From the Whole *********

It looks pretty good, although it's a bit awkward at first, but you can taste it later.

The combat power and economy are very different from the original work, and have little impact. The teammates in the supporting role died very hastily. When encountering a battle, the teammates in the supporting role were like cutting wheat, casually losing a large amount of coldness. Magical transformation and practice, magic is released. The practice adds a setting that requires recharging, and there is an initial stage of perfection for each small realm. Magic release does not require a CD, it can be released continuously, and dozens of people can be released at the same time, killing a large block of movies in an instant.

Author: I think Qin Yuer is pretty good as the heroine. Although what you wrote before is good, I think Qin Yuer should not be given to Zu Xingyi. Although Zu Xingyi tried hard to save him in the original plot, but look at what he became later, Qin Yuer should not be given to Zu Xingyi (this is my personal opinion, please don't criticize if it is different from yours)

It can be said to be the best type of all French fan stories.

I only give it four stars, even though some of the plots are not good. I want to give it five stars because I am afraid you will be proud.

Come on, it's still good so far

Give you five stars, keep up the good work!

The content is okay

Very well written, don't be a eunuch

Books are touching songs, which make people mesmerized; books are scenery with infinite charm, which make people relaxed and happy; books are colorful pictures, which make people praise endlessly.

Add some oil. Pretty good

Come on, come on, come on!

I prefer this kind

Come on author, take good care of you

Come on, don't end up in a mess

When will the author write time travel? Too little, not enough to read more chapters