Soccer: The King of the Pitch from Blue Lock

I hope everyone will support this book. Your encouragement will become the motivation for the author's creation. Let's meet at the top!

Good looking, but not good enough

This is my first time seeing the blue prison theme, cheers↖(^ω^)↗

Let's support it with 5 stars first. However, I think the author's understanding of the original work is a bit biased: In the early stage, the Ma Lang will not pass the ball to others under any circumstances; Jie cannot be satisfied with a position other than the world's No. 1 Forward. This kind of deviation is OOC that affects the perception of the original work. There are some other disadvantages: The 1-line text reproduces a large amount of the original content, with very little content of its own. It can even be said that it directly converts the comic into text at 1:0.8, And 0.1 Of the 0.2 Basically just replaces "Jie" with "Lin". 2. The protagonist of this work has stolen a lot of scenes from the protagonist of the original work. It's not that he can't steal it, but it's really weird to directly transfer the scenes in this "transfer" style. The protagonist of the original work is now completely embarrassed. 3. I want to imitate the original work, but the shaping is not in place, and it doesn't have the twisted and wonderful cp feeling of the original work at all. 4. The protagonist's ability can't be too bad if he can join the national team and be selected by Huixin, but he ends up in the Z team, which is the worst. Even during the period of false ranking, it should be a relatively high-ranking team like Team V, so that it does not affect the original protagonist's role, and Team V still has Nagi Gaiden to copy. In short, I hope the author will work hard and hope you can write better. Hmm... After seeing the latest chapter, it does have its own content, but there are still some unresolved issues. 1 Role ooc. The interaction between Nagi and Rei was outrageous. If Nagi could talk so well and Rei-oh could understand it so easily, the original work would be at least 50% less fun. 2. The shaping is not in place. There was a long foreshadowing in the original wolf training section, but there is no foreshadowing here at all, so the transformation of the horse wolf seems very abrupt. Please respect it by giving it 4 stars. To be honest, I think the current level is only worth 3 stars at most. Author, please work harder.

The author should be faster, it's not enough [awkward laughter] There are still too few Blue Prison fanfictions. It's hard to find two people who can watch [Adoration]

It's okay, give me some support

I'm really looking forward to it, even though I haven't watched the anime. Because I don't have money to buy VIP But I have seen the commentary on Douyin, but it was not even included in the second round. Here I see the follow-up I wanted, thank you, thank you very much!

This is the first time I saw Blue Prison on Tomato. I gave it five stars.

The plot is very good. First of all, the male protagonist was very strong when he was in the Dragon Kingdom, but because only one goal was not kicked into the goal, all the previous goals were covered up. In the end, he was kicked out of the team and was reviled by thousands of people. In a sudden turn of events, he and his partners in Japan won competition after competition, leading the team to the peak of life [Top post][Top post][Top post][Love][Love][Love][Like][Like][Like]

It's much better than deducting the pass button at the beginningIt's really like the sky and the earth,Come on, come on🤤