Xiao Lin (Krillin) in Dragon Ball has traveled through time, but there are no plug-ins, and he doesn't know much about the plot. What should a pure Earthling do when faced with the cheating Saiyans, the ferocious Frieza, and the suture monster Siru?
Reader comments
Let me announce the theme, the chaotic world view of Dragon Ball. In this way, various time travels, intrusions and rebirths can be easily explained.
The content after that is okay. My theme mentioned that Earthling Kobayashi was right, and the way to become stronger is not bad. My original intention was to write it after reading Dragon Ball fandom. At the beginning, Golden Frieza and the Super Four Red Monkeys were also interesting.
However, it is possible that due to the influence of the comments, the subsequent pace was hesitant. I am a newbie writing a book, and it is good to finish it quickly when the passion is not lost. I don't have any big opinions on the plot arrangement, but I can finish it in ten chapters if I can't bear it. It's very uncomfortable to have an ending like this, so I gave it four stars.
Although the writing is not very good. But the idea is good. Although the rating is not very high, those who like to watch Dragon Ball will never treat this work based on the rating. They must experience it personally.
Not bad, the ideas are clear and the characters are vivid, but it ends very quickly.
Based on the original characters, no system, no unreasonable cheats, based on the original work
With the power of a non-system and non-Saiyan, we can conquer this broken world.
Although the plot is a bit confusing, I personally think it is better than Dragon Ball, which is invincible at the beginning.
It's good to watch. It's good to watch. But I'm looking forward to watching the show. The plot has been very difficult. I'm getting beaten up.
It's really interesting. This is the most down-to-earth Dragon Ball I have ever seen, but unfortunately it is too short, so I would like to call this Dragon Ball short and concise, hahaha.
When can I write as well as you? I like this kind of unsystematic novel.
I guess I didn't have time, so I ended it hastily.
This book is indeed ok. The setting is very novel and very similar to Life Shackles. Keep up the good work, author. A few pictures are enough for anyone to read.
There aren't many people. Let's see if we can join hands and divide the points evenly.
Still good!
It can be good, very good
The content is compact and refreshing
Stable, the plot is not long-winded
Not bad, just too short
Not to mention anything else, just the imagination alone deserves a high score from me.
Mask? Or it's up to you.
Quite exciting, why was it cut off?
I don't agree, it's over like this and I haven't had enough of it yet.
Although it ended hastily, I still read a good novel
Very well written
Very well written and beautiful
The idea is really good. I wonder if No. 18 Became a loser?
Personally I think it looks very nice! Recommended [please update] [top post]
It's quite good to watch, the plot doesn't drag on, and the plot involving multiple time travelers is handled very well [like]
Yes, the description of the characters is very good, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also very passionate. How did it become a daily show later [laughing][laughing][laughing]
The reason why the rating is low is mostly because the author is too lazy and will update one chapter a day, but the writing is still good. Just go to the bookshelf and eat ashes. I'll enjoy reading it once more.
Let me announce the theme, the chaotic world view of Dragon Ball. In this way, various time travels, intrusions and rebirths can be easily explained. The content after that is okay. My theme mentioned that Earthling Kobayashi was right, and the way to become stronger is not bad. My original intention was to write it after reading Dragon Ball fandom. At the beginning, Golden Frieza and the Super Four Red Monkeys were also interesting. However, it is possible that due to the influence of the comments, the subsequent pace was hesitant. I am a newbie writing a book, and it is good to finish it quickly when the passion is not lost. I don't have any big opinions on the plot arrangement, but I can finish it in ten chapters if I can't bear it. It's very uncomfortable to have an ending like this, so I gave it four stars.
Although the writing is not very good. But the idea is good. Although the rating is not very high, those who like to watch Dragon Ball will never treat this work based on the rating. They must experience it personally.
Not bad, the ideas are clear and the characters are vivid, but it ends very quickly.
Based on the original characters, no system, no unreasonable cheats, based on the original work
With the power of a non-system and non-Saiyan, we can conquer this broken world.
Although the plot is a bit confusing, I personally think it is better than Dragon Ball, which is invincible at the beginning.
It's good to watch. It's good to watch. But I'm looking forward to watching the show. The plot has been very difficult. I'm getting beaten up.
It's really interesting. This is the most down-to-earth Dragon Ball I have ever seen, but unfortunately it is too short, so I would like to call this Dragon Ball short and concise, hahaha.
When can I write as well as you? I like this kind of unsystematic novel. I guess I didn't have time, so I ended it hastily.
This book is indeed ok. The setting is very novel and very similar to Life Shackles. Keep up the good work, author. A few pictures are enough for anyone to read.
There aren't many people. Let's see if we can join hands and divide the points evenly.
Still good!
It can be good, very good
The content is compact and refreshing
Stable, the plot is not long-winded
Not bad, just too short
Not to mention anything else, just the imagination alone deserves a high score from me.
Mask? Or it's up to you.
Quite exciting, why was it cut off? I don't agree, it's over like this and I haven't had enough of it yet.
Although it ended hastily, I still read a good novel
Very well written
Very well written and beautiful
The idea is really good. I wonder if No. 18 Became a loser?
Personally I think it looks very nice! Recommended [please update] [top post]
It's quite good to watch, the plot doesn't drag on, and the plot involving multiple time travelers is handled very well [like]
Yes, the description of the characters is very good, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also very passionate. How did it become a daily show later [laughing][laughing][laughing]
The reason why the rating is low is mostly because the author is too lazy and will update one chapter a day, but the writing is still good. Just go to the bookshelf and eat ashes. I'll enjoy reading it once more.