhhhhh [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], it goes straight to my heart. The author, please forgive me for skipping N chapters. It's not because it doesn't look good, I just wanted to see the ending and skip the sad part. The heroine's character really irritated me. Some friends who read the book may think that the heroine is a virgin, but this is her charm. She has divinity, compassion❤ and all the beautiful qualities in the world. Because of her identity as a divine tree, her entire clan was wiped out, but this did not become a reason for her to hate the world. She still maintained her divinity and compassion. Her "Mother's Heart" did not hurt anyone. On the contrary, she always protected others by hurting herself. Maybe you will be angry at some plot points when reading it, but it is not her who is wrong, but those who have evil intentions. If I were the one being helped, I would be grateful for the existence of such a god; but if I were the one helping, I would not be as pure and kind as she is. So, she is a very good god.

The characters written by the author have a sense of the original work. The heroine felt a bit like a virgin in the early stage, but after seeing the true understanding in the later stage, this kind of persistence in sticking to her heart is even more rare and valuable. In the later stage, Xiaohua and Sister Shu are so sweet! [Adoration] But don't worry, the heroine in the plot saves people who are worth saving. There is no disturbing plot of a white-eyed wolf. Most of the writing in the article does not seem to be in the original work, but this kind of originality is more rare and valuable among fans. There are quite exciting plots in the story, and the male and female protagonists are also warming up their feelings in life and death. The plot is tense and relaxed, and relaxed and relaxed. Summary: This is a good article!!! [Like] (ps: I have not read the original work. The opinions about the original work are summarized from the comments of book friends. If there are any mistakes or omissions, please do not blame me)

Although it is a fan, it has its own soul. The writing is really good, far better than I expected. Please update it soon~

I even suspected that it was not an author. In the beginning, I felt that the heroine had flaws, which made people mad. However, in the end, the writing became more and more interesting, but the ending was be, no, no, I didn't want to be. Really, this is the Tomato Tomb Raider fanfic with the best plot in my opinion. You must read it.

This book is really good! First of all, the character of the heroine is very interesting to me. She is a cultivator who is kind and decisive, and has great love but is not a virgin. Secondly, I also admire her view of love very much. She will spend time and energy on love, but will not be hindered by love. Falling in love with her is like being loved by a god. Like the mortals Ming prefers, he sees not only you, but also the world; in the end, this is a story that revolves around the heroine, which has little to do with the main plot. In fact, it is a bit like a new novel. The author's writing style is also very good, the action is smooth, and it is full of pictures! Believe me, I have been reading novels for 6 years! No loss in investing!

The plot is very good, but it's not over yet. I thought it was all over. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Much faster and faster! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

After reading the story, there were no turbulent waves in my heart, only a quiet emptiness. I was always immersed in the relationship between the two people in the book, and the whole process was smooth and natural. The growth of this emotion, from strangeness and alienation to mutual trust, every closeness grows naturally, every closeness comes naturally, without deliberateness, clean and sincere, making people feel comfortable. The ending of the story is not a happy one. After reading it, I always feel a touch of emptiness and sadness. But the blank ending allows the bond between the two to break free from the shackles of the ending. What surprised me the most was the author's delicate and three-dimensional portrayal of the two protagonists, especially their transparent and sober intellectual core. Their intelligence is not sharp and sharp, but their progressive and logical reasoning is like peeling off a cocoon, or like the breeze blowing away the clouds. The clear structure and step-by-step dismantling always make me shine. The full text is not a simple enjoyable article. On the contrary, the author's characterization of some plots has the soul of a book. Whether it was the introduction to the background of the heroine or some of her adventures, I saw that this was more than just a fanfic.

The heroine's design is not the kind of wireless cheating, and her character is always online without breaking down. Especially the relationship between her and Xiaohua is a natural one, one that complements each other and relies on each other. It is not dramatic but warm enough. The gods stayed in the world for this man. Jie Yuchen in the tomb robber finally no longer valued others but himself. He was very good. He had all the love of the gods.

Tomato is a very good fanfic, come on

It's very, very good-looking. Excluding the n-points of damage caused by be to me, from the perspective of the rhythm, setting, and description of the article, it is a rare and good article among pirated fans. There is no golden finger to artificially seduce the gods. It respects the world view of the original work and fills in a lot of pitfalls of the third uncle. The original characters do not have OOC. Because it is not a cool and white text in the traditional sense, the score is a bit low, but I can rate it at 9.5 (Deduct 0.5 For the final be woo woo woo woo woo [crying]

The writing is quite good. The heroine is a person who gives up her life for the sake of the world. She is really not the Virgin. She has written many times about respecting other people's choices and the heroine is willing to pay for his choices. The ending of the extra chapter is quite reasonable. Although, the author's writing is very good. I came from another book and I read it in one sitting.

The writing is really good. I hope the author will write a second part or add some emotional extras. In the end, I was really upset.

Love this one! ! The writing is really good. The timeline is what happened after the Bronze Gate. The characters in it all fit the characters of the original work, and the relationship between Xiaohua and Sister Shu is real! ! Very good! ! ! It's almost like making me fight to death. There are all kinds of thrilling events in the book, and there are also warm interactions between the male and female protagonists and the main characters. Oh my God, hahahahaha, I really love the interaction between Xiaohua and Sister Shu! ! Love to watch. Whether it's daily life or events, I love it! Not to mention that I have written many, many extras, I love them! ! Overall, this is the first stolen fanfic I've read recently, and I highly recommend it!

The logic of this book is very strong, and the heroine is gentle and powerful. It might be better if she was not so fraternal. Xiaohua's emotions in the early and late stages are really clear. You have to keep reading. Of course, the final ending may not satisfy most people [laughing]