Who Asked Him to Become an Immortal?

It's a rare good book. The protagonist is very stubborn and can't eradicate his enemies. After reading 200 chapters, I realized that the author is an experienced driver and drives at a steady speed. The plot is about practicing skills, upgrading and changing maps. The system is not excessive and allows the protagonist to grow from weak to strong. The language is not a novice and it is worth reading.

It's pretty good-looking, just laugh mindlessly and that's it.

There's no one good book. Anyway, I think this book is well written (I just don't understand how the protagonist got enmity with the seventh-grade spiritual root), but it's well written. I haven't seen such a good leisure book in a long time.

Okay, it's very good-looking, it's my type

It feels very good-looking. Why is the score so low? I just found it now. I hope it has a single female protagonist or no female protagonist.

It looks good [I learned] and the writing is very good, but the later stages and some things are a bit blurry [rolls eyes], but I don't really care~ I'm just trying to find faults [laughs awkwardly]

Overall, the writing is very good, nothing too outstanding, and the essence of it is presented very well. The writing is not too deliberate, on the contrary, the writing is very natural, and the writing style is also very good. The plot is not too fast or too slow. This book is still very good. However, in the later part of the book, it feels more everyday but also contains battles. I think it's better for you, the author, to write it clearly, otherwise it will easily end.

Overall it's good, the pace is okay, and it's one of the few novels that Tomato can read. It's just that the later stages were a little rushed, and the rhythm started from the part of controlling the Hehuan Sect. It was originally just for fun, but turned into a behind-the-scenes kind of thing, but it was okay to watch. It's just that the combat power in the later stage is too unbalanced. It's acceptable for the golden elixir to counter-kill the Nascent Soul, but the magic weapon that can kill enemies across levels is a bit too much. If you can kill high-level monks with a high-level magic weapon, then what is the point of cultivating skills and realms? Compared with low-level monks, the most important thing for high-level monks is their reaction ability. Just like when the low-level monks launch an attack, the high-level monks have already reacted and dodged long ago. Therefore, the subsequent Nascent Soul counter-killing the Transformation God is a bit too unbalanced. However, the author also said that this is his first time writing about cultivating immortals, so it's okay to write it like this.

This is an enjoyable book from beginning to end. It would not be perfect without being lazy in the spirit world.

This book is lighthearted and enjoyable without any irritation. As an old bookworm, I think the score of 8.8 Is definitely low! At least it should be around 9.5 Points It's a very good book, The Eunuch, and I haven't read it at all.

The pace of the book is well controlled, the author is an experienced driver, the speed is steady, and the turns are natural. The protagonist's bad image is well created, especially when he usually needs to be salty and salty, but when he needs to take action, he is also decisive and merciless. It is a smooth and refreshing novel that can be read from the beginning to the end. There is no cliche plot and the writing is neat and not sloppy. There are a lot of foreshadowings that have not been filled in. I wonder if the author has any intention of starting a second part?

The upgrade is really good, and the overall writing is pretty good. It's quite leisurely and entertaining. Except for the robots that are rewarded by the system for learning to practice corpses. Why do you work so hard? There could be more competitions. For example, if he is a fishing Taoist, he holds a fishing competition, and there is still a lot of room for maneuver.

You can read it, it's a pretty standard cool article. Although it's very cliche, it's watchable. The connection is also relatively smooth. No brain-bleeding procedures. There were no outrageous errors. The writing style needs to be improved.

I don't know what to say, just look. One word means good, two words means good-looking, three words means super good-looking, four words means super good-looking, 1. Clear logic, 2. No procrastination (it's boring to write dozens of chapters for one fighting scene), 3. Clear world view It's not a loss if you fall into the pit.

This sixth child can be had, and it has written everyone's dream. In fact, everyone is thinking about a life of breakfast, reading, lunch, hooking fish (game), dinner, picking up girls, and sleeping. And living such a life can keep getting stronger. [Cover face]

This book on cultivating immortality is a mess and the inner sect has organized a sword flying competition. It's so awesome. It's a pity that the number of words is a bit short. Only half of it has 156 chapters and only 400 chapters. It's too few.

Okay, take it easy. It would be nice if there were more funny elements.

Good reviews, must be good reviews. (Perfect) finale. It's been a long time since I've seen a completed novel. I was caught off guard when I suddenly saw the perfect ending. In addition, the author's address will be sent to you. The shining baby [Learned][Learned][Learned]

It looks good, and overall it's very smooth. The only thing I didn't like was that I thought the protagonist didn't have a woman in his heart, but I didn't know that he actually had a harem! But the good thing is that the protagonist's focus has never been distorted, it is to better obtain resources and improve himself!

It's a very good read, and the second one is a read from beginning to end about cultivating immortality. It's humorous without losing emotion. Thanks to the author for the spiritual pleasure. I also started to pay attention to your other works. Thanks for your hard work. I wish the author better results and good health.

It's a casual and refreshing article, a bit sloppy overall, but it can be used to pass the time. I look forward to the sequel to Spirit World and Fairy World.

It's quite good. If you like this type of novel, you can read it in one sitting! It's funny and exciting. The first and middle stages are quite exciting. The ending feels a bit hasty, but that's fine. It's 600,000 words, no more, no less. I recommend reading it! [Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon]

It's really exciting! Excellent writing skills! The graphics are strong, easy to follow, the logic is clear, and the wording is concise and accurate. I don't know why the score is not high. Many works with a score of 96 are nothing compared to it! Such a beautiful book with strong literary foundation, it scores 8.8 Points! And it's full of rubbish works in secondary and secondary languages, but it actually got a high score of 9.9, 9.8?

It's very interesting and the setting is quite novel. There is currently no poisonous point. There are bugs in some small details, but they are innocuous. Well worth a look! !

I was wondering why the style was so familiar. It turned out to be Xu Muge's version of Immortality.

After reading this, I'm used to five-star reviews! The setting is actually quite interesting. I feel like there is actually more to write later. I was really caught off guard.

It's not bad, it's pretty good-looking, you can go take a look.

Just look at He Yun's part. It's very well written. Unlike other books, the women written about it are very off-putting to readers, and there's nothing poisonous about it (personal opinion). Overall, it's a very good book, so let's just eat it up on my bookshelf.

A good book, not procrastinating, and the plot is compact. The only drawback is that the ending is too hasty.

It can be seen, but it is similar to the attribute points of the Immortal Stream. Not enough compared to the top, but more than enough than the bottom. Personally, I feel that the secret realm part and the following content have nothing to do with the show, and are a bit off topic. Also, if the protagonist does a certain thing, it will improve a certain aspect of the protagonist's ability. It is more practical to do anything to randomly improve a certain aspect of the protagonist's strength. Personally, I feel that this is easier to write and more interesting. Come on＾0＾~