Travel Spirit: My Charizard Rasengan

New book released, please rate it! ! ! If there is anything poorly written, please point it out in time and I will humbly accept it. Thank you all! Brothers, please speak more!

This book is good, I like it very much, but the content is a bit lacking

Although the writing in some places is not very good, it is still good. I hope it won't stop or else I'll make you little Kunkun come down and make soup for you to drink [laughing evilly]

It's still quite good, but it's a pity that it's short. If it's a long story, it would be very good if the battles are written in detail. There is also a book called "Elf, My Ninja Frog Second Start and End Good Sage Mode", which is similar to this kind of different world and is very well written. (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥ The name "Elf, my Ninja opens the Tailed Beast Sage Mode instantly" was a typo (／_＼) Big complaint

I have conceived several novels before, and I could only make slight adjustments to make up for some loopholes. I thought it was just a small adjustment at first, but I didn't expect that it would affect the whole body. The more adjustments I make, the more troublesome it becomes. So the author has adjusted it like this and it's already very good. Come on!

The subject matter is novel and the ideas are good, but the author is a new author. Personally, I feel that some of the settings of this book are imperfect and imprecise. The plot routine is too classic. Today's readers are tired of it. There are also a lot of typos and omissions. Come on, author, improve your shortcomings. I like the subject matter of this book (childhood memories) and give the author five stars.

Not bad, not bad. It's much better than other books. After all, other books won't add powerful white-eyed wolves to your parents. It's just that the updates are a bit slow.

Rain or shine, I'll be here waiting for you to cheer me up [laughs]

Is it multiple heroines or single heroine?

The level of Pokémon in the world is very high. How could Naruto improve Pokémon so much?

The content is good. I can see that the author is very thoughtful and has some suggestions. After reading many chapters, the author uses (so) (after all) (because) at the beginning of every sentence, which affects the reading experience. I hope the author will change it. There are many sentences where there is no need to add these words.

Too little. Update soon! The system should reward contract positions later, right? After all, the protagonist can't be the same as others, he can only make six contracts, right?

The overall feeling is good, but can the moves acquired by elves in other worlds be given to other elves to learn? Mother and daughter in the class can learn from each other, but other elves' moves are not seen learning from each other.

This book has the most. After reading chapter 800, the following is another novel. This is Pokémon. What I'm reading is Pokémon. It doesn't matter if you can use skills on your own, and it can lead people on a large scale.

@ The author is great. When writing skills, you can write down his original skills instead of new ones. You can write down not only the new skills acquired by traveling to another world, but also his original skills [Learned][Learned][Learned]

I personally think that the book is overall good, and the writing style is also quite good. However, there are too many typos, which makes it difficult to read smoothly. It is also a bit verbose, and I feel like I am repeating some of the things I have said before just to make up for the word count. Here is another suggestion. I hope the author can describe the characters better. The above are purely my personal feelings after reading them. Please bear with me if there are any similarities. I suddenly thought of some suggestions, that is, could there be more descriptions of the bond with the elves? After all, I have only seen Chapter 914 so far. Again, brothers, the above are purely my personal feelings after reading them. Please bear with me if there are any similarities.

Whether it's good or not is my problem. I always use my brain when reading. Wait until I overcome it.

The author has a flying thunder god and a armored ninja frog in tailed beast clothing, and a super saiyan dog (lukari of super saiyan descent)

Battle text, no daily communication with elves

There are few books that allow me to read more than 700 chapters

Not bad, a very good book, keep up the good work

The identified author is Yaya Weird!

There's nothing more to say. Come on, that's it.

The writing is great. Why is the rating only 6?

Will eating Devil Fruit make you afraid of water? Or should we eliminate this fear of water problem?

Isn't it Single heroine?

The sea is all water

I really like it, the content is very good.

Come on, author, don't stop updating [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

Not bad, pretty good looking