Elf: Pick up the Light Stone at the Beginning

Give yourself five stars for a classic I want to create a more peaceful Pokémon world, one with not so much fighting and killing. After all, Pokémon belongs to Utopia, so why is it necessary to kill them? There is a villain in this book, but it is not a dark one. After already writing about Pokémon, isn't it an insult to the original intention of Pokémon? Regarding the protagonist, he is actually the son of the protagonist of my first book. It is roughly a book about urban powers, but in the Pokémon world, these so-called powers are useless. There were actually three versions of Lin Zhiya's character appearance, but in the end we decided to use Rico. After all, Rico is so cute! Closer to home, although my writing style is a bit immature, I think it is pretty good when it comes to combat descriptions. Whether it's tactics or language expression, I think it's still above average, not to mention top-notch. My book is a slow-burn novel, which is very different from the current mainstream cool novels. I hope everyone can appreciate my works carefully after reading my book review.

The book is very good. You should consider not writing too many emotional lines. The main thing is to write around Pokémon. I have read a book where the author only wrote about the main character looking for a slate. The Pokémon appeared on the road and I almost forgot what Pokémon there were. The author should work hard. There are really not many good books like this nowadays. Don't worry about those zz

Pokémon are all created equal, and their upper limits are endless. Good Pokémon are important, but everything depends on you. , I have followed this sentence and this book

Five stars for it, the plot is nothing to say, the slow-burning yyds, and the plot version is so cool! And I really like this kind of novel with several plots of cps. It's very exciting to read it, but I have a few suggestions. The author's writing style is not mentioned, but sometimes it reads a bit strange. There are some descriptions that feel like it doesn't need to be described in a long way. It's too complicated and seems protracted. The last point is that although I like to read The description of the love line, but if the author really wants to write the love line well, he can learn it when he has time. Some of the love lines are written, really, I can't say enough [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. In the end, the author's "libidity" should be restrained, otherwise I will not be able to read the novel one day if I am caught [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Very nice [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs] Also, the Pokémon pictures from Chapter 137 and beyond are all posted by me.

What is the author's composition? [What][What][What] It is mainly composed of four components: water, protein, fat and inorganic matter. Water accounts for about 55%, protein accounts for about 20%, fat accounts for about 20%, and inorganic matter accounts for about 5%. Water in the human body is distributed in intracellular fluid and extracellular fluid, and plays a role in maintaining normal cell functions. This water accounts for 50%-60% of the body weight and is the largest component of the human body. It can transport oxygen and nutrients and discharge waste. Every cell and important component in the human body has the participation of protein. Protein provides an important role for the human body and is the main component of human cells. Fat can provide heat and insulation for the human body, while inorganic substances are mainly calcium, phosphorus, magnesium and other elements, which are the main components of bones and teeth.

This is a very good book, someone who really understands Pokémon. The protagonist of the book is not invincible, has a low sense of system presence, is not poisonous, and is not a quasi-god or mythical beast. There is a female protagonist in the article, but her existence does not affect it. I don't comment much on this, and I don't know much about it, but this book is really wonderful. Now I want to talk about a huge shortcoming, that is, two chapters a day is not enough to read. The author should write more [smile][smile][smile]

The overall style is very warm and very comfortable to look at. After all, I am someone who has read thousands of books, and this book is among the best among Tomato Pokémon novels. Keep writing well, the future is limitless. My evaluation is: comparable to the crown

Why are there so many clouds and you don't even know ag? I don't know why ag read Lu's book? I remember that I read Lu's book before because it was a joke. The comment section of Lu's book said ag, right? I really don't understand what it's like to know that Lu doesn't know ag

If there is a heroine in this book, then I hope there will be less scenes, or there will be no heroine. The heroine should not appear too often. She only needs to appear once in dozens of chapters in the middle and later stages [Sending my heart]

Who knows where the dog king Xia Qiulin has gone?

I don't like to deduct one star from this good relationship. For other things, for example, the ratio of humanity and divinity of the mythical beast needs to be right, and Xiaohao's Suicune cannot be without the majesty of the mythical beast. Arceus is just fine. There is no need for other phantom beasts because the others either don't like humans or are more likely to bond with humans. Humanity can be increased under subtle influence, such as Jigeld in anime.

It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low?

Since the author has Leshilam, he can subdue the two dragons as the main force, and can also defend together

What I like very much is the detail in the author's second picture. Pokémon do not have qualifications. They may have individual differences, but they will not have them. That difference between qualifications. I really like it. Every Pokémon is equal, okay? Even the giant sting wasp can still beat up the fast dragon. Here I will name Mr. Long Du.

The logic of this book is relatively clear and the number of words is quite systematic. There are not many scenes. The protagonist has a good personality and cares about Pokémon (because in many Pokémon novels I have seen, although they also care about their Pokémon, there are not many protagonists who ask whether they dream of Pokémon and whether they want to fight or not), so I highly recommend this Pokémon novel. It's just that there are too many friends of the protagonist and supporting characters in it. It's not bad, but it's just because the author didn't write out the characteristics of each supporting character and friend, as well as their own elf characteristics. This way, readers will think of the other's identity as soon as they see the other's elf. Just like Da Wu, if you tell me that there is a person in the Pokémon world who has Metagross among his Pokémon, I will think: Hey, Ailan seems to have a giant monster. But if you told me he had a Metagross, you'd know right away. In fact, there is no need to add obvious characteristics, as long as his personality or hobbies are different or outstanding. However, I still recommend reading this book, because although this book has many characters, it is written very well. It is a very well-written Pokémon novel. If there are many characters, you can omit the less important supporting characters to make it easier for you to read.

Is the setting of this book such that the Cursed Armor can only be dropped by the Blue Flame Blade Demon after death? I hope there won't be any plot like the Blue Flame Blade Demon being killed and then Little Tanzi evolving with a relic [grievance]

Because of Rico, I gave it five stars [laughing evilly] (the plot is also very good)

Wisdom teeth, come on, author💪💪 Wisdom teeth again, wisdom teeth wisdom teeth

If I were to rank my bookshelf, this book would be Top. 1.

I like it very much. 99% Of it is in line with my wishes.

No matter what happens later, I will give it five stars first, just because I like these six elves after looking at the introduction list.

Coming from the group of Steel Fantasy Beast and Little Broken Diamond, it feels like it's the first time I've seen a book in Tomato interact with each other.

I came from the book club, and the writing is pretty good so far. Please support me with 5 stars.

Very good! Read such a good Pokémon novel! I'm so high! Remember the last time you read it! That means it's still about the big brother (the one that binds the flame monkey) or how steel is made (the one about Meltan). I'm really high! !

How should I put it? Personally, it's not that outstanding? However, it is more warm and everyday, and this style is quite good. In short, there are good and bad points. If the score is out of ten, I may only give it an eight [face covering]

There is the levity and humor of everyday writing At the same time, the story is divided using the secret realm as the rhythm point of the event. It's relaxed and relaxed, and overall it's a good Pokémon book. If you can add more polish to your writing, you can become a god.

I have a friend who was so angry that the author was too slow to update. He cried and fussed, so pitiful, so the author should update quickly!

Super recommended.

Rongcheng in Fujian Province has to be given 5 stars.