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After listening to Baozi's previous opinions [currently working on the draft] [currently working on the draft], I am now working hard to revise the first short story and try to see if it can be changed to the third person. However, because there are currently 4,000 updates per day, there is no long period of revision. Therefore, until the complete revision is completed, the first story will not be disrupted, and everyone can still watch it with confidence. It's a pity that there is something wrong with the volume in the system. Now I can't modify the volume, so I have to make do with it first. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Happy reading, my dears. If you have any flaws in the plot, you can point it out and I will revise it as appropriate. [Love][Love][Love][Love]

I only read the first story. The content and characters are okay. The twists and turns later are quite amazing. The idea of ​​the article is also worth thinking about. The heroine's character and image are very powerful and lovable. Although she is a commoner, she is indeed beautiful, strong and miserable. I'm more curious, which one is the male protagonist, Xingxuan or Aohen? Personally, I prefer Ao Hen, who has a tense personality, is more reliable, and looks better hehe [laughs] [laughs] [laughs]. Unfortunately, the first person perspective is a bit difficult to substitute. I also feel that the author's writing skills are slightly lacking and the descriptions are relatively simple. Four stars for plot and characters, one star for encouragement. Come on come on!