Yatales the God of the Earth

Good support! The writing is very good and the plot is very attractive. Yatales is so handsome! In addition, I would like to suggest that if you have an official wife and you don't have enough writing skills, don't start a harem. It doesn't matter if you are not a neon pure and cool person. The armor is our special photo. Don't do these messy things. Just keep the current status of a single female protagonist.

I just like this kind of thing that is not about time travel and rebirth.

I feel that the author can write the divinity better. Now I feel like an emperor instead of a god. He should be more compassionate and feel kind to everything on the earth instead of being arrogant. People are emotional, but they should be rational and devoid of emotions [Thinking] [Thinking] (Personal opinion)

I especially like to kowtow to Duanmu Yan and Ma Lingling CP. I think it's because the tokusatsu drama is a child-oriented drama, so the emotional treatment in the drama is relatively obscure, but this is a novel, so I can freely kowtow to CP hahaha [laughs]

I came here for Yatta, hehe, I love him to death.

Teacher, I feel more uncomfortable when you are not popular [I'm about to cry] Why is it only 6.9? I feel that this article is the best one I have read among these long-form Nava fanfics. Duanmu's words and deeds are very close to the character. Some of the articles are really unreadable. They are ooc at first glance. And teacher, you take Lingling to play and write about Yanling... I really like some official couples. The warm and small daily life is really good. Duanmu is tired from the whole drama and it's time to take a rest. The God of Death also needs a place where he can completely relax and rest.

Okay, but I just want to watch General Duanmu kill indiscriminately. Most of the people who watch it have this idea.

😭😭😭😭It's so cute and I love watching it. I feel like Duan Muyan doesn't dare to touch Lingling, but other young couples are so good, so good, so good to fuck. Hmm, I wonder if the author wants to have a harem? I don't want multiple heroines

I have read a few novels about General Duanmu. Personally, this book is the most to my liking! The development of the storyline is not a simple copy, you can see the author's many ingenious ideas, and I also like the settings of divinity and other aspects. This not only has more flavor and allows readers to see the out-of-control/indifferent version of the general (crossed out), but also makes the armor world more real, and the different characters are further improved. While the plot is eye-catching, the author of the book also handles the emotional lines very well. The sugar that Yan and Ling go to in both directions and go to the future together is very easy to touch and is not industrial saccharine. The other characters' arrows towards Yan do not affect everyone's character creation (for example, the female partner licks her inexplicably and then the heroine is angry and the heroine fights for 300 rounds or something). In short, praise! Full of faintness! !

Ren Xiaoman's character and behavior shouldn't be washed away, right? Having done so many bad things, it would be a big stain to clear this book.

I wonder if there are two heroines, after all, Han Xinyue is pretty good. In addition, regarding Ren Xiaoman, I think it's better not to come clean, and don't give away a daughter. I think Han Xinyue and Ren Xiaoman are not suitable for each other. Finally, come on, the author, your writing is great! ! ! [Smile]

This book is okay, why isn't it popular?

The plot is very exciting, to be honest, I want to see Yanzi become completely divine. . ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾Hi～

Come on, I really like this book, and the description of the divinity of Yatales really impressed me! [Love][love][love]

It's wonderful. I finally found a book by General Duanmu.

If you like the original Duan Muyan and Yan Ling cp, don't miss this book. It is the least OOC book I have ever read.

I have been looking for this book for a long time, and the third one has become a masterpiece in my heart. The previous two books were "The Cruelty of Nava (Completed)" and "General Duanmu, Just the Netherworld Demon". It took me a long time to read it, and it is quite interesting. The author's writing style is really good in the Chinese language department. I prefer to read the type of Duanmu himself. I feel a little tired of seeing some people who have traveled through time to become Duanmu. Thank you for the author [laughing]

It's very interesting and well written as a fan fiction. The supporting character Ren Xiaoman makes me feel like the male protagonist Long Aotian, especially in Chapter 79. Isn't this the villain of the Dragon King who robs the female protagonist?

Come on! I'm optimistic about you!

Yes, I think it's quite interesting. Duan Muyan's fighting scene shows the strength of Jakarese.

I found a lot of fanfics, but this one is not about time travel, but about Kai San, and the love story between Duan Muyan and Lingling. The author writes it very well, but the update frequency is uncertain. Come on, your homework is great [laughing][laughing]

This is currently the best Nava fanfic. Although there are not many of them now, I believe that if you keep writing, you will get a very good result.

It's good-looking, and I personally think it's the best among fics. In addition: (the author will update soon)

It's the best fanfic I've ever seen. The plot is well written and the characters are well drawn. This book is so beautiful! The plot and character descriptions are very good

The writing is good, but I'm curious. If this situation develops, will there be a theatrical version?

Very good, at least there is no disgusting thing like other authors who trample on Yatta to improve their favorite armor.

It's a rare armor CP story. I feel it can score an 8. After everyone insisted on reading the emotional and character lines in the previous chapters, which were still very immature in writing, the trend is getting better and better after about 70-80 chapters.

It's very interesting. It's the best Nava fanfic I've read so far. Come on.

It seems pretty good to me, except for one thing. When writing language descriptions, can you replace the ellipses with periods? Otherwise, there will always be a feeling of elongated tone when reading, which is not very comfortable.

Come on! Very well written [like]