Geniuses in the World of Immortality, Don't Cry, God Juan Has Ascended

Good book. Following along, I feel the writing is very good. At the beginning, the heroine is in the lowest desperate situation. The heroine has a positive attitude. She does not envy or hate, nor does she want to rely on others. Instead, she relies on herself and practices hard. When faced with opportunities, she can remain rational, know what she wants, have clear goals, and have strong willpower. When facing the enemy, she is not blinded by hatred. Instead, she can assess the situation, know herself and the enemy, and know how to take advantage of the situation. When she knows that she is defeated, she will first plan her escape and protect herself. Later, she will find out her shortcomings and work hard. Take care of the weak within your ability. The heroine has a healthy mentality, clear goals, reasonable planning, and firm actions. She hopes to continue to display the spirit of Juan Shen in the future. Just don't devote too many chapters to the broken sect and the female supporting cast. You can refine it a little bit and stop at the point. People can guess that the successor of the broken sect will continue to kill the heroine, and then become the heroine. Of course, this is only said without knowing what will happen next. Looking forward to the power of the god Juan.

The heroine is really hardworking. But also because of this hard work and resilience, I really like it I really love this heroine, but it gets a little too fast towards the end. Anyway, it feels a little unfinished at the end, but overall it's still very interesting, so I'll give it five stars.

Originally, this whole article was good. The heroine is very courageous and awesome. She never gave up no matter what difficulties she encountered. She didn't complain even if her sword heart was taken away. Everything was fine. But I beg you, why does this female supporting role have so many scenes? The main reason is that this female supporting character is disgusting. The female supporting character talks more than the female protagonist in one picture. I really I don't understand why other people say such disgusting things when they are talking, why don't they just interrupt and insist on waiting for him to finish. Although this is very unqualified, it is really frustrating and annoying to listen to. Then I listened to the whole novel and it was full of tea talk and disgusting words from the female protagonist, and then everyone criticized the heroine. It was really annoying and annoying. Despite this, I will continue to watch it, because I think the heroine is so charming. He is like a tough grass. Although he has been deprived of his luck, he is really strong. Every time he practices, he has to endure many times more pain than ordinary people. It is really not easy. Just a rant [full] Forget it, I'm exhausted. I'm still not suitable for reading this kind of article. The later part is really too deliberate in order to create a face-slapping moment for the heroine to make the surrounding monks look too stupid. The heroine killed all the second-ranked people in that secret realm and jumped directly from 12th to 10th to 5th. First place, then second place, such a big jump can only show that the heroine is very good, a group of monks are still there to belittle the heroine, and talk about retaliation later, let me ask, it is second place, it can only show that the heroine is already talented. If the heroine defeats him, doesn't it mean that the heroine is more powerful? It sounds really annoying. Anyway, the heroine keeps practicing and the monks keep belittling and looking down on her. The heroine keeps slapping her in the face. The steps are exactly the same. It's not novel. [Rolls eyes] [Laughs awkwardly] Mainly, I think reading novels is just for fun. It's hard for me to hear that the heroine keeps being angry like this. Even though the heroine is already very powerful and powerful, all I hear is slander. It's very frustrating. I can only say that the golden finger of the heroine is too big.

This theme is so cool, it's a system created by the former Luck Girl who defeated the demons to steal other people's luck! I felt so sorry for the heroine in the early stage, hahaha! However, fortunately, I had a master from the beginning! ! Love it so much! ! !

The female protagonist works hard and has a good outlook on life. There is no Virgin and no male protagonist. Some of the foreshadowings that were laid are ended in a hurry. The pace is also faster later, but the writing is very good and the overall storyline is also very good. The essay about cultivating immortals is worth reading [Like]

The early preparations are quite detailed. As a native, the heroine only has an indomitable will to become stronger and has been working hard to practice. It is much nobler than the kind of people who obviously rely on various plug-ins to get promoted without any effort, but in the end stand on the commanding heights and say that everything they have is the result of their own efforts. The author's intention is quite inspiring. It's just that the heroine was really frustrated in the early stage and hoped to bottom out in the later stage.

[Note] It's wonderful, I look forward to the follow-up story of the heroine's counterattack as she grows up. Good people are rewarded. I hope the heroine's Grandpa Chu can be rescued, otherwise he will be too pitiful. He should silently protect the original owner and don't end up with a miserable ending. In the early stage, before the heroine grew up, she was robbed of her opportunity by the bad villain female partner with a systematic system. The heroine did not give up, relied on perseverance, was not afraid of death, and found wealth despite danger.

No CP, the heroine is strong, she relies on herself most of the time, she has a clear distinction between love and hate, a firm heart, and a dangerous growth path, but she is really good-looking. A person with great perseverance like her must be a strong person wherever she goes. I really admire her! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

I said before that I have been short of books for a long time and I am tired of reading any book, but this book rekindled my interest in reading. The heroine is really a strong and brave person, who has always followed her own path, is not afraid of the powerful, and practices hard. It is worth recommending!

Not bad! It is mainly about a female cultivator who, after being deprived of her luck and sword heart, still did not give up on herself, kept fighting hard and finally regained everything she lost, and eventually became a key figure in the victory of the divine world in the war between gods and demons. The main theme is the enterprising spirit that is still optimistic in the face of adversity! Personally, I don't think it's a good story, because the bad guys are quite happy when they are jumping around. The life of the heroine cannot be said to be particularly miserable, but it is also quite frustrating. Especially in the story, there are a lot of passers-by who speak mindlessly, which makes it very confusing to watch. The heroine often leaves time for others to use taunting skills on her. Overall, it is okay!

Fine! Read it in one sitting! Better than most fairy tales! Don't talk about anything else, just the battle. Other novels just say that the heroine wins! There are no descriptions of martial arts, combat skills, or battle scenes. This book describes them all, and they are substantial.

It's great. This is the only one I like among the many themes about cultivating immortals that I have seen. And they all have the same heroine

It's beautiful, very exciting, keep reading, five-star praise

Brothers and sisters, I've finished watching it for you. It's worth watching. The heroine of this book was deprived of her luck, but she did not feel jealous and faced the difficulties. The protagonist has a very distinctive character. She has always said that she had no talent for cultivation because her sword heart was stolen in the early stage, but she did not care about this. She worked very hard and she firmly believed in hard work. It will bring opportunities. In her case, I saw those people who work hard even if they have no talent, and their efforts get opportunities. In short, it is very beautiful. However, I am not good at writing and cannot write particularly good comments. You can go in and take a look. It is not a loss to invest [Like]

I think the writing is very good, the chapters, the number of words, and the content are pretty good. The heroine's strength is all developed by himself, and it doesn't have the feeling of a cool novel. Moreover, he has an attitude towards Dao that is not found in many novels. , Otherwise it will be poorly written, or it will be very voluminous. I saw in other comments that the heroine is too useless, and when others say bad things about him, he will not refute it. But if you look at it with your brain, it will be like this, that is, many people will comment on you with malicious intent. This is the way society is now, and if evil cannot prevail over good, then the right path cannot be strong from the beginning, and the evil cultivator cannot be weak since ancient times, right? , He will definitely have an opposite, and now that I have seen it, I feel that this book is still good.

This can be said to be the first non-CP book that I have read. There are more than 200 chapters, which is neither too much nor too little. The story is connected to the context and the author's writing style is great. I really like it! ! ! , Even though it's over, it's still unfinished. Not to mention other books, this book is really the number one in my heart after reading a book for so long. The background structure of the story is very good, and it is easy to read. There is no place where I can't read it. It's worth an 800-word recommendation but I can't write it anymore. It's so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It took me a whole day and a half to finish it, and my personal evaluation is pretty good. The reason is (the author's large material and the title are quite attractive, without the verbosity of other comeback novels. Two-thirds of the whole process is devoted to describing the heroine's counterattack. It is very suitable for viewers who like to watch battle plots, but I just can't read it. From the beginning I couldn't read it from beginning to end, and couldn't relate to the plot inside. I forced myself to pass the entire novel. Maybe the author's content is not that attractive to me, but the subject matter of this novel is really good, not wordy, and the cycle is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard)

It is really well written. The heroine's sword heart and luck were taken away in the early stage, and she was also turned into a funnel body by the system. In this case, it is normal for the heroine to have difficulty in promotion in the early stage. I think this is not a drag, but a normal plot development. Read it carefully. This is a novel about cultivating immortals that is worth following. It is really great.

It is a very exciting and well-written novel about cultivating immortals. The plot is ups and downs, and the various characters in the novel echo each other. Although it is a routine of cultivating immortals and upgrading, the heroine is resolute, open-minded and strong. Even when the sword is taken away, she still remains true to her original intention and insists on cultivating immortals. She uses her useless funnel physique to fight hard thousands, thousands, tens of millions, millions of times, countless times, to fight hard and fight her way to the heaven. This kind of perseverance is very touching! Diligence can make up for weakness, indeed! ! ! ... It's like learning to swim for the first time. Because I'm stupid, I don't understand it quickly, and I can't learn it as quickly or as well as others. I can only practice it again and again, and finally I get it, practice it slowly, watch the teaching video over and over again, slowly correct my movements, and finally learn it well. This feeling is very happy!

The ending is a bit hasty, but the flaws are not hidden. The overall story is still very interesting. The career line is very good, there is no emotional line between men and women, and there is no ambiguity. The heroine is very inspirational and powerful. Although it is a bit illogical that the heroine is so young at the beginning but has such a mature mind, but life is inherently illogical. What I like most is the hard work of the heroine and her determination when facing the villain. It is really good that even if the villain is really brainwashed, those people can still maintain a trace of clarity. Unlike some novels, there is no clarity at all and they are like robots [crying]. This is really good. The heroine does what she says without delay [crying] I really love her.

It's super good-looking. The heroine is devoted to cultivating the Tao just to regain what belongs to her. Although she has a master, water from afar cannot quench her thirst. She endures the injustice, injustice and pursuit she suffered along the way silently. Her Taoist heart is firm, and apart from practicing and fighting, Except for the time when she killed Liu Mei'er, nothing could arouse the heroine's emotional fluctuations. Except for the first few chapters in the secret realm, which were a bit frustrating to read, the rest of the time was about the entire process of cultivation. It was very enjoyable to watch. I cried the moment I got together with the master.

It's very good-looking, I like the heroine very much. The main theme is a scroll character. She is an all-around swordsmanship heroine who is dedicated to practicing without cp. It fits my fantasy of a heroine who practices immortality! The only drawback is that the ending is a bit sloppy.

I really like the efforts of the heroine in the early stage. This is the first heroine I have seen who has poor talent at the beginning, but sticks to her heart. The growth path of the heroine in the early stage is very interesting and reasonable (the later stage is also reasonable, but not as exciting as the early stage). I really like this kind of heroine. I really like to see the heroine's growth process alone. I also like to see the heroine grow up little by little. I also like that the heroine can stay calm at all times and treat things rationally. It's just a pity that I didn't see the fate of some bad things.

I have always liked the courage of the heroine to move forward. Although it was really hard in the early stage, she gained the love of her masters later on. I just felt that the later stages were too fast, but overall it is still very beautiful. It is worth recommending [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

This book really doesn't have any cheats. Everything was typed in slowly by the heroine bit by bit. This kind of character is really good and gives people positive feedback. God rewards hard work and hard work is useful. There is also the example of Nangong Yaner. It is really good. All people with great luck have common traits. I really like the heroine. Come on. PS: The progress is indeed a bit fast, and there are still a few pitfalls to be filled. I hope the author can write better in the next book! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Generally speaking, it is very interesting. From the beginning of bad luck to the hard work to become stronger, there is no obstacle in cultivation, and it becomes stronger step by step. However, there are many holes left unfilled in the end, such as the purpose of the original power that was found. For example, the puppet who helped the heroine in the space said that he would wait for the heroine to find him, but the heroine also forgot about it.

It's a pretty good non-CP book about cultivating immortality. It's the only book that made me stay up late to read recently. I kept on reading until the master took her to relax and have a big meal. Then I started reading without skipping a beat, because I felt that the growth in the front was exciting, and the days when there were people supporting me in the back were written without distraction. It is different from what I expected her to ascend to the upper world with her own strength and then fly to the upper world again in a new story. The author writes in a hurry later on, and the ending is also hasty.

The first few chapters are a bit long-winded, and a lot of space is devoted to the psychological activities of various people. Some of the middle chapters are also filled with conversations between passers-by A, B, B, and D. The progress of the last chapters is obviously accelerated, and there is a sense of urgency before the war. As a result, the last two chapters are quickly concluded. [Crying with laughter] Overall, it's pretty good, especially the story of Xiaolizi's step-by-step growth from a weak girl to a high-level monk. The writing is very touching, and the character creation of the heroine is also relatively successful. If this book can be expanded to another 2 or 300 chapters, it will be even more exciting! Goodbye, little Li'er, I wish you to continue to write your glorious life in the world of God~ Come on, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

This book is really good. I just started reading it and I haven't stopped now. After reading it, I really feel a little reluctant to leave it. Although the heroine's talent was taken away and her luck was transferred at the beginning, her relatives had no choice but to abandon him because it was his disaster and she could only survive it by herself. She did not complain about this, she was firm in her Taoism, went to the forest to experience alone, advanced in life and death, and worshiped the master after passing the test. Then, even though she thought the master was gone, she only recognized the master as one of the sects in the Void Sect, and practiced hard. When she arrived in the God Realm, because there was a war between immortals and demons at that time, and the heroine showed extraordinary talent, she had to hide her in the world of paintings. She could not come out until she cultivated to the Demon Lord. However, in the last battle of the war between immortals and demons, she came out in time and used the illusion-breaking technique to help the God Realm win. However, she was attacked by the Demon Lord and fell into a coma for 50 years. During these 50 years, there was almost no trace of the demon cultivator. The heroine's parents were found Cultivating in the spiritual world, the ending is very happy, and the Lord also knows the meaning of her lifelong struggle [laughing]

The story is very interesting, and the framework is also very good. A scrolling king keeps scrolling, and he is very perseverant, very persistent, and sets out for his own goals until he reaches a high level. I hope that everyone else has such determination, set out for their own goals, keep moving towards their goals, and become better and stronger.