Showbiz: Reborn, I Get Fed Candy by Boss Yang from the Start

Hurry up and write, the author is great

No, there is no mention of the system at the beginning. An achievement is unlocked at the end of the first chapter, and the second one is a jump-start plot. The first 20 chapters are meant to attract readers, and all at once they cover the cousin's loan shark account book. The title of the book was originally about the love life with Yang Mi, and what else is written. There is only the rest. The college entrance examination is three months away, and Yang Mi is going to Kyoto. If I want to write about it, I must go with Yang Mi. The results are so poor in three months, which means that the results in the previous life were also very poor. Count on the system to give you the ability to learn. When writing about the system, write down the role of the system. After 30 chapters, the total of the words about the system will not exceed 2 chapters.

The male protagonist is too cold towards the female protagonist, right?

To be honest, this entertainment novel can be regarded as the lowest level. First of all, the logic is confusing and the main plot is unclear. Secondly, the character portrayal of the protagonist's family of three is very problematic. In addition, the clichéd plot from more than ten years ago, and I doubt that the author has written an outline at all! Writing an entertainment novel doesn't even capture the key points.

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The protagonist is just a helpless Adou, why are you pretending to be aloof? Boss Yang likes you just to give you face. If there wasn't a system, it would be garbage.

You old man, can't you write the main plot well? After writing about loan sharks, why don't you write about a murderer?

It's not that you stopped updating for a long time. Don't you know when you will stop updating? Why stop updating? I stopped updating when I saw others. You can stop updating for a week at most. If you have stopped updating for a longer time, you should stop updating for half a year. Please, don't stop updating. What on earth do you have to stop updating? Why do you want to stop updating? The last time I looked at this was about two months ago and it hadn't been updated yet

It's a mess, I originally thought it would be about Boss Yang and Pigfoot's childhood sweethearts, and then they pick up girls in college and enter the entertainment industry or something!! As a result, he wrote about his grievances and grievances with his cousin! I was given a probability card and thought I could accumulate capital to win the big prize, but I ended up buying a scratch card!! No wonder I can't write anymore

Why does this book look a little boring?