Hogwarts: What Happened to the Short-Lived Obscurals?

Please encourage the author. This fan novel is very well written, but I don't know if I should give you a high score, because Tomato is not very friendly to fans, and it involves copyright issues. Even though it is a foreign work, your plot and character creation are good, and it is worth reading. Although there are some minor flaws, they are not too serious. Keep up the hard work! I saw that your book has no ratings, not many recommendations, and very few people urging updates. This should be a good thing for the fans, but it is not very friendly to the author, because you have no income. But once you get high recommendations and high exposure, it is too easy for you to be blocked. After thinking about it again and again, I decided to give you points because your writing is indeed not bad.

The pace is a bit fast and the descriptions are sparse. Everything else is okay. I hope the plot can be written more vividly and richly, especially the emotional line, and it can be advanced reasonably. Remember to make more sugar. (Who doesn't love to make jokes while driving? [Laughing]) This is especially important. I came here just to eat sugar. I have insulin prepared. Don't let me down, author. There is also hope that it won't end badly, and the author won't go into the palace to serve the empress [laughter] This is probably the first time for the author to write. His writing style is a bit green, but it is normal and understandable. I support the author. I hope he will write better and better in the future [Congratulations] [Like]

Well written. But recently, I have been annoyed by the heroine Hermione. She wants to know too much and master too much.

Compared to other fics, this one is quite fast paced. [Exploration]

Oh, look, what I found is pretty well written! Come on, update soon!ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧