Dressed as a Perverted Senior Brother Who Imprisoned the Male Protagonist

I don't want to read too many chapters, and I don't want to read too short. About a hundred chapters is enough. It's hard to read one that's not finished yet, and it's heartbreaking😣

1. Just looking at the first half or the overall framework, the concept and design are quite good and very attractive. 2. I just don't know why this relationship line is always a bit baffling to me. In the words of a sister in the comment area, it is the relationship line between the two of them. There is only emotion and no line. It is very sudden and there is no process at all. It does not mean that the process is short, but he did not even mention it. At this point, it just doesn't exist. As a result, when I look at the changes and deepening of the protagonist's feelings later, I always feel a sense of trance [face covering] [face covering]. That is to say, there is neither the kind of deep love that lasts for a long time, nor the kind of amazing love at first sight. Anyway, this feeling will be inexplicable. 3. Generally speaking, except for the love line, which is relatively blunt, the other plot arrangements are still very good and exciting. To put it simply, it is a very good fairy tale (that is, except for the love line to spawn monsters and fight bosses, it has everything [face covering]). However, the advancement of the love line still needs to be strengthened, otherwise it will really affect the perception. I have questions in my mind after reading it. Overall, I am still looking forward to the new work of DaDa. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Why doesn't anyone comment? It's very beautiful. The only drawback is that it's not finished [almost crying]

Lan Yinxuguo is probably the most suitable word to describe this story. Every encounter is God's best arrangement. There is a kind of fate that lasts forever. (Actually, this is my first time reading a novel from a first-person perspective. I was a little uncomfortable at first, but the more I read the later, the better it became. Without the reader's God's perspective, I can better experience Yu Li's feelings.) It's great! I like it very much. Although the book is finished, the story of Yu Li and Duan Qianyue is not over yet. Their meeting in the real world will definitely be another enviable love...

Evaluating this book, the author has a lot of imagination, and the supporting characters in the book do not exist for the protagonist. Each supporting character has his own character, not an NPC in the story line. I still remember Ayun's silent protection, Xiao Wu's unspoken words of love, Uncle Lei's fireworks shop, and the aunt of the Lord of the City. Many supporting characters have flesh and blood and their own souls. The only thing is that I feel that many story situations develop too fast, as if someone has pressed the fast forward button. Everything that should be included is included. The occasional slow pace can give people a chance to chew slowly, and then they will have emotional resonance.

So shocking! This novel is truly magical. I stayed up late to read the second half. The early plot is ordinary and dull, but it is also attractive. At least the plot is compact and one thing after another is fascinating. Everyone can know about the inexplicable love that the male protagonist has for the book wearer in the extra story. There are a lot of foreshadowings. You may be confused or confused about many things in the early stage. You may even feel that the character design of the big brother is not very good, and the attack and attack have the least sense of CP. Various events in the later stage will help you clear up your doubts one by one. Especially in the chapters near the end, you may not be able to tell whether it is a dream or reality. Just remember the little girl's original words and you will know. Dreams are the key. Dreams contain things from the past and the future, and they can also explain many doubts. Then there are other people like Xiaowu, Demon King, Ayun, etc. Who like the senior brother, and it is indeed difficult to reconcile, but everyone can just stumbling in the early stage, and the rightful position will never fall. Maybe the writing style is slightly lacking, but the plot arrangement is really superb and amazing! It's a revelation! This is why I praised it so much in the first sentence. It's really great. I'm going to read the author's other works! I forgot that I wanted to follow it again, because the author I follow must have a certain work that deeply attracted me.

It would have been better without this side story. I originally thought it was a two-way trip. After reading the extra story, it seems that Duan Qianyue just likes Yu Li or doesn't understand love. She only likes Yu Li because it is his calamity. It feels unworthy of Yu Li's affection. I was so moved, and it was completely ruined when I saw the extra episode [crying]

If you like it, you just like it! No explanation needed!

The plot, writing, and characters are all excellent. If I have to use one word to describe the plot style, I can only think of "indifferent". Is there a very peaceful beauty? Just like a moonlit night, a cool breeze, a quiet lake, a small boat, and a cup of sake. The whole article gave me such an image. The only drawback is the writing, which is also very bland. It just makes people feel that this writing style is very suitable for cultivating immortals, but not very suitable for cultivating immortals. The feeling of being quiet and independent from the world is very suitable for cultivating immortality. But after "quiet", I had almost no deep insights into the fight between humans, immortals and demons. That senior sister Biyi died, and Shou stabbed Tang with a dagger. I didn't see any description or description that shocked me, so my first reaction was "Oh, he stabbed me." It made me read it very blandly. But overall it's still very good. It's hard for me to comment on the good parts because I read it too quickly. After watching it, I felt it was very good. The only things that left an impression on me were the dissatisfaction (personal character). If you want to know what the advantages are, you can read other people's comments.

Each book is written by the author with great effort. It is well written and very attractive, but I think the emotions of the protagonists are a bit inexplicable (personal opinion [I almost cried]), but the writing is good [Adoration]

The writing is very good. In those dreams, Duan Qianyue finally found Yu Li, so he should also find him in reality. There is another possibility, it is just a dream. The ending of Oe is really mind-boggling The ending is a bit rushed

From the first point of view, it seemed that Duan's love for his senior brother was a bit inexplicable in the early stage, but after watching the extra episode, it felt surprisingly good! Moreover, the content of the book also made me feel fulfilled. After reading it, I couldn't put it down for a long time... Anyway, my wife's first book is also very good-looking! I hope that the fourth one in the future will be more perfect and strive to be on the rankings! I wish my wife to be full of inspiration, everything goes well, and she strives to achieve greater heights and bring us better works! Thank you for writing the novel. I am very happy. I wish my wife to make a lot of money in the future! ! !

Update quickly! ! ! ! ! Dark! Twisted crawl! ! [Cry]

It's good to watch, but the ending is a bit cruel, invisibly sad, and I feel a little sad for Lili. I waited for Duan for so long, but after Duan became a god, he forgot everything [almost crying]

I bet the author is a liberal arts student, and the names are all from ancient poems. Also, I like the character of the protagonist. I don't need to be embarrassed by others. [Note] The story is novel and recommended.

It's very good. The plot was well written back then, and it came out as it should, including the foreshadowing and everything else. It's just that some details are skipped over and the pace is too fast. Although it is understandable, it lacks a sense of empathy.

Oh~ It looks good, but I feel a little sad for Lili.

This author's writing is very good. I feel that his writing is better than most of the many words in Tomato or the score of nine points, but it just feels a bit too rushed, although it is explained later on why we fell in love with each other. But when I was watching it, I was thinking, I went and we kissed. Maybe it was because I hadn't watched it at the time, so I felt a little confused later on, but I still liked it inexplicably, and the ending felt a bit rushed. Regardless of these small details, it is still very beautiful. I highly recommend watching it! At least two people are in love without he

I've probably finished reading it, but there's another chapter I've been reviewing, but I haven't seen it yet. After reading it, I felt that the author's setting was quite novel, and the dream was quite interesting. But I always feel that some foreshadowing has not been finished, and some story lines feel incomplete. The article has been completed, but some things have not been explained yet, and it feels like it has stopped abruptly and is empty. Bai Shiyu and Bai Ya obviously have a story. Why do they seem to be brothers, but one is the Demon Lord and the other is the master. I feel like they must all have stories. The emotional line is also a bit stiff, maybe because the author writes it in the first person of Yu Li, so readers can't see some of the inner activities of other characters. Then there are some huge changes in their behavior, which is a bit stiff, and it feels like they fell in love suddenly. It feels like A Yun and Xiao Wu's relationship seems to be explained a little bit, but it's baffling that people like Bai Shiyu, Feng Qiubai, and Bai Xian suddenly like Yu Li. I suggest that the author can add some other personal pronouns to the article in the future to supplement the storyline. Some descriptions in the article can be clearer. I feel that I have misread it several times. (It's just a personal idea, it's okay if you don't accept it) Finally, I still express my love for some of the settings in the author's book [Admiration][Admiration]

It's amazing. This is the first novel I've read in the first person. Experienced the emotional line of a person who is obsessed with authority

This is the first time I read a first-person novel, and it feels very immersive. You don't have to guess what the protagonist is thinking. I feel like this is my dream more than a novel. It feels like Zhuang Zhou dreaming of a butterfly. I feel like this thing really happened to me.

It's quite rare to see a first-person perspective book, and the plot is quite good. [Like] [Like] But the ending part felt very rushed, as if I was rushing to fill in some details. It gave me the feeling that the end was a bit inexplicable and a bit chaotic [facepalm]. Overall it's very nice, the writing is great ٩(๑^o^๑)۶[learned][learned]

Nice! It's so beautiful, I highly recommend [Adore][Adore][Adore] My favorite book on Tomato [Adore] How come I didn't find such a precious author before [Adore][Adore] Come on, author [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Because it is a first-person perspective, the psychological description of Gong cannot be as clear as from God's perspective. Only after reading Gong's diary did I know why Gong had feelings for Shou. I also felt that the ending ended too quickly and was a bit caught off guard, but it was still interesting to watch.

It's good to watch, but the ending feels a bit rushed and a bit regretful. My heart feels empty, I don't know why I'm a little sad [crying]

? ? ? ? This seems to be BE? ? ? ? [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] I am autistic, but the writing is very good, but the ending is a bit rushed [Like] [Love] [Love] I don't feel sad when I read some other slightly sadistic articles, but at the end I was autistic by the knife [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] (Although the ending is rushed, it doesn't stop me [I'm about to cry])

This book is good, its advantages and disadvantages are obvious but not obvious. I have to say: The disadvantage is the first perspective, because the first perspective cannot describe everything in detail, and it also leads to the ending of many characters being left unexplained. The advantage is also the first point of view. Because the story cannot be written in detail, it leaves a lot of room for the reader's imagination, thereby reducing a lot of personal poisoning. The ending is good, it's both a knife and a candy, but it's a bit rushed, which leaves many people who don't read it very seriously with a lot of questions. In fact, it's easy to solve. Just read the chapter and paragraph comments and you'll understand. And what did you write in the end? Still under review.

I really want to write a long review when I read the last dozen chapters, because it is really good. But at the last moment, the writing was messed up, just a little confusing. In fact, when Yu Li went to that mountain, the nightmares he experienced could be written better. It can be written that Qianyue later learned that Yu Li was not from this world, he became a god, and wanted to break the dimension to find him. There is no clear explanation here, it is just too rushed, the ending. There are some pitfalls that have not been filled in. I am sorry but I also want to see them. For example, Qian Yue went to Hainan 13 times to save Yu Li. Why did Bai Shi call him a madman? I want to know how Qian Yue got through. I really want to give it 5 stars, but for the last point, I will give it 4 stars! It doesn't matter, I like Qianyue and Yuli very much. In fact, I still want to have them together (of course, Qianyue is the main character). Hehe, I'm still a little bit reluctant to see their stories end with me. However, for every novel, there will be an end. We will no longer have a God's perspective, but they have always lived in another dimension, and many interesting stories continue to happen. Oops, I still wrote a long review. To be honest, I got introduced to it because of another big book (Ghost King Xie Chao haha). When I first read this book, the rating was only about 8 points, which was not very promising. In the first ten chapters, I felt that Qian Yue was so mean to Yu Li, so I didn't like it, so I put it away for a few days. One night, I opened the book again, read it slowly, and found that Qian Yue was really cute (about ten chapters in, Qian Yue started to express her love for Yu Li through actions). After that, she also showed her love in a direct manner, just like Sister Bing, she also cried, hahaha, it's so sweet.

The writing is like a trickle, like a memoir that really happened but the body is outside. Reading it makes my heart feel peaceful and sour (actually, I don't have a sword at the moment (Chapter 31), I don't know why I feel this way) This book is super good. I have reviewed it before, and I want to review it after reading it. The first person is just right for this book. After reading it, I have a hint of melancholy in my eyes. Unfortunately, as the only girl in this small county who has read this book, there is always a melancholy in my eyes that others cannot understand... After reading this Feeling empty in my heart, the two little bitter gourds ran to Chapter 80 to read what the author had to say. Will they be happy next? Even if it is a cycle (because it seems that they will go back in the dream), they must be happy. I cried. I want to cry when I think that they will finally be safe and sound.

This book is really super beautiful. Although it is from a first-person perspective, it really fascinated me [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]