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Very nice, not brainless and refreshing article

Except for the somewhat poisonous name of the game in the first chapter, it is very exciting, especially the description of the protagonist's abilities, a rare non-waste protagonist. After seeing the latest chapter, I would like to make two small suggestions: First, I hope that the protagonist moves as soon as possible. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's real-life safety is completely based on the idea of ​​the woman named Qin, and danger may occur at any time; second, for the big game guilds in reality, I feel that the protagonist is still too weak against them. For example, if the Mythical Guild dares to mess with the protagonist, the protagonist can completely make them unable to move through their status in the game. Now that I write it like this, I always feel a bit uncomfortable (all cats and dogs dare to touch the protagonist at will). I hope the author will seriously consider it and write more exciting content.

It's so good to write about real people. How can you not find you when you move in front of the country? Moreover, it was hinted at the beginning that various national consortiums have entered the field, saying that the world is not simple. When such an awesome character appears in the game, how could the country not look for you? Even if it does not suppress you, it will be tied to your interests. As the author's first book, it is indeed a masterpiece. It is very enjoyable to write.

This book is super good-looking, but some people may not like it when there is no unity at the beginning, but I think it can be written for thousands of chapters later. After the cultivation system is opened, it can become a fairy novel, and finally become the peak of the fairy world, return to reality, and the end of the world is coming (after all, the purpose of making this game should also be for the real world later) The world may undergo major changes, requiring humans to become stronger to cope with the future world), and all players will use their skills in the game to fight in real life again, and finally achieve peace in real life, life will gradually become unified, and then the real world may be unified. If you write according to this framework, you should be able to write a lot. If you add the number of words, it is possible to have tens of thousands of chapters. However, the author's combat power design is a bit broken. There are so many generals, counselors, buildings, women, etc., Which add more than one star to the people and soldiers in the territory. Not to mention one against ten, at least one against five. In the final battle, his elite soldiers are still the same as other people's elite soldiers, no difference. , A maximum of 1.5 Per dozen. I don't know why the setting is so strange. I keep completing tasks, and the reward bonuses are constantly increasing. It really accumulates and makes those soldiers and people really strong. Good soldiers should be close to third- and fourth-rate generals, and the people should also have other princes and Napu. Tong's elite soldiers are so strong (not the protagonist's), even an army of 200,000 ordinary people should be comparable to the 200,000 armies of other residents. The 200,000 army of the protagonist's elite soldiers should be worth at least 500,000, or even millions. One against five should not be a problem, and there are also battles among them. The formation, coordination and training are equivalent to the soldiers of the protagonist. They have the intensity of training, superb coordination, excellent equipment, skills (others also have them), and bonuses. There is really no problem with one against five, but the author's writing of combat power is very rubbish. There are so many bonuses that don't feel the same.

Very good. Online hegemony games can be regarded as high-quality products on Tomato. Great work.

Very beautiful, very very very very beautiful

I came across another masterpiece. Come on, the author.

It's rare to read a novel in Tomato.

A highly recommended online game novel. The early Three Kingdoms plot is also very well written.

It's quite interesting. The Yellow Turban Uprising gave me the feeling of watching a TV series. Attacking a city, defending a city, etc., My mind was filled with scenes of war. Of course, another suggestion is that you, the author, are suitable for writing novels without female protagonists.

Very exciting, with a strong sense of logic and clear history, very good!

It's pretty good. I think the content is quite engaging and exciting.

It's so beautiful that people can watch it.

This is one of the few novels that writes about game events. There are many novels about similar game worlds. The world text is very large, which makes it uncomfortable to read, because the balance of the world view is not very good. It is obvious that there is a kind of protagonist in it. I have a feeling about the world, and the balance in this book is very good, so this novel gets five stars.

The literary talent is super good, the content is also very rich, and the protagonist is not a virgin, so it is very good. But I still have some suggestions for the author 1. Control the player's power, especially Qin Linglong, and cannot let the player's power become the number one. It is best to have the palace's power first, the protagonist's own power second, and the player's power in order. 2. Control the tax of the player's sect. According to the tax regulations of the sect's power, the powerful ones can collect half of it, especially those who have enmity with the protagonist. 3 You don't need a female protagonist. If you want, it's best to only accept beauties from history, and don't let real-life beauties be the heroines, especially Zuo Xi and Qin Linglong 4 I hope that the protagonist will unify the earth and defeat the gods in the sky.

I've seen Chapter 910, and it's pretty good, but the author's awareness of lightning protection is not very high. For example, the protagonist uses an avatar to attack the heroine, and she looks different from him. Later, he also uses his avatar to apply sunscreen to the heroine. Friends with low defenses don't need to read it. There are quite a lot of big and small poisonous points, but after removing these poisonous points, the plot is quite interesting. And basically all the beauties in history have been collected, and now we are collecting beauties from the three realms step by step.

The literary talent is excellent, a high-scoring masterpiece, and later on, Yan Ran takes the credit. The poem is really apotheosis. If it is all written by the author himself, it is really... Awesome (without culture), five-star praise, not much to say.

The storyline is very attractive and the step-by-step development is very reasonable.

The content in the game is very nice. The plot with the two women outside the game is not very comfortable to watch, but it is not much written and I can barely accept it. I just don't know how the book lovers in the Northeast feel when they see their ancestors being slaughtered by the protagonist [Thinking] It's hard to imagine where the author's thoughts have gone in recent chapters. The Three Kingdoms' struggle for hegemony is only halfway through here. You can write anything else when it's over. As a result, as soon as the system of cultivating immortals was opened, its combat power immediately collapsed, and all the immortals were killed directly. Then why are you playing house with the princes? Wouldn't this just flip the table? The subject matter of the books has changed as I read, from online game hegemony stories to fantasy immortality stories.

This is a historical novel that suits my taste very well. Although it will turn into cultivating immortals in the later stage, at least I have read more than 100 chapters in the early stage which is quite good. It fits my view of this type of novel very well.

This book is indeed well written, and I enjoyed reading it. It's very difficult to name these ancient names alone. The author has also sent some map illustrations, as well as tactical analysis and tactical layout, which is really taxing on the brain. Give five stars to support the author. [Love][love]

I thought that my combat power was reduced, but I didn't expect that the gods, demons and human emperors would come out later. It is one of the few enjoyable articles. It can be seen that the author is knowledgeable, very to my taste, and logically follows historical events. Book lovers can try it. If you have other good books, you can recommend them.

Overall, it's pretty good. I feel like the plot of the historical beauty is dispensable. Sometimes it feels awkward to watch, but it's still handled well and there's nothing wrong with it. There was a slight sense of fragmentation before and after the opening of the training system. The plot suddenly moved forward ten times. It felt like rushing to start a cross-server battle. There were too many ideas and too anxious to get through the plot. The details could still be filled in.

Read more than a hundred chapters So far, it looks pretty good. The plot is not slow to advance, and the war starts very quickly, but it's a bit too fast, but it also avoids a lot of problems. Like the first leader of the Northern Expedition to establish the country, there were almost no players to help NPCs, and no one reported on them, so the on-site layout was very smooth. After the founding of the People's Republic of China, there was nothing like ordinary players during the second expedition. It was a bit like a stand-alone game. But overall it's pretty good, with micro-management, and the development speed is faster than many novels. It's rare that the protagonist Lu Bu has developed enough to rival him in combat power before even meeting him. Because of the wide-angle writing and occasional micro-manipulation, I can't see any minor glitches, but it also has less of a game atmosphere, which is better than having trolls shouting and irritating me all the time.

A very nice Three Kingdoms fanfic with a rigorous storyline. The first book I seriously followed this year.

The score of 9.1 Is low, which is much more enjoyable than ordinary online games, and the combat power has not collapsed. It includes the rise of heroes in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, the conflict between Chu and Han, etc. Famous generals and beauties from all eras gather together. Everything is explained reasonably through the online game, and it should be fully realistic in the later stage. For the time being, I have only found one bug. In the copy of Dong Zhuo's Rebellion, the author wrote that the protagonist joined the princes and Dong Zhuo camps in two identities. However, he may have later discovered that joining the Dong Zhuo camp was unnecessary, so he never mentioned this matter again, and directly promoted the princes camp in one line. It would be more interesting if two lines could be written together here. I give it a rating of 9.6.

What can I say, not bad. . Needless to say about the subject matter, this multi-fusion genre will definitely not be outdated. The author's writing skills are also good. It can be regarded as a harem novel. The content is also relaxed and interesting. There are still flaws in the setting but the details can be ignored. I've read Chapter 300, but it seems that I'm going to switch to the prehistoric direction later on, so I'm not very optimistic about it. I feel like it will be better towards immortality and fantasy. (I remember reading a book that was similar to Tongque Terrace + summoning female generals + online game skills. In comparison, it is no exaggeration to say that it is ten times better). It's worth watching if you like this kind of thing. .

458, Many, I saw the latest one. As mentioned above, I can't tell the difference between the fantasy Three Kingdoms and the online game Three Kingdoms. It feels a bit confusing. Maybe it's my problem. Having said that, it's quite interesting. The premise is that some parts should not be too serious, otherwise it will be a bit uncomfortable. As for novels, just take pictures and enjoy them. But it's really cool. The more I look at it, the more I like it. Haha, it's also a bit literary. It's that loyalty, well…. Multiple female protagonists, even though there is currently no real female protagonist, I feel like we can still consider a few [laughs]. In terms of speed, the front is okay, but the back may be sanctioned, so I'll write if it's too slow. Hmm... The update is a flaw [smile].

Very interesting, this is the online game lord Xiang novel I want to read! ! ! I have read a lot of books of the same genre recently, and either they are full of poisonous points or I have no idea what they are writing about. I hope the author will continue to work hard! The gift has been given.

The writing is very good. The author's writing style is good and his cultural background is very deep. He carefully checked the information and adapted it based on the plot of the late Eastern Han Dynasty. It is very reasonable. Especially the part about Yan Ran's victory and sealing the wolf to Juxu made me excited. It also gave me the offensive line of the battle, which won my heart. In addition to some characters and some incidents, they may not be good, but they are harmless. My review is five stars. I hope the author will work hard and not finish the work [laughs]