Fantasy: I Picked up a Lucky Bag in the Immortal's Live Broadcast Room

When I first read it, I was so angry that I complained to my friends. The synopsis is really good, but it's a pity that the writing lacks a bit of power and taste, which is really bad. But the more I write, the better it gets. I will soon change my map to the fairy world. I hope the author will work steadily and think more before writing. My writing skills have improved a lot. I would like to praise you and give you a gift. I hope I can be named (bushi [top post]

I personally recommend it for the following reasons: 1. The protagonist has brains and is not an invincible novel. 2. To repay kindness, please read Chapter 67. 3. The painting style is humorous and funny. You can read Chapter 74. In fact, I thought it was very ordinary at first, but then the more I read, the more interesting it became. Friends who are interested can take a look here, and friends who are not interested should not give up. After all, there are thousands of good online articles that are suitable for you. I hope the author will continue to work hard and let us read enough. Not much to say. If what I said is wrong or incomplete, please comment and thank you for reading. @NewsLianpo right?

I see 71 now So far, I think the chapter is pretty good. I read the comments and many people gave bad reviews. I don't know why. They all said it was a routine from a few years ago (or maybe it's because I haven't read it, but some readers have). But what I want to say is that the world of spiritual cultivation itself is fictitious. Our understanding of it is only limited to reading other novels about cultivating immortals. No one has really lived in the world of cultivating immortals (if it is true) Please tell me (out of curiosity)), then as an author, you can have your own logic and break the conventional thinking. Many readers say that some plots are unreasonable. I would like to ask, what is reasonable, what is the definition, and who stipulates how it must be written. In that case, there will be no good books, and everything will be created according to the model of the predecessors, curbing the author's creativity. And I didn't think any of the plots were unreasonable (maybe it's because I haven't read many books and haven't reached the level yet). Anyway, it is normal for everyone to have different tastes and different genres. I can only say that this book does not meet the taste of most people (I am not saying that those who say the book is not good in the reviews are wrong, but they have different tastes. Maybe these people can't appreciate this kind of beauty). Anyway, I think the author writes well, but it is indeed a bit draggy. I see 71 Chapter, the protagonist has not created a chamber of commerce yet, which does not match the title of the book. Can anyone tell me when the protagonist will build a chamber of commerce [what]? I hope the author will do more, and I will also send some free gifts to support it. Come on, author [currently working on the manuscript]

I really like novels with this theme, please read more soon. . Yes, you are already my baby The subject matter is good, but the content is rubbish. . . I haven't watched "Leading the Army to War". What can I watch about "The Imperial Eagle Dog"? The subject matter is really good, but the content is really rubbish.

Overall it's good, the updates are a bit slow, but some of them look good.

Still very good! Looking forward to the follow-up

I just realized that I forgot to rate it [face covering] In fact, this book is okay, and I can keep reading it. The main reason is that I have never read other books on this type of subject, and I am too lazy to look for it again. Moreover, this book is well written, and it is worth reading. That's right, author, it's really hard on my sister-in-law that you're so short [laughing evilly]

The story line is clear, novel, and attractive. The text is very good. I have read 150 chapters.

If a book is a good one, give it a good review. I've read 40 chapters so far, and it doesn't seem like there's any major flaws. Why is the rating so low? [Laughing] The first few dozen chapters were quite interesting, but the further I read, the more I felt overwhelmed. [Pause face] Inexplicably, a barbarian invasion scene was made.) The more I read, the less interesting I became. I'm probably ready to give up.

It's a very good book, but after more than 300 chapters, I didn't want to read it anymore because of the protagonist's behavior and ideals in wanting to build a utopia in the world of immortality. I remain respectful and understanding. Although I don't think the author can write it. But I support the author. But I retreated first.

This book is one of the rare masterpieces I have ever read, and I don't know why the rating is so low. In my opinion, if the male channel doesn't have a stud, and the female channel doesn't fall in love, it's already passed the mark. If a good plot is added, it would be very good!

Sigh... I listened to so much without realizing it... Apart from anything else, I found that it has a great hypnotic effect, and it can also be used to read text. Basically, I can make myself sleepy after reading it for fifteen minutes. Well, it's just average. It's okay in some places, but with so many random words, a good one turns into an average one. [Thinking] But no matter what, the hypnotic effect is really good...

Wow! Your novel is so well written! The story has ups and downs, the characters have distinct personalities, and the writing is beautiful and smooth, making it immersive. You are simply a genius writer! Keep up the good work and look forward to more of your excellent works coming out!

In the later chapter 1000, all members of the Ten Thousand Realms Chamber of Commerce suddenly disappeared. It was just a foreshadowing from the protagonist. Although I knew it might be the protagonist's plan, it still felt uncomfortable and a little abrupt. I felt that it could have been handled better.

There are still 200 chapters left to finish. I was already in a book shortage and didn't have many novels I wanted to read, so I found this novel with more than 1,000 chapters. I didn't plan on reading this book with my brain in mind, I already thought about it and it was cool. Later in the process of reading, I found that the logic is quite good. It feels good when it feels right, and it stops when it feels like it. In fact, now that I see it, I hope he can break through the 2000th chapter. In my opinion, the 2000th chapter is a watershed in a novel. But novels with more than 2,000 chapters basically repeat the same routine in the later stages. This novel was not written according to this, but chose to end. All in all, this book is still very good. I started reading novels in the 5th grade and now I am a senior, certified bookworm. [Laugh]

To be honest, this movie is really good. It's rare that I can watch it for such a long time, and it's constantly refreshing. I don't have the feeling of being invincible all at once. The author has really grasped this point very well [Sending my heart] Although there are a few flaws, it's not a big problem.

Very good, the setting is novel, the rhythm is well grasped, the combat power has not collapsed, and the world view is huge. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. In the end, the new maps in the future should not continue to be laid out in the same way like the first two chapters, and continue to deceive higher-level players. Readers will also feel tired. You can change the method, such as jumping out of the chess game, then developing it again, and then coming back to destroy it.

Although this is a cool article at its core, it is well-organized and the content is quite novel. It is worth reading in this book. Remember to lose your mind, but it is better to save some, otherwise some people will not be able to understand [Love][Love]

The author's writing style has also grown, but it's a bit short. I hope it can be longer in the future. It might be a bit hard to read at first, but after reading dozens of chapters, the author's writing style and logic are very good, and the plot is also very good.

This is a very good book. There are some small problems in the early development process of the protagonist. I directly discouraged a lot of people. I recommend skipping Chapter 100. The protagonist starts doing business. It is very interesting and has a good outline. The author's writing style has also improved significantly in the later chapters. The author's updates are also very stable. The author must persevere. It is a rare good book.

Excellent: The subject matter is novel, thoughtful, not mindless fighting, the early plot is delicate, and there are many foreshadowings. Shortcomings: The advancement of strength in the later stage is too vague, and I personally feel that it is the end of the world when you reach the divine realm. Saints are still human beings. This final realm can be merged into the divine realm and subdivided. Overall, this book is still very good. Although the ending is a bit hasty, if you don't finish it, you will continue to follow it, and the result may not be as good as it is now.

Lu Ziliang slapped him with one slap, Xu Fan slapped him with two slaps, and the leader of the Yuan clan even gave him the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. In the later stage, it was also Shuang Wai Wai Wai Wai [smile], Shuang Wen, you deserve it [Like] [Like] [Like] ——Finished reading this book at 14:35 on July 29, 2025

The writing style is very good, and the character structure is clear. It is really one of the few good books I have read so far. Lu Fan's character structure is very good. I like the character very much. He has no drag on the fight, and the writing is not broken. It is really beautiful.

Good quality and low price, the boss delivered the goods very quickly, very good and very satisfied, the seller's service attitude was very good, very satisfied with a purchase

I was originally the first young master of a prominent family, but I was killed by a scheming thief. My family abandoned me, my master expelled me, and even cut off my spiritual veins, ruined my appearance, ruined my reputation, and was despised by the world. In my next life, I will definitely make a comeback and become a winner in life. I am as rich as the enemy. I can cover the sky with my hands. I am afraid of everyone. Flowers fade before every car has a flat tire.

The pacing of the early Human World chapter was well controlled. At the end of the Immortal World chapter, when Xu Fan appeared, it was very depressing to read the hundreds of chapters. I kept jumping until the end. The plot of the whole book has twists and turns, laughter and passion. There are also some places where the writing is not rigorous. The world view is quite big, but it feels very empty. It is a book that can be read.

This novel is very well written and has an engaging storyline that makes you want to keep reading. Although it is a little wordy in some places, the writing is generally smooth and the characterizations are vivid, making it well worth reading.

It's pretty good. The author writes a lot of topics well. The fights are all very detailed. They don't end with a win as soon as you start fighting. But a lot of the planning is still a bit lacking. Some methods can be thought of by the protagonist, but the enemy can't think of them. I hope that there will be more plots to make the plot more exciting, but I hope that the protagonist will not be too smart, which will be boring. I hope that the degree can be grasped.

It's good to watch. Anyway, I quite like Lu Fan's characterization. He's a bit funny but also rigorous. Anyway, he's pretty good [eat melon]. At first, I suspected that he was the reincarnation of Lu Hansheng, but in the end I realized he wasn't [face covering]

Although the ending is a bit too simple, we have accompanied the author along the way and have seen the author's writing continue to improve. I believe that the author's next work can bring us a better reading experience! Five-star praise, the flowers are finished! ! !