[Invincible + taking disciples + sects + rebellious disciples who seduce their masters + System + fantasy + white-robed sword immortal + fiercely protective + contrasting heroines + character growth]
After transmigrating into a fantasy world, Ye Xuan becomes a sect elder and activates the Supreme Fortune System. From the start, he strikes down the chosen son of destiny and takes in a little fox girl whose engagement was broken off.
Every disciple he raises brings him fortune points in return.
Every time he shatters the Dao heart of a chosen son of destiny, he earns a generous fortune-point reward.
He can bind a territory: the better he develops it, the stronger his fortune and the greater his rewards.
By accumulating fortune points, he can exchange them for supreme bloodlines, physiques, and treasures. Ye Xuan easily suppresses everyone.
“A little fox whose engagement was broken off? What a character. I'll take her as my disciple.”
That night, a woman as beautiful as a celestial being sneaks into Ye Xuan's room and says with a coy whimper:
“Master, I've come to repay your kindness!”
Huh?
Ye Xuan increasingly feels that something is off!
A pure and alluring fox girl, a cold Empress, a gentle immortal maiden, a stunning clan leader, a bewitching demoness...
Can someone tell me why there are more and more people wanting to repay my kindness?
And another thing.
“Could you please find a different way to repay me?!”
Nonsense literature, rubbish novels, all water, the realm is not clearly written, the characters are not clearly written, the protagonist is a strong man at the top of the world, he can't even fly, and he can't even ride a horse. In order to take care of his disciples, you can take people across the country with you when you kill him. A strong Wang Jing, who is four or five realms away, can knock a scumbag to the ground with one punch. You are really amazing.
I don't know if the author wants to portray the characters, or if he is deliberately cramming in the word count, it's just bad. What can I say, don't be shy at the critical moment. When it shouldn't be critical, just write a bunch of nonsense and your lines won't be that good. It's the kind of dialogue that used to be a villain's supporting role and insulted the protagonist ten years ago. I advised the author to change it. It was too disturbing to the senses. After a few chapters, I couldn't stand it, so I withdrew it.
I'm not making random comments. Your system is designed to swallow up luck and yet you're afraid of backlash. It's disgusting for you to write like this. You've squeezed it dry and still have it for the New Year.
This villain is too weak. He has no background, no strength, and his system is average.
Is the protagonist's master a big shot? I think he can take on an alchemy apprentice. Come on.
Give the author a boost💪
Not bad, come on, author!
Good. . .