Activating the Training System to Build an Invincible Clan

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Comment on "The leader of the clan in the beginning, my family mass-produces the supreme power": Analysis of the pros and cons of the refreshing article on the rise of the family The novel "The Beginning Patriarch, My Family Mass-Produces the Supreme Power" tells the story of the protagonist Chen Daozhen who traveled through the world of Xianxia to become the patriarch, awakened the strongest family system, strengthened his own strength by developing the family's luck, and the results of the family members' cultivation were returned to him a hundredfold, thus leading the family to the top. Overall, this novel has its own unique highlights, and there are also some areas that need to be improved. Overall, it can be given a score of 78. It is worth reading, especially for readers who like refreshing stories and family rise themes. Advantages and Highlights It's refreshing and intensive to meet readers' expectations. From the beginning, the novel quickly develops a refreshing rhythm. The protagonist Chen Daozhen relies on the family system to continuously gain powerful strength and rare resources. Family members break through the realm one by one, bringing waves of sense of accomplishment. For example, plots such as "Master of the family, I have broken through the period of transcending tribulation" and "Master of the family, I have broken through the realm of sainthood" are constantly being staged. Every time a family member grows and reports, the readers can feel the success and glory of the protagonist, as if they are in a family that is constantly getting stronger, which greatly satisfies the readers' desire for strength and success, and is full of immersion. The system settings are novel and the development path is clear The strongest family system is the core highlight of the novel. It not only gives the protagonist the ability to improve himself by developing his family, but also has a hundredfold return mechanism, allowing the protagonist to grow much faster than ordinary people. This setting breaks away from the growth model of the protagonist in traditional fantasy novels fighting alone, and closely links family development with personal strength, adding richness and layering to the story. The author builds a clear development route around the family system, from recruiting talents and obtaining resources to improving the strength of family members, step by step to promote the family to become stronger and stronger. The logic is coherent, allowing readers to clearly see the process of the family's rise, and enhancing the readability of the story. The plot is relaxed and humorous, and the reading experience is good In the process of escalating tension and excitement, the novel cleverly incorporates many elements of lightness and humor. For example, when the family recruits strong men, "Master, there is a man named Dan Emperor who wants to join our family," but Chen Daozhen replies, "The family just needs a cook, so let him go." This contrast between the strong man's identity and ordinary work arrangements creates a humorous and interesting effect, easing the tense cultivation atmosphere, allowing readers to relax and enjoy the reading process, without feeling too depressed and heavy, and increases the interest of reading. There is a problem 1. The characters are not fleshed out enough Some of the characters in the novel are a bit thin, like tool men who exist to advance the plot. Except for the protagonist Chen Daozhen, the characters and backgrounds of other family members and supporting characters are not portrayed in depth enough. For example, after some family members broke through the realm, they only briefly reported the situation, without detailed descriptions of their inner struggles and emotional changes during the cultivation process. This resulted in a lack of three-dimensionality in the characters, making it difficult for readers to have a strong emotional resonance, which affected the richness and appeal of the story. 2. Insufficient plot coherence In some plot developments, there is a sense of jump and insufficient logic. For example, when the family faces some crises, the solution is too simple and direct, lacking preliminary preparation and detailed description of the process, giving people a sense of haste. It seems that the emergence of the crisis is just to create an opportunity for the protagonist to show his strength, rather than truly building a world full of challenges and tests, which to a certain extent destroys the coherence and rationality of the story. 3. The worldview construction is not refined enough Although the setting of the Xianxia world is grand, it lacks in the construction of a specific world view. The description of the rules of the world, distribution of forces, characteristics of different races, etc. Is relatively general. It is difficult for readers to clearly outline the whole picture of this fairy world during the reading process, resulting in a vague understanding of the background of the story, and an inability to better understand the significance and impact of the rise of the family on the entire world pattern, which limits the further exploration of the depth of the novel. Reader suggestions If you are a reader who likes light-hearted writing and pursues quick upgrades and a sense of accomplishment, then this novel is very suitable for you. During the reading process, enjoy the pleasure brought by the growing family and the emergence of strong men in large numbers, and don't get too hung up on the details and depth. But if you pay more attention to the sophistication of character creation, plot logic, and worldview, you may need to lower your expectations in this regard when reading. Although "The Beginning Patriarch, My Family's Mass-Producing Supreme Power" has flaws, it still brings readers a passionate and joyful reading experience with its unique refreshing points and novel system settings.

This book was so enjoyable to read. I finished it in one sitting. I'm sure I'm going to go to work tomorrow. I'm still up so late 🤦 The author keeps up the good work and updates.

The writing is good, the killing is decisive, and it is promoted all the way. Please keep updating the author!

I think back then, I accidentally obtained the Q of "Nine Stars Tianchen Jue" in "Douluo Dalu" and reached the pinnacle of cultivation "Dzi Bead Transformation". I thought I had Q in "Invincible World", so I used the power of Q in "Martial Arts" to challenge "Mad God" Q, "Son of Light", "God Lord" Q and "Shura God of War" Q and "Immortal King" Q in a duel. I wanted to single-handedly create the feat of "Zhu Xian", but unfortunately I lost and lost all my martial arts. In "The Good Death." With the help of , I came to "The World of Immortality" Q, and "Alien Martial Star Lord" saw that I had "God-Level Talent", accepted me as a disciple, gave me an artifact "Cun Mang" Q, and took me to "The Avenue of Heavenly Fire", and obtained the divine pet "Coiling Dragon". I met Q, the "School Beauty's Personal Expert", by chance in "Tomb of Gods". With his help, I successfully broke through, gained the power of "Fights Break the Sky", and became the "Great Master" who can "Cover the Sky". , And embarked on "Full-time God Cultivation". On the way, I saw "Asura God of War" and "King of Cold" and something "very pure and very ambiguous" happened. After I returned, I personally issued the law of "No Evil" and wrote an autobiography called "Warcraft Sword Master in Another World". There is a famous saying in it - My name is Lingtian, "I Want to Become Heaven" Q. And left a legend for the world - "The Legend of Lingtian" Q. Later, I came to "Spirit Realm", but there was a "Star Wars Storm" Q on the way, but fortunately I was not in danger. After arriving, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". , Was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Piaomiao Journey". , Entered "All Heavens and Worlds" Q, and met the "Killing God" known as "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Divine Seal Throne" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by "Nine Heavens Sword Demon", but he was seriously injured and was cured by "Exquisite Crazy Doctor" Q. After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I became the Q of "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I developed "Final Intelligence" there and owned "Clear Eye" Q. When I have nothing to do, "Ice and Fire Demon Chef" teaches me how to cook. "Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled Magical Powers" from "Unparalleled in the World". , Embarked on the path of "Emperor's Supreme", and soon after I trained the "Immortal" divine body, "Chaos Sword God" and I had a good friendship, and became the "Twelve Zodiac Guardian God". Be my protector and accompany me in the "Proud Nine Heavens". I am in "Heaven and Sky". Next, I used "Tian Zhu Tu" to defeat the best player in the world, "The Evil God" Q, and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Law" Q, but the world could not bear my power, the space was broken, and I was sucked into the "Perfect World". , Back to the Yuan Dynasty of "The Wilderness"~~~ Alas! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update C

All eyes, Follow me! Look at me! Look at me! I have something to announce: "As expected, I am not being watched by the gods..." "Kanreya didn't*, did she?" "You are my glory to this day." "He died in the windless Ember Sea. The wind could not take away his soul..." "Can you give me your old friend's soul?" "Morax, if we are destined, we will meet again one day." "There will always be creatures on the earth who dare to face the power of thunder." "Big brother!" "Brother Fushe!" "Hey, Fushe!" "Floating House..." "You were born with this fate! As long as you speak, you will bring danger to the people around you. It is better to die like this and come back to another place..." "Childhood's dreams are the most fragile things." "Why wasn't I the one who came to Canria first..." "Fly, fly, like a bird, Look at the world for me, Fly high into the sky for me. " "I... I have scattered flowers" is the filth condensed from the memory of the Lord, Hu Zhai Palace. " ""Don't be blinded, don't be shaken, and always walk on the path you firmly believe in." "Just like I remember everything about Inazuma, as long as you remember me, I can talk to you forever. " "I know that God is omnipotent and is willing to bestow power on mankind, which shows that God has deep expectations for us. Now that the general is in trouble, it is time for us to fulfill our promise. " "The Way of Chang is magnificent, and the gods are eternal! " "Youlezhai, I really live a happy life every day. "So... Kakata keeps collecting parts because it thinks it can "fix it, its master?" "Don't worry, the forest will remember everything." "It's really a pity that I didn't get to see Nelu's Dance of the Flower Goddess." "Because we are "disciplinarians" "The float bumped and bumped, Sister Naxi opened her eyes, God, we have finally found you. " "We just saved the world, right? But why, I seem to be crying? " "Let the world completely forget me" "People of Xumi, I wish you a sweet dream tonight" "We will meet again eventually" Q "When the maple leaves are red, there are always more partings" "Can you leave the soul of an old friend to me" "If one day I lose control, I can ask you to stop me" Me?" "Childhood's dreams are fragile things" "Police stones will also return to dust" "Three died unexpectedly, one is missing" Q "The first thing I did when I took office was my grandfather's funeral" "The young man volunteered and gave his life "My own blood" Q "What is there to know about the experience of sinners" Q "Burn the old world for me" Q "Why stop the abyss, we still have a lot of time, don't we" Q "No matter what, he has to make a choice" Q "I can't remember many things" "When will my parents come back" "Hua Sanli" Q "This time I really see you again, Shadow" I have been betrayed three times.) C Genshin Impact: About the fact that I cooked food and cried to the seven gods.

I thought it didn't have a female protagonist at first, but later I didn't expect it to be about a stallion, but it was also very good. The book is very fast-paced and focuses on the family, but the protagonist himself is promoted very quickly, so the family can't keep up. The author uses time to let the Chen family catch up, but does not mention it in one stroke, which is quite good. Moreover, the plot and characters are very well grasped, and there are no writing failures and no unforeseen situations, which are not found in other novels. Ever since I obtained the system, I have become invincible with my family. The protagonist does not appear in front of others, but basically hides behind me. It is not considered a mistake to let family members or summon characters to come forward. Overall very good.

It was really fun to watch, and I suggest the author summon some highly trained maids for the pig's feet 😏