Tomorrow*****

Clang, Clang, Dangdang is resurrected!

Great, great book! Don't let the protagonist become an experimental subject! ! !

Damn, Gaga is so good, I couldn't get enough of it and I just finished it in one sitting. I feel like this is going to be a hit. Of all the books I've read, it's the one I want to read the most! ! ! !

4 Stars, it depends on your performance later. It's good to watch, but I hope the pace can be sped up in the second chapter. I read it from beginning to end in one breath. I still want to watch when Qiu regains his memory, even though he may not be able to find it. The twist in the second chapter is a bit too big, which makes me a little unable to react. In addition, what Black Snake instills makes me sick. I want to open King Crimson and jump to the reunion. Uncomfortable. 4 Stars. Judging from your performance in the second chapter, the first chapter is generally good, but the transition from one to two made me a little nauseous. The next one star depends on your performance.

Not bad. The story is quite interesting. It is considered a masterpiece of Ark. The author added a lot of his own personal settings to fill in the holes left by YJ. Although the roundness is quite satisfactory, it does not make people feel awkward. The identity of the protagonist will never be guessed by newcomers until they see it later. Of course, there are also shortcomings. For example, the protagonist's behavior when he first met Frost Star was really nonsensical. Even if it was rounded off in the end, I felt it was still a bit stiff. How could the protagonist be so easily influenced? Of course there are many reasons to refute me, as long as you don't use your brain here. But its flaws outweigh its flaws, and I highly recommend watching it. [Like] It's too late, the author doesn't want to write it, so you can read the last chapter. That's all.

Take a look, it's quite shocking to be honest, it's quite special. I look forward to continuing my efforts this time, just don't have a bloody collapse later, I can accept it now and it's very good.

The plot development is to my liking, but author, you'd better not give me the Frost Star Knife. When we read fanfic, we just want to see the tragic characters in the original work be redeemed, rather than see them die again and there is nothing we can do about it.

I really want to see Qiu and Shuangxing reunited! Will Qiu plunge into Shuangxing's arms? Can you give Frost Star a better ending?

The main plot of Ark is in progress, Chapter 6. The mood has arrived. Let's write a book review. First of all, congratulations on finding a high-quality Ark article! ! ! There are so many weird fanfics these days, and I have chosen this one the best. It doesn't have any weird plot that subverts the game settings. Yay! Then I got crazy here. After watching the plot of the main storyline 6-8, I thought of the plot of this book again. It felt like I was in another world... I really like Frost Star. Woooooooooooo In the end, of course, you still have to support the author! ! ! Come on, author! Look~okay~you~yo~ (Cross sound

The writing is quite nice. Although the protagonist is not a time traveler like Tianshuo, it is one of the better-looking Zhoutong humanities in my opinion.

It's a very good Ark fanfic. The story is pretty good. The most important thing is that the single female protagonist is great👏. It's a pity that the ending is unfinished. If it weren't for the unfinished ending, I could give it 5 stars.

I like it. I can say that I am very satisfied with it regardless of the situation or the character. But I still have to say one thing. In fact, it is very dangerous for you, the author, to write about oblivion. If it is written well, it will be a masterpiece. If it is not written well, it will fall short. As for some people saying that the second part is poisonous, I don't think so. I just want to say - make Ursus great again! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Looking forward to the third part, a new black snake and a little white rabbit, just thinking about it makes me laugh.

I still don't understand why it is included in the apocalyptic category

Not bad, as long as it's not bad, it's considered a good one in the Ark

This book is quite good. It mainly tells the story of the two protagonists Qiu and Shuangxing. However, the ending is not satisfactory, but it is still a quite good book. The ending was written too hastily and did not tell the complete story of Qiu's ending. It was too sloppy. I hope the author can continue to write Ark fan fiction.

I love this book! I had read two or three Arknights fanfics before, and I was a little disappointed. They were similar to the protagonists of Shuangwen, and the writing style was not acceptable because the role of the doctor was difficult to handle. I have read more than ten chapters so far and I think it is very good!

Qiu: "I believe that the connection between us will transcend time and space. Even if the ocean boils, the atmosphere disappears, our satellite connection falls into the vortex of gravity, and our sun expands viciously, ruthlessly eating its children until there is silence... We will still meet again. At the end of civilization decorated with darkness and starry light, we will still meet again, for sure."

You can take a look and save everyone some money: Male version of Xiaoji [smile] [smile]

The author's writing is very good, and it is considered a high-quality Ark fanfic on Tomato. Come on

I may have been weak in the early and mid-term, but now I have exerted my strength. It looks good.

In any case, as of this writing, the book is good, although there are some bumps along the way. The following content, as a loyal reader, gives the author a suggestion: do not write too many political elements. If the water is too deep, it will taste bad. I hope the author can keep writing, and I will always support you.

Apart from the awkward love at first sight, there's nothing else to say. He's definitely one of the best Ark fans.

The author wouldn't run away with the bucket, right?

Not finished yet When I came back and looked through it, I found it was finished? ? ? ? I'm currently watching the part about Cosiche (actually I've finished it a long time ago, but I'm just a little sorry, I feel like Cosiche is really like a father) Turn it over later New player at level 52 I think I was only in my 30s when I read it, and I had no idea who that Cosiche was. When I read the second chapter, I thought it was quite interesting. Now I know who it is (┯_┯) Disillusionment

It's not bad, the overall plot is good. Keep up the good work! [Eat melon]

I'm glad that I persisted in reading it. The plot that Shuangxing liked without any brains didn't sway me. I was betting. I thought the previous article was enough to prove that the author was not someone who would write such a vulgar plot. I believed that there was a setting in it. Sure enough, my bet was right. I have been following it since it was less than 50 chapters, and I watched this book become a masterpiece under the author's writing. If you are like me, then I think this thing is Thai pants!

"In this land, even the gods are like ants."

It's a very good book. My suggestion is to read more sugar. It's too rushed, the protagonist's child, the direction of the world, etc. It hasn't been resolved yet, and it will be finished for me.

The characters interact well and have good personalities. They are all expressed very well, and every incident and emotion is foreshadowed and not too abrupt. Passionate and funny. It's the best fanfic I've ever seen. Five-star support (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Very good. I really like this style of writing. Come on, author, I hope you won't stop.