Harry Potter: My Wand Works Too Hard

It's okay, but there's one thing. The protagonist knows the plot for one moment and doesn't for the next. This is a serious failure. You might as well just write that the protagonist doesn't know Harry Potter at all. It's stupid to always write like he doesn't know anything even though he knows.

I put my pants in the refrigerator and became a cold pants person. I cut my trousers into pieces and became a trousers-remnant. I show off my pants, and I will become a person who shows off my pants from now on. I will throw away my pants, and I will become a wife's person from now on😭

The book is good-looking, I won't deny it, but it's four stars because it's the same as other fanfics, with a more novel setting added, but the essential content remains the same. If it was my first time to read a Harry Potter fanfic, I would like it very much, but the same content is novel once I read it, and it's okay the second time. After the third or fourth time, it's redundant, tasteless, and a pity to discard. If you want to see new content and have read a lot of fanfics, I don't recommend it. This is just for following the group. If you are interested in the protagonist's wand, don't read it. The wand is not the main plot. There may be some new content at the beginning, but there is not much difference when it comes to the trolls, who are still babysitters for the protagonist group. If you haven't read a few fanfics and would like to read them if you don't mind joining a group, this one is a good recommendation.

I just like this kind of cool writing with powerful golden fingers. It's beautiful.

The writing is very good. The author is planning to have a heroine without a heroine. I personally recommend a heroine without a heroine.

I thought there would be another Harry Potter novel with its own plot, but after seeing a few pictures, I felt very disappointed. I wanted to mess it up and get mixed up with the main characters. Doesn't this mean that it is just like the original novel? The setting of the protagonist is good, but that's it. The other plots are nothing new and interesting. Nowadays, fan Harry novels basically don't have their own original plots, and they just hang around with the protagonist. The effectiveness of the work is not that many people will want to read it! (This is some advice for the author) There is also the conflict of ideas between the protagonist and the protagonist group when you write it (if you lie down and make trouble with the protagonist group, it will become an extra person in the original plot, which is not novel)

Very good, come on I thought the author cut it. .

The plot is too long-winded. If the content was half as good as the introduction, I wouldn't have read more than twenty chapters. I skipped over half of them quickly because there was nothing that I could read slowly...

Quite boring. When writing a plot, just write it if it is the same as the original work. If it is different, write a special paragraph to explain the differences. I am a little confused about what you are writing. Are you writing your own story or helping readers distinguish the original work? Then there are too many psychological activities of the male protagonist. Every time he wants to get involved in the protagonist's group, he always has a lot of psychological descriptions to find reasons for himself, and the reasons are too blunt. It gives people a feeling of forced participation. And what is shown in the article is that he does not interact with the protagonist group at all in daily life, but when it comes to important plots, he forcefully joins them.

It feels like it lacks distinctiveness compared to other books. It's not great but it's readable. But if salty fish is your characteristic, you were overthrown by yourself halfway through, and you said that you considered Harry a friend, and suddenly you couldn't let go, which made you quite speechless. Farewell.