The Boundary-Severing Stele

Brother, please write slowly and don't rush. I hope the protagonist can be as awesome as Shang Ziyan. Especially kendo. But brother, I still want to suggest one thing, that is, there should be a little more affection between men and women. I feel that in the last article, Shang Ziyan's wife didn't have that much drama later on. However, a few more heroines are acceptable. A good man can still have two or three female protagonists. Two or three female protagonists, at least not a harem. And with two or three female protagonists, there will be more emotional scenes. It's just a single female protagonist, and the emotional scenes are a bit monotonous. In any case, it is always good to combine multiple aspects. To be honest, I really liked the last article you wrote. I don't think there is much of a problem here, so I can still continue writing. It's better to get together slowly.

Beautiful! Fortunately, Ye Qing'er is not the heroine, but Nangong Jiu'er is very satisfied! I hope there won't be a harem in the future! Big cheers for the author!

A new book with a slow pace, if you like a fast pace you can go. This book will be written with all my heart. As long as it doesn't crash and my grades aren't that bad, I can guarantee it will be over three million words long.

If nothing else, this heroine is the most powerful heroine among all the fantasy novels I have ever read.

It's good-looking, and it's a single female protagonist. Overall, she's quite passionate. The male protagonist is a growth-type, and the female protagonist is not like some books where the female protagonist has very few scenes, and the female protagonist is particularly soy. Overall, the female protagonist's scenes are relatively good overall, but I hope there can be more emotional scenes. I'm quite satisfied with what I've read so far. I hope the heroine won't have a child so soon. I hope the author will keep updating. I'm almost finished reading it now. Generally, it's a good read and unfinished books. I couldn't help but finish this book soon. I hope the author won't be as lousy as other authors and ended up being unfinished! Come on author! ! ! !

The plot is very good. I support a single female protagonist. I hope there won't be a harem or other ambiguities in the future. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

The plot of this book is smooth and exciting and deserves five stars.

The overall rhythm does not have too many ups and downs, and there is not much foreshadowing. As for the traditional supporting roles, the transition is quite natural, not too stiff, and the fighting is not too wordy with each move. The narration and dialogue have a mixed feeling. The overall narrative is continuous, without too many circles, without excessive brainlessness and nymphomaniacs. It can be regarded as a bit of a fantasy, but it is not too deep, so you can still watch it! It can be rated from three and a half to four stars. If I don't give it five stars, I feel that many plots do not unfold the narrative and are not released, and the characters are not very appealing! Each takes what he needs

Readers, please come on, I read more than 9 million words in three days. First of all, I feel that the characters are well portrayed. Let's give the heroine some more roles. It feels a bit monotonous. It is good to portray more protagonists, but the combination of diversity will be better. I really like the heroine. The main supporting characters can also be described more. Secondly, the plot can be speeded up. It's played, and I feel that the rhythm has slowed down a bit later on. I hope it doesn't collapse in the later stage. At the same time, I also think that the protagonist's "Supreme God Art" can also add some effects and abilities. It can be properly awakened later, otherwise it feels that the protagonist is somewhat lacking. I hope the author can continue to maintain [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

I read another book by the author. Compared with the heroine of that book, this one is much improved. The heroine still has few plots in the early and middle stages, and her talent is not that good. However, in the later period, the heroine has more plots and her talent is much stronger (this is satisfactory, strong men and strong women yyd s), the plot is okay, at least I can follow it. It is an improvement compared to the previous book. There are some toxic plots, but not many. As a single female protagonist, it is not very comfortable to have a small plot, because I clearly know that the female partner has a very strong and unique charm ability. Many days Jiao was unknowingly succumbed to the poison, and he still wanted to see her and was conceited that his love for the heroine would not waver, but in the end, he was not fooled. He insisted on refusing to admit it to the female counterpart. If the heroine had not been able to help detoxify, he would not dare to think about the consequences; although it was poison, it moved the male protagonist's heart. It's a bit difficult to comment on. I didn't like the female disciple I took in, but I didn't keep him with me (I personally don't like the male protagonist accepting female disciples). There are many plots for the female protagonist in the later stage, but they are basically fighting and practicing with the male protagonist, and there is no emotional scene [face covering] Can we add some emotional scenes? The author should update quickly. I have almost forgotten the previous plot. Please update me six times a day.