She’s a Citrus-Scented Young Lady

The writing is very good, very good for a cook who lacks Lily novels! However, did the author intend to write a short story? The distance between the two of them closed too quickly, and there was a feeling that it would be over as soon as the sugar was enough. It would be nice if the relationship between the two of them could flow a little bit longer, with Xia working on her career, Xi developing her career, and then having a little ambiguity every day, Xiao Tian. It will feel much better if the feelings gradually increase. But this kind of always sweet one is really good, hehehehe [Love]

I hope it can continue to be sweet, and don't use any be aesthetics Such a diligent author

I like it very much, although it is a bit fast, and it feels like there is a knife in the next chapter, that is, the emotions can be foreshadowed for a few chapters. I like the rest of it, and I feel that there will be a bit too much later.

It looks great, but I don't dare to rate it too high for fear of something happening. Come on! This explosion almost made me explode, it was too much, I liked it so much😍, I was going to be overwhelmed...

The author's writing is very good, and it suits my taste very well. Just write it like this. Write more about their experiences and efforts for both parties. Add more sugar, it doesn't matter if it exceeds the limit. Just write less about abuse and violence. Too many Lily articles are either torture or knife 😢😢

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Five stars for your support. It's well written. I'm looking forward to the candy sharing session 🍉

Hehe, this is my dream love letter!

Very beautiful, I like it very much

Not bad, but the progress is a bit too fast. Some of the descriptions are not very delicate and the foreshadowing is not very good. I have not been stabbed. I hope the author will write better and better, although I feel that it may be finished faster.