Jinghong, Sword Shadow, Heading to the End of the World

Brother, please write slowly and don't rush. I hope the protagonist can be as awesome as Shang Ziyan. Especially kendo. But brother, I still want to suggest one thing, that is, there should be a little more affection between men and women. I feel that in the last article, Shang Ziyan's wife didn't have that much drama later on. However, a few more heroines are acceptable. A good man can still have two or three female protagonists. Two or three female protagonists, at least not a harem. And with two or three female protagonists, there will be more emotional scenes. It's just a single female protagonist, and the emotional scenes are a bit monotonous. In any case, it is always good to combine multiple aspects. To be honest, I really liked the last article you wrote. I don't think there is much of a problem here, so I can still continue writing. It's better to get together slowly.

Beautiful! Fortunately, Ye Qing'er is not the heroine, but Nangong Jiu'er is very satisfied! I hope there won't be a harem in the future! Big cheers for the author!

A new book with a slow pace, if you like a fast pace you can go. This book will be written with all my heart. As long as it doesn't crash and my grades aren't that bad, I can guarantee it will be over three million words long.

If nothing else, this heroine is the most powerful heroine among all the fantasy novels I have ever read.

It's good-looking, and it's a single female protagonist. Overall, she's quite passionate. The male protagonist is a growth-type, and the female protagonist is not like some books where the female protagonist has very few scenes, and the female protagonist is particularly soy. Overall, the female protagonist's scenes are relatively good overall, but I hope there can be more emotional scenes. I'm quite satisfied with what I've read so far. I hope the heroine won't have a child so soon. I hope the author will keep updating. I'm almost finished reading it now. Generally, it's a good read and unfinished books. I couldn't help but finish this book soon. I hope the author won't be as lousy as other authors and ended up being unfinished! Come on author! ! ! !

The plot is very good. I support a single female protagonist. I hope there won't be a harem or other ambiguities in the future. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

The plot of this book is smooth and exciting and deserves five stars.

The overall rhythm does not have too many ups and downs, and there is not much foreshadowing. As for the traditional supporting roles, the transition is quite natural, not too stiff, and the fighting is not too wordy with each move. The narration and dialogue have a mixed feeling. The overall narrative is continuous, without too many circles, without excessive brainlessness and nymphomaniacs. It can be regarded as a bit of a fantasy, but it is not too deep, so you can still watch it! It can be rated from three and a half to four stars. If I don't give it five stars, I feel that many plots do not unfold the narrative and are not released, and the characters are not very appealing! Each takes what he needs

Readers, please come on, I read more than 9 million words in three days. First of all, I feel that the characters are well portrayed. Let's give the heroine some more roles. It feels a bit monotonous. It is good to portray more protagonists, but the combination of diversity will be better. I really like the heroine. The main supporting characters can also be described more. Secondly, the plot can be speeded up. It's played, and I feel that the rhythm has slowed down a bit later on. I hope it doesn't collapse in the later stage. At the same time, I also think that the protagonist's "Supreme God Art" can also add some effects and abilities. It can be properly awakened later, otherwise it feels that the protagonist is somewhat lacking. I hope the author can continue to maintain [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

I read another book by the author. Compared with the heroine of that book, this one is much improved. The heroine still has few plots in the early and middle stages, and her talent is not that good. However, in the later period, the heroine has more plots and her talent is much stronger (this is satisfactory, strong men and strong women yyd s), the plot is okay, at least I can follow it. It is an improvement compared to the previous book. There are some toxic plots, but not many. As a single female protagonist, it is not very comfortable to have a small plot, because I clearly know that the female partner has a very strong and unique charm ability. Many days Jiao was unknowingly succumbed to the poison, and he still wanted to see her and was conceited that his love for the heroine would not waver, but in the end, he was not fooled. He insisted on refusing to admit it to the female counterpart. If the heroine had not been able to help detoxify, he would not dare to think about the consequences; although it was poison, it moved the male protagonist's heart. It's a bit difficult to comment on. I didn't like the female disciple I took in, but I didn't keep him with me (I personally don't like the male protagonist accepting female disciples). There are many plots for the female protagonist in the later stage, but they are basically fighting and practicing with the male protagonist, and there is no emotional scene [face covering] Can we add some emotional scenes? The author should update quickly. I have almost forgotten the previous plot. Please update me six times a day.

The author writes very well, I like it very much and am very satisfied The author's writing is very good. I like it very much. I am very satisfied. I hope it will be more exciting in the future. Keep up the good work.

No matter what others say, I think it looks great. Please keep updating!

It looks good, but the details of the characters need to be carefully polished.

If you can watch it, I'll give it five stars! The author's writing is quite fascinating, and the male protagonist is decisive in killing and improving quickly, which is a refreshing novel. But there are too many flaws, and some plots will make old book fans frown. Conquering two white tigers in a row is just to make up the word count. That old black man is still a monster in the secret realm. How can any beast not eat people but wait for people to wake up? Then the author suddenly inserted an explanation that the last few words before the injured person fell into coma were that he had the Transformation Pill... And then temporarily explained why he had the Transformation Pill. As for the leader of the Demon Cult who finally wiped him out with a finger in front of several righteous masters, the masters of the sect were all heartbroken but did not kill the Demon Cult, and then left, and died when they died? And then the author didn't want to end there, so he resurrected the male protagonist's consciousness, and directly restored his physical body without taking away his body... Then he changed a continent and started writing a new story again. The lowest level here is semi-sacred realm? It doesn't matter if it doesn't update, just keep blowing!

It's pretty good so far, but the updates are a little slow. Overall, the book is good! There is a single female protagonist, there are brothers, and the teacher-sect complex is not like most books where if you are a man, you will dislike the pig's feet, but if you are a woman, you will stick to it. Come on!

The male protagonist has a very good personality, not like the Holy Mother (Qingzhou Ye Qingcheng and Ye Xueer didn't like it), the single female protagonist is decisive in killing and will not carry it headlessly. It's just that the update is a bit slow.

Well written, that's how I feel I wish there could be more descriptions of the heroine. The male protagonist does not want a loner, and the female protagonist does not want a vase.

The writing is good, I hope you can continue to work hard! Write better work!

This is a fantasy novel book worth reading. The description of the characters is profound, vivid and lifelike. From the protagonist's counterattack, he overcame all obstacles, followed the protagonist's joy and anger, and finally climbed to the top.

I need to re-evaluate it. The three characters in it are too successful. The first one is the heroine. Needless to say, all the heroines in fantasy novels combined are not as powerful as this heroine. The second one is Xue Wuxin. This character is too attractive. The third one is. There is no sky in the dark night of hell. He is the only one who can keep up with the talent of the protagonist. He is so powerful that he and the protagonist are almost friends and foes. I feel that the finale of this novel should be that the protagonist and the supporting character will not fall out. The two of them will have a new villain appear, and then the hell world and the heaven world will unite. In the last chapter that was just updated, the protagonist said that the protagonist has grown up and must unite the heaven world and the hell world. It feels like a foreshadowing.

Give it five stars. The standard upgrade is awesome. There is no big, unacceptable poisonous point. It can be seen in Tomato. Many of the high scores in Tomato don't even make me want to read Chapter 50. This book is very good

I came across this book by chance. The author's story is relatively novel, not bloody or harem-y, so you can read it.

The content is brilliantly written and highly readable.

It's very good. The logic is clear, unlike other books that explain it one at a time and are not rigorous at all. It seems to affect IQ. When you meet a woman, just approach her. The man will be ready to kill you at every turn, but the woman will... In fact, she also has her own difficulties, and her nature is not bad. Keep it up, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

It's a very good novel. I'm glad I saw it. Comments said that Ye Xueer and the others were not the heroines, otherwise they would really vomit blood. This should be regarded as the biggest foreshadowing. It was very uncomfortable to read [face covering] and it was an indescribable feeling.

A truly quality novel. The plot is well conceived and the language organization is appropriate. It is an excellent work by Shuangwen now.

Very good, be decisive in killing, go your own way and let others say it

Good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, stick to a single heroine (´-ω-`) They have all started their own solo spiritual journey, and I don't know when they will meet next time. I look forward to their next meeting [Cool] [Cool] [Cool] I'll tell you quietly, roughly, roughly how many chapters it will be hehe (a little anxious [full] [full] [full])

This novel is very good and worth reading. I also read his other book which was also good, that is, the one about Cultivation from the Indestructible Body

This is the only article I have the desire to read recently.