Plundering Luck, Becoming Invincible Starts from Taking on a Girl Who Has Broken Off Her Engagement as a Disciple

I don't know if the author wants to portray the characters, or if he is deliberately cramming in the word count, it's just bad. What can I say, don't be shy at the critical moment. When it shouldn't be critical, just write a bunch of nonsense and your lines won't be that good. It's the kind of dialogue that used to be a villain's supporting role and insulted the protagonist ten years ago. I advised the author to change it. It was too disturbing to the senses. After a few chapters, I couldn't stand it, so I withdrew it.

Nonsense literature, rubbish novels, all water, the realm is not clearly written, the characters are not clearly written, the protagonist is a strong man at the top of the world, he can't even fly, and he can't even ride a horse. In order to take care of his disciples, you can take people across the country with you when you kill him. A strong Wang Jing, who is four or five realms away, can knock a scumbag to the ground with one punch. You are really amazing.

Give the author a boost💪

I'm not making random comments. Your system is designed to swallow up luck and yet you're afraid of backlash. It's disgusting for you to write like this. You've squeezed it dry and still have it for the New Year.

Is the protagonist's master a big shot? I think he can take on an alchemy apprentice. Come on.

This villain is too weak. He has no background, no strength, and his system is average.

Good. . .

Not bad, come on, author!