Harry Potter: My Wand Works Too Hard

It's okay, but there's one thing. The protagonist knows the plot for one moment and doesn't for the next. This is a serious failure. You might as well just write that the protagonist doesn't know Harry Potter at all. It's stupid to always write like he doesn't know anything even though he knows.

I put my pants in the refrigerator and became a cold pants person. I cut my trousers into pieces and became a trousers-remnant. I show off my pants, and I will become a person who shows off my pants from now on. I will throw away my pants, and I will become a wife's person from now on😭

The book is good-looking, I won't deny it, but it's four stars because it's the same as other fanfics, with a more novel setting added, but the essential content remains the same. If it was my first time to read a Harry Potter fanfic, I would like it very much, but the same content is novel once I read it, and it's okay the second time. After the third or fourth time, it's redundant, tasteless, and a pity to discard. If you want to see new content and have read a lot of fanfics, I don't recommend it. This is just for following the group. If you are interested in the protagonist's wand, don't read it. The wand is not the main plot. There may be some new content at the beginning, but there is not much difference when it comes to the trolls, who are still babysitters for the protagonist group. If you haven't read a few fanfics and would like to read them if you don't mind joining a group, this one is a good recommendation.

I just like this kind of cool writing with powerful golden fingers. It's beautiful.

The writing is very good. The author is planning to have a heroine without a heroine. I personally recommend a heroine without a heroine.

I thought there would be another Harry Potter novel with its own plot, but after seeing a few pictures, I felt very disappointed. I wanted to mess it up and get mixed up with the main characters. Doesn't this mean that it is just like the original novel? The setting of the protagonist is good, but that's it. The other plots are nothing new and interesting. Nowadays, fan Harry novels basically don't have their own original plots, and they just hang around with the protagonist. The effectiveness of the work is not that many people will want to read it! (This is some advice for the author) There is also the conflict of ideas between the protagonist and the protagonist group when you write it (if you lie down and make trouble with the protagonist group, it will become an extra person in the original plot, which is not novel)

Very good, come on I thought the author cut it. .

The plot is too long-winded. If the content was half as good as the introduction, I wouldn't have read more than twenty chapters. I skipped over half of them quickly because there was nothing that I could read slowly...

It feels like it lacks distinctiveness compared to other books. It's not great but it's readable. But if salty fish is your characteristic, you were overthrown by yourself halfway through, and you said that you considered Harry a friend, and suddenly you couldn't let go, which made you quite speechless. Farewell.

Quite boring. When writing a plot, just write it if it is the same as the original work. If it is different, write a special paragraph to explain the differences. I am a little confused about what you are writing. Are you writing your own story or helping readers distinguish the original work? Then there are too many psychological activities of the male protagonist. Every time he wants to get involved in the protagonist's group, he always has a lot of psychological descriptions to find reasons for himself, and the reasons are too blunt. It gives people a feeling of forced participation. And what is shown in the article is that he does not interact with the protagonist group at all in daily life, but when it comes to important plots, he forcefully joins them.

The progress is too fast. The protagonist has nothing to do of his own. Everything revolves around Harry and the others. There is no new idea and hesitation. I only read about 20 pictures and I have already reached the position of the fire dragon. The progress is too fast. The author probably doesn't know what he wants to write.

It turns out that the small wand is much easier to use than the elder wand.

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Sane author

Well, how to say. Generally speaking, everything in writing must have a purpose. What the protagonist wants to do is arranged by the author. Once the character is created, there must be a suitable reason for what the author wants him to do. That is, the protagonist's actions must have a driving force, so that readers can have hope while reading the article. Otherwise, they will be confused and bored. When it comes to fan fiction, there are those who want to make up for regrets, and those who want to continue the story, those who feel they haven't seen enough, or those who particularly like a certain character. They have to have a clearer purpose, otherwise they really can't stand it.

How should I put it, I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do. He didn't want to hang out with the Saviors and Voldemort. Shouldn't he work harder to learn magic? How else would it succeed? Even if you have learned it, you can pretend that you have not learned it. Generally speaking, if you don't form a dark wizard society in it, no matter what, it won't be a big deal. Even if you are in the limelight, nothing big will happen.

I wonder if this protagonist will be inferior to ordinary people after being disarmed. After all, the only thing powerful is the magic wand, and the protagonist is just a magic power bank.

From the beginning, I couldn't say that I wanted to be in the spotlight, but in the end, I was just like a nanny. The main character is your dad. You haven't fought so hard for your dad, have you? [Thinking] You have to have your own ideas. Apart from the fact that there is one more person than the original work, it is the author's personal interpretation of the blockbuster movie. Samsung is all for wand plug-ins.

The introduction said that I wanted to show off, but the more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became. . The pure introduction is a scam. If you want to stay away from the main plot and the protagonist group, why not not contact the protagonist. Anyway, you know that you are the protagonist and you will not die. Just like the chapter about the troll, why do you have to chase after the troll, the invisibility cloak, why do you have to travel at night? After all, the protagonist was also an adult before time travel. He seems to be indecisive and has the mentality of a child. I won't give a low score either, Samsung is just right.

I only looked at the front, not the back. But I want to ask a question: Neville Longbottom's parents seemed to have been killed by Bella and the others. According to common sense, Neville should be afraid of the protagonist, but not from the beginning, not even when he was sorted?

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Very good, good luck to the author!

Big cheers for the author! [Blowing kiss]

Guess what I came here to do? Well, yes, I came here to urge the update! Too little, not enough to see (*≧ｍ≦*)!

It's good to read, and the main character is in Hufflepuff. There are really not many books written about this house. And it's really well written

If it really doesn't work, let's fall in love with the little magic wand. Please @ Fearless Elephant @shirtQingcheng Ten can add more sparkle to the male protagonist. If it is a magic wand from beginning to end, it will give people the feeling that the male protagonist is too useless. You can give the male protagonist a little more personality Ⅶ One last thing! ! ! The little wand is so cute, how can you say no to the little wand! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's beautiful, I like it so much, I'm done chasing it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It feels very comfortable to read, but the author is too short [crying]. Chapters cannot be graded or graded.

Looks great, cheers!

Where is the author, and where are you!