Xianyinjiantu

It's comfortable to look at such an immortal person. Don't want a harem, don't take the initiative to fight, and write less. Women always find it disgusting for women to approach the male protagonist. The Road to Immortality doesn't need a heroine, so why does it need a heroine? Experience joys and sorrows? Watching the heroine die? And then sad? If it's so troublesome, it's better not to write a female protagonist in the first place

It's very strange, why for some people, immortality is meaningless as long as they don't get married and have children? If you don't seek immortality for the sake of immortality, you will never achieve immortality. Who can accept that his true love, blood relatives, and brothers will grow old and turn into withered bones in front of them? Meaninglessly involving the emotions of sentient beings in the mortal world will only hinder the path to immortality. Why do Taoist priests live in mountains and forests, in clear wilderness? Without touching the earthly roots, it is convenient to train one's nature and mind, and to seek immortality for the sake of immortality is difficult to achieve in myths and legends, let alone seeking immortality for other things. All living beings in the mortal world have no self-image, but my name is on the path to immortality. All kinds of desires are like flowing water. I only look at the world for the sake of immortality. All living beings have withered bones for thousands of years. Only those who live forever can be free and happy. When I saw Chapter 145, I could only say goodbye. In the Immortality Story, my father forcibly arranged for me to be a mortal heroine with no qualifications for spiritual practice. I said before that I would not get married and only wanted to seek immortality. Why did I suddenly change it later? The problem is that you haven't written the emotional line of your heroine well. You co-wrote the heroine without any emotional line, just to have a child? It's really amazing. It's innate at the beginning, and then there is it. After the plug-in is promoted to one level, there is no big improvement? What's the use of your plug-in? Is the situation so stressful? It was written well before, but why does it have to include such a female protagonist in Chapter 145? It's really strange. The heroine not only committed the taboo in the longevity novel, but also committed it again. It's true 6

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, and silently Turn off the phone, get up, open the refrigerator, and take out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition jasmine Lily tea, holding it tightly in my hand, slowly walked to the window, the scenery outside the window The color is a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually Gradually, it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, sight? It's blurry. I don't know if it's because I'm crying or because it's raining heavily. It could be both. Well, my mood is even more melancholy. I can no longer suppress my inner feelings. Feeling so bad, I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just TM update Who do you look down on in a few chapters...?

I don't know why the rating is so low, but I feel it's more than a star and a half better than those outright mindless articles.

The book is good, the content is substantial, the plot is not cliche, and it makes people want to read more. Although there are some minor problems with the age of the data, overall it is a good work, and I hope it will remain so and continue to be read.

It's super cool, I hope the protagonist can keep this style [laughs]

The writing is really good, the writing ideas and the storyline are also pretty good. It's rare that I've seen a good book recently.

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง I like this style, the rhythm is just right

I feel that this is extraordinary. If you practice Taoism without any desire or pursuit, and don't even have family, love or friendship, then can you still be considered a human being? It's better than being made into a stone! The disadvantage is that the leveling pressure is too harsh, it is innate at birth, and if the breakthrough is too slow, it will look very deliberate...

I thought it was just like that when I saw the name, but it turns out it's pretty good!

This rating is a bit low. From the perspective of me, an eight-year old bookworm, it should be above nine points.

To be honest, the writing is quite good. The longevity novel either has no female protagonist, or it is a female great Luo Jinxian who can be arbitrary for eternity. There is no mortal worthy of my love. The levels of life are different. No matter how beautiful a person is, they will be nothing more than bones in the grave after a hundred years. There is no way for people to fall in love with ants...

Is there a female protagonist? If so, then don't write too much.

Come on, come on, well, as for the heroine, there are no requirements. Anyway, it's okay not to write a single heroine, and then I hope to write the feeling of doing whatever I want. Although there are no battle scenes in the front, I hope that sometimes I can still write a little more detailed and fantasy space. As for combing my hair upside down or maids, it doesn't matter. What I want to be clear about is whether cultivating the Supreme Being forgets one's feelings (not ruthless, nor unfeeling), or the world of mortals refines one's heart. Still, to experience all kinds of life, but to be free from constraints, I hope you won't be completely emotionless, that is, don't deliberately pursue one thing and thus give up one thing (that is, if you have a crush on a mortal, then accompany him through a story or state of mind for decades or centuries. As for whether you are willing to embark on the path of spiritual practice, it depends on the writing method)

After reading Chapter 182, the subject matter is novel, the plot is full, the characters are distinct, and the upgrade is not slow. I think it is good to have a wife. Do you have to be alone to live forever? Can't you spend the best time of your life with your loved one? If the meaning of immortality is to survive alone in this lonely world, then what is the meaning of immortality? So I think it's very good to have a wife

I don't like Que's. I think books with a lot of tomatoes are either too busy or too leisurely. This one currently suits my taste. It doesn't have too many bloody plots (similar to a master-disciple romance) and the ducks of the protagonist's relatives are really lovable. The magnanimity that an immortal should have is not bad at all, and he is busy in his leisure time. The feeling is also great. I dug a hole and filled it in just a few chapters. I feel that digging a big hole in the early stage will often kill myself. The rhythm control is too demanding, so I think I can give a five-star rating. I poured some seafood soy sauce on the boiled vegetables, which is refreshing and salty [laughing] and it's done. (The above opinions only represent a subset of mine. I have little talent and knowledge and can't think of any descriptive words. Please click pen. It may be that I haven't read for a long time and my requirements are too low. Haha, the author is very disrespectful!)

It's worth it, the taste is still strong after all this time, and good stories must be persevered. It's been a long time since I've had such an engaging story. A good book is a creative direction that affects the protagonist's growth through the story. The rest is how to conceive a good story and growth direction.

Personally, I feel that reading a book means meditating. Everyone's ideas and styles are different. How about writing according to the readers' wishes? Do you think it's realistic? The author has the author's style. You can correct me, but don't make irresponsible remarks. If you think you can do it, then write your own book. The book is for leisure. Do you feel irritable after reading a book? I wonder what your personality is like! Personally, I think this book is okay. Although it has shortcomings, the general topic framework is very good!

Why is it only rated 8.3? This should be a book rated 9.3. In recent years, there have been more and more protagonists with the surname Gu, among which the character "" is almost standard. For example, "Tong Xian Ling Tu" by Gu Changhuan, there are many more that I can't remember at once, but there are quite a lot anyway. Apart from the fact that the difference between a warrior and a cultivator is not clearly explained, it gives the impression that you can become an immortal if you have good martial arts qualifications. The plot, description, and reasoning are all very good.

It all feels good, but I hide too much from my family. Wouldn't it be better to give my family a little more confidence? You must recognize the family love in this life. In this worldly world, you are already strong enough. There is no need to hide it. I feel that the protagonist treats his junior brother and the Taoist priest much better than his family. I really can't understand it. Also, if this heroine really can't keep up with the rhythm and finds a reincarnation, will she still be the heroine?

There are some that are really good to read, I like this kind of thing, but there are too few... I don't know what will happen next, but I hope the author will continue to work hard😊

I don't understand why the rating is so low. Although it's not as good as Chen Xun from Zi Ling Feng Xue, it is still much better than those works with a score of 9.5. I couldn't find anything to read, so I looked at the ones that were recommended to me, because I used to look for books based on their ratings during the Tomato book shortage, and it turned out to be really annoying. Although this work has some flaws, they are still acceptable and the flaws do not hide the good qualities. The story is told very well, the characters are three-dimensional, the names are well thought out, and there is no big problem with the logic. Encourage! I've read the latest chapter and it's been very enjoyable so far. The author's world view is very grand, but it also tests the basic mentality. I hope to continue to grasp the rhythm and perform stably in the future, because many authors really stretch their hips in the later period. Looking forward to updating. . .

The reason why there are no five stars is that the male protagonist actually gets married. If you want to see immortality, you don't need a love line.

Overall, 4 stars! There is a saying that this is a good longevity novel in Tomato, and the world structure has not collapsed (according to the theory of 9 as the extreme, for example: some novels have 9-1 golden elixirs, but here there are only 9-1 golden elixirs that will not produce 1st or higher flawless golden elixirs, five elements golden elixirs, chaotic golden elixirs, etc.). The characters are relatively complete. Everyone has their own considerations. Why do we say they are relatively complete? Maybe the author doesn't like to write sad stories. There are no real villains here. I personally like to call them opponents. Their evil is too simple. What I like most is the opponent's essay. The author also knows that the sun cannot grow alone and the yin alone cannot grow. Without the description of the opponent's characters and the sparks of collision, it always feels a little less interesting. Another thing I have to complain about is that I always feel that the main character is a bit boring. Finally, the rhythm is a bit criticized for systematic writing. It wants to reflect reality, but it is too outrageous, so it is a bit awkward to sew. All in all, apart from a few flaws in the rhythm, the rest of the story is still very good, and it can be seen that the author tried his best.

Life is a practice; destiny is a kind of destiny. Everything in the world has its own rules, and everything in the world has its destiny. Let nature take its course, which is a kind of free and easy spirit; regardless of gains and losses, it is a kind of open-mindedness in life.

Damn it, author, come on, write it so well, come on, write a few thousand chapters, and do some publicity, you will definitely become famous. In the future, when 3D animation becomes more mature, you will engage in animation, and it will definitely become popular, come on, write it! Such a good book, why isn't it popular? Come on, author

Give it a five-star rating! Well, I don't know how to type and copy a little bit, but I couldn't stop reading the whole book. The author's narrative rhythm and plot control are very good, and the character creation is also very three-dimensional and vivid. I highly recommend it to everyone!

Ah, this is a great author. The book is okay. It is very good in Tomato. However, I suggest you make it clear in the introduction whether there is a heroine and whether she is a mortal. Otherwise, those who read the book without a heroine will abandon the book when they get married. Those who read the book with a heroine will be dissuaded by the seemingly ruthless plot at the beginning. This is just a personal suggestion. The above

I have been short of books for a long time, and finally came across a good classic book about cultivating immortality, with a large number of words. The book contains sect morals, love between children, analysis of human nature, monster fighting and upgrading, a grand world map, secret realms, conflicts and struggles, magical skills, and level-leap challenges. The framework is old-fashioned, but the story is novel, eloquently told, not boring, and the realm setting is unique. The writing is fluent, the language is interesting, there are burdens and foreshadowings, it is interesting and worth reading. I only had this feeling when I read books like Piaomiao Journey, Star Change, Futian Clan, Devouring the Starry Sky, I Am the Only Immortal, The Strongest and the Youngest Abandonment, Covering the Sky, Killing Immortals, Immortal Rebellion, Mortals, Douluo Continent, Fighting to Break the Sky, Buddha Is Tao, Legend of the Seven Realms, etc. I hope that the author will be as diligent as the Three Young Masters of the Tang Family, I Eat Tomatoes, Potatoes, Xiao Ding, Chen Dong, Goose is Lao Wu, Zhai Zhu, Mao Ni, Wang Yu, Er Gen, Yue Qianchou, etc., And come up with more masterpieces. This book title is too literary, too general, not overbearing and catchy, does not fit the theme of immortality, and does not point out the world view in the book. It is recommended to choose a title of about 3 to 4 to 5 words without punctuation. Titles such as Journey into the Miao, Change of Stars, and Battle Through the Sky are both catchy and easy to remember, and also clearly define the theme of the book.

Oh, stop talking, all of you. I've basically finished reading this book. Saw it for 25 years. In July. I deleted it twice during this period and then retrieved it again. I always feel like two people wrote this novel alternately. Either it is very interesting and beautiful for a period of time. Or it just seems uninteresting and unspectacular for a period of time. Alas, I can't think of a word to describe it. I can only say that overall this book is quite good. Basically highly rated. Many people watch it. As long as you read it to the end, you will have a different experience. If you really can't find a book to read, I suggest you read "The Immortal Path of Alchemy". Baixi Zhoushi These two novels are really good. From being submissive in the early stage to being powerful in the later stage, the plot is exciting. Fascinating. If you are short on books, you can read it. Let me reiterate, I am not asking for help, I just don't want good books to be buried. I have read the latest chapters of those two books. All pretty good. If it doesn't feel good, it may be because there is too little plot. Give him an extended plot. I haven't read it for three to five days, and I'll read it again if there are too many. It's cool.