Naruto: I Make Other People Have the Worst Luck

Write more about miracles and your power. After all, most people are attracted by this. Everyone is tired of seeing other ninjutsu and kaleidoscopes.

If you really want to use Miracle and Your Power, Miracle and Your Abilities should be activated when Hiruzen and the others are discussing the protagonist in Chapter 5, especially since Danzo still has murderous intentions towards the protagonist and wants to kill him.

Usually, the protagonist suddenly tells the heroine his secret. He clearly gave people the impression that he was just a stranger before, without any foreshadowing, which made me look stupid.

Why write about poison? This seems to be the case for Tomato novel writers. If you tell that woman, what qualifications do you have to guarantee that this woman will not betray you? Does it depend on people's self-consciousness? Such obvious blocking points, alas, I really find that sometimes the authors of Tomato really can't understand some obvious blocking points. Even though they claim to write cool articles, they insist on writing them anyway. So annoying Just ask, how can you guarantee that he will not betray you? What's the point of telling him? For other novels, even if you want to tell the other party, there are certain methods to ensure that he is loyal to you, or at least to ensure that he will not betray himself, such as some people who have grudges against the upper class. And even if you have the ability to guarantee this, generally speaking, you will not tell others at will, unless you are the kind of subordinates or companions who want to be included in your plan.

I don't understand, why did you tell that woman the kaleidoscope? Good guy, Madara may not notice you, a little transparent person, but the Senju Clan will definitely notice it. If she talks too much, you will be injured even if you investigate, but the samsara eye should notice something is wrong. Anyway, it is Bai Zetsu who died, and then you show off like crazy in front of the big boss?

Chapter 12~13. The protagonist confesses to the woman. In this plot, I don't understand why he should tell others his trump card? I haven't seen how close the relationship between the protagonist and this girl is, and the protagonist has only traveled a long time. How much trust does this show? And she is also the protagonist of the Senju Clan, Uchiha. You confess to him directly. You awakened the Mangekyo and told her about your abilities. Why do you want to be the second Shisui? Don't tell her what the protagonist's abilities are like. You are already invincible against the sky, haven't you noticed? It has been suppressed by the author. The owner in JoJo is also dead, which means he will still die, no matter how he died, but he is dead, which means he will still die. How do you know that he will not report you back? Oh, by the way, he is the protagonist and you are the author. This is just a novel, not a real world.

You should be able to see it. There is an obvious poisonous point (probably) - he quickly revealed all his trump cards and the ability of "Miracle and You" to a woman (the relationship is not close, and there is no absolute guarantee of safety) and he dared to say it just because he believed it [awkward laugh] It's rare to see a novel "Miracle and You", it's a pity [grievance] I'll withdraw first

The writing is average.

Not bad, at least the settings are pretty good. What's going on? I came to read the book for Miracle and You, but when the two Mangekyō Sharingan fused, I lost my ability. Without Miraculous and You, I turned into Kamui. What's wrong, the characteristics of your book are gone. I gave up.

At present, you are the only one who writes about miracles and your author. The protagonist obviously has invincible power but is stubborn. Write more, write more. This is six stars, one extra star