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Genshin Impact Has No More Masterpieces, Genshin Impact Players Come Quickly
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The Original God Lives in Seclusion and Is Invincible at the Beginning
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Can you actually rate yourself? Even if it relies on the defense, I still get five points [I learned it]
This book is very good, logically rigorous and progressive. But the fly in the ointment is that the vocabulary is awkward and difficult to understand, which is not conducive to public acceptance, and the details are inappropriate. Just like the Guili Collection, the plots of novels generally have a structural function that connects the previous and the following, or express some emotional theme. As for this Guili Collection, I don't feel what I want to express at the moment. It is just a simple puzzle solving, judgment, and leaving after the end. What exactly do I want to express? Simply solving puzzles is boring. If you want to write about the process of solving puzzles, you can use vivid language to increase interest and attract readers' interest. It is suggested that some interesting stories can be added to the entire plot, which can also increase readers' willingness to read on. Finally, I wish the author to work hard and reach a higher level.
If nothing else, the heroine should be Ye Lan. How does the author plan to fill the gap in lifespan between the protagonist and Ye Lan? You're not going to hand out knives [smile]
Although I have only read Chapter 138, it does not affect my five-star rating. The plot is a bit boring, but compared to those with a harem, Invincible is much more interesting. However, the love line is too slow. The author, I want a sweet love! I've read Chapter 321, and we're finally together. It's worth it that I've been waiting for so long. Why is the male protagonist still underage? Hasn't the male protagonist grown taller?
I don't know why such a good novel has such a low rating
I feel like the writing is good, but the cover is very strange. If I change the cover, it should attract more readers.
Very good, why are there so few people...
Great, no need to say more
Very nice, why not rated?
It's strange. Your writing is very good and the writing style is very good. Although it always gives me a strange feeling of first person, it is indeed a normal third person. The character creation is also very good. There is nothing very unreasonable. The plot is relatively smooth and reasonable. I saw that the update is more timely and the number of words is quite large. Why are there so few people reading it?
The logic is strict, and it has a single female protagonist! ! I must give this five stars.
A time to deliver on your promise.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on
It's pretty, a little bit hot It's strange that this book has over a million words, why it hasn't been rated yet.
Very to my liking Very good(^ω^)👍🏻
There are so few people and it's a very good book.
I just want to know why the Immortal Ceremony and the Wind Demon Dragon incident are happening at the same time
It's very beautiful, but not many people see it.
To be honest, the perseverance is too strong, the author is too perseverant, but the pace could be a little faster
Author, I would like to know if there are any female protagonists, and if so, are there many or just one?
The book is actually very good, but I don't know why so few people have read it. It's worth reading.
It's worth reading. The writing is good and the characters are well developed. I hope it will be updated soon.
Five stars! Must be five stars!
It's pretty good, why doesn't anyone see it?
I feel like not many people read it?
Why are good books not rated?
Is the author also Yelanchu?
It's quite interesting, but I feel like the author likes to write every other chapter.
It's really good. The style is different from normal time travel. At least it's good if you don't follow the plot.
Damn it, I just realized that only about five hundred people are reading this book. Is this reasonable? !