Holy Lord: Reborn Naruto Steals a Kiss from Sakura

What I want to say has been said in the comments before. Write it to me quickly and don't dawdle here. This five-star is only temporary. Author, will it become permanent? It depends on your performance It's not bad. The author just finished saying it and updated two more chapters. Come on, work hard, keep up the good work, and I'm optimistic about you.

I didn't want to leave a comment specifically. I would like to point out that please do not come here to give a negative review. The reason is that if the Holy Lord I wrote does not restore the character of the Holy Lord, I will be really speechless. First, I made it clear at the beginning that the Holy Lord and Naruto were in a fused relationship, and I spent a lot of time describing how the memories of Naruto and the Holy Lord formed a new personality. Naruto recalled the memories of Uzumaki Naruto and the Holy Master as a third party, and I wrote them clearly. Secondly, it's not like I didn't write about the character of the Holy Lord? It's not like I don't intend to write about the character of the Holy Lord. Not trustworthy, indifferent to life, dragon nature is inherently lustful, self-centered, and enjoys seeing the world in chaos, all of which are reflected in the plot. Third, the setting of this book is that in the early stage, Naruto and the Holy Lord each have half and half personalities. Based on the fusion state, after all, Naruto's body and identity are used to exist in this world. Is this normal? And because the Holy Lord is stronger, over time, Naruto will be gradually assimilated by the Holy Lord's memory. Is this reasonable? I made it clear at the beginning that it was fusion, so I didn't sell you a dog over someone else's head, right? So what's wrong with me writing like this?

To be honest, there is really nothing to criticize in the full text. Maybe the plot is a little slow and unclear, and the logic is relatively clear but not very clear, but it is already very good. It is a brand-new protagonist, but the character feels a little out of touch, and it seems difficult to define. If it is because of the slow integration, the character is gradually changing, but now it has changed. The transformation is indeed not obvious, and the character established at the beginning is also somewhat imperfect (but unexpectedly consistent with common sense). My personal suggestion is to be more clear. There is no need to continue to deliberately describe Naruto's loneliness. It will be more comfortable to use other people's senses instead. It is difficult to impress people with the description of love and human nature. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The author specifies that he has a side job [laughing]

After their two consciousnesses merge, who will be the main body?

Come on! You wrote well!

Come on, author, don't accidentally get blocked when writing. It's not easy to find such a request that meets your appetite.

I didn't speak, it wasn't because I felt there was something wrong with me, why haven't you been banned yet?

Not bad, keep up the good work👍

This author's book is good.