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You are already great. Although there are a few flaws in your writing, you can just correct them. I hope you can produce better works.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, author, please come on! ! ! Two heroines, Ruri and Ninja! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's really super beautiful! So wonderful, so sweet! The characters are all well described without OOC, especially Sister Shinobu! ! ! (Crawling forward in a twisting manner) (Snarling) (Running forward) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Crawling forward in a twisting manner) (Snarling) (Sneaking forward) (Trying to stand up) (Running forward) (Falling to the ground) (Running crazily) In a word, it is worth entering.

Come on, author, it's a very nice book [sending my heart] [blowing kiss]

Beautiful, highly recommended, Xiao Liuli and Shinobu are very sweet, so cute

It's very good-looking, the characters are very restored, and the self-created plot is very interesting. The relationship with Shinobu is very smooth, and it makes up for all the regrets. It is very good, and it is not a brainless novel. The protagonist slowly grows up and has a sense of accomplishment. The background story of the protagonist is also interesting. I read it from Fujiwara Kiri's book. Come on, I think this one is more interesting than that one, but there is no emotional line between the immortal flowers. They are awkward and weird to be paired together, which gives people an inexplicable feeling. But except for this poisonous point, other parts are excellent enough and deserve full marks. Without this, it would be the icing on the cake.

The interaction between Xiao Liuli and Shinobu is really sweet! ! This is the sweetest relationship between two people I have ever read [Love], especially the extra story. Xiao Liuli really loves Ren, and Ren is extremely doting on Xiao Liuli! ! I kowtowed to my head, I really kowtowed to my head.

Although they are all alive, what should I do if Shinobu is snatched away from Giyu? Although if it were me, I would take Shinobu away, but I don't like the way she and I get along. It feels very twisted and a bit embarrassing. Then there is the follow-up episode. I didn't watch it. I just want to see everyone have their own destiny in the end and they are all still alive. So four stars. Keep up the good work, the author. The plot is still okay. I quite like the development of the plot. It's not too frustrating, but I think the recovery time is a bit long.

It's so difficult [I'm about to cry], but I finally found a Yuri who can tolerate my sister, and it's still finished [sending my heart]

The writing is readable, the emotional line is so-so, and the plot is okay, but for someone like me who has been killing fish in RT-Mart for thirty-three years, it is calm and it didn't touch my point. Overall rating: OK, 50/50, can pass the leisure time

It's really beautiful (○｀ε´○), please, more updates [crying]

Nice! The plot is well written. The protagonist is not too weak to feel happy, nor is it too strong or boring. I also like the emotional scene with Shinobu!

When will we be together? Get together soon! ! !

I want to ask if there are any other Demon Slayer Lily like this one [crying]

The character portrayed by the author is very suitable for the little protagonist of a farming novel in peacetime. However, in the end of the world when humanity is annihilated, if there is no golden finger like the protagonist, no one knows where the world will disappear. For example, the protagonist who had no patience to save the scene was also shattered in the first time. But thinking about the original work, no one had the time to save it. I can only say that the author has a kind heart, otherwise the character of the protagonist would be very suitable for the ending of be. The right time, place and people are all taken advantage of.

Oh my god, it's so sweet. I like this article😍 I just want to know the details between the two of them [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

There is a knife in the sugar, author, you are so cruel!

Haokan, quite rigorous to be honest, there is no OOC, but the name is a bit hasty. I didn't read it several times because of the name. Recently, I read Shuhuang and found it surprisingly good. I didn't read the extra chapter, and I felt that the final battle was enough. I originally thought that the extra chapter would be a daily post, but it turned out to be a little regretful.

I really like this book about the two female protagonists of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. I think it's very well written and I highly recommend it, but it's just a bit lacking in meat (*^ω^*)

The plot is not boring and interesting. It is slow in the early stage and the emotional line does not progress very quickly, but the plot in the middle is also interesting. The emotional line in the later stage is very sweet and basically ends without a knife and everyone survives.

It's my favorite plot

This book is beautifully written!

Pretty good, but hang in there. Looking forward to your future great articles. Like it, not bad. It's a bit short, I hope I can write more in the future.

Very good, let me play catch-up (∩ᄑ_ᄑ)⊃━☆Lonely and widowed, come on, author!

Very nice! Big cheers for the author!

Super exciting. Highly recommended.

So beautiful, a love letter in my dreams

Nothing to say but perfect.

Just like this type

Beautiful, very very beautiful! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Like][Like][Like]