Quick Travel: the Evil Stepmother of the Children of Destiny

The angle of this book is relatively new, and there are some similar themes, but not many. The first few chapters are a bit confusing and may easily dissuade readers, so I suggest that they be overhauled. [Smile] The writing is not bad, and the plot rhythm is not too fast, which makes people accept it. It is a potential stock [laughs][laughs] The role of the heroine gave me a sense of contradiction. I can't put it into words. The awakening of the supporting character in the second world is really eye-catching. Especially when the female partner Lin Ya said "I wish you an early escape", it really made people feel a little sad. It was like being at the junction of two worlds, with light ahead, but I could only reach out to touch it in the darkness, watching others gradually go away and take off their shackles, that kind of envy and desire... It's not that I think the heroine is a saint. The Virgin is a person who helps others regardless of the consequences, no matter what the person's character is, or what harm she will bring to others, and she also thinks she is kind and is irresponsible for her actions; obviously the heroine is not such a person, it is just the basic goodwill that people have, just out of basic humanitarianism. When she sees others in trouble, she subconsciously wants to help, but she is not brainless. I didn't want to comment at first, and the chapters weren't very long, but I realized that few people read this book, so I couldn't help but write it. Gold always shines. Even though few people read it, I still admire the author's spirit of persisting in writing. Therefore, the five stars are worthy of the author's hard work. I hope that there will be more male and female characters in the future. I hope that those characters will have their own thoughts and become vivid individuals, and the plot will be richer. Those will be more attractive to readers! ! [Blowing kiss] Come on! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

The settings can be good The more you look at it, the better it tastes! The subsequent settings are getting more and more amazing!

It's okay. I've finished reading it.

It's much more exciting than the previous one, and then Blade urges me to update it! ! ! ! Have you seen this box of blades? Get the address and send it immediately